Sorry, but that is rubbish. Of course you can redact personal info. There are thousands of examples on here of redacted documents. You only need to redact your name and address, email or phone number. Everything else is not important as far was redacting is concerned. If you want to redact the PCN number and your VRM, then you can also do that but it really does not make a difference overall.
I need to see what they have provided as their evidence that they claim makes the land relevant. I need to see all documentation for that including the map they claim that are using as reference.
This is VERY important that we get to see this:
Please also see a full explanation of why we may pursue the registered keeper under Schedule 4 of PoFA 2012 in Section C of our evidence pack. The Stansted Airport byelaws do not impose a penalty for vehicles parking within Southgate Park. We have included in section E a map showing the boundary of Stansted Airport, from which it is clear the area occupied by Southagte Park, outlined in yellow, is not part of the Airport. This map is the most recent version and was submitted to the High Court last year, as evidenced by the link provided in section E. In light of this, the site is not excluded by the definitions laid out in paragraph 3 of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 and as such is considered Relevant Land. • Appeal points not addressed As demonstrated in section E, we addressed the appellant’s points regarding the airport byelaws.