How does this sound as a response?
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I am appealing this parking charge as the keeper of vehicle *reg*.
The Notice to Keeper is non-compliant with the requirements of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 Schedule 4 Paragraph 9, including, but not limited to, being served outside of the relevant period contrary to paragraph 9 (4). The presumed delivery date would be the 16th January 2026, 51 days after the day following the end of the parking period, exceeding the 14 days permitted for the relevant period stipulated by paragraph 9 (5).
There is no obligation for me to provide you with the identity of the driver, and I will not be doing so.
I await your confirmation that this appeal is upheld, the parking charge is cancelled, and that you will cease processing and destroy any of my personal information held by you.
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Thanks again!