Is this ok as they're going to reject it anyway?
I am appealing this charge as the registered keeper as your notice is non compliant with PoFA 2012.
Schedule 4 paragraph 9(1) states: A notice which is to be relied on as a notice to keeper for the purposes of paragraph 6(1)(b) is given in accordance with this paragraph if the following requirements are met:
(2) The notice must
(a) specify the vehicle, the relevant land on which it was parked and the period of parking to which the notice relates.
There is no period of parking given. A single timestamp is not sufficient.
Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(f) of PoFA requires that, amongst other things, the NTK warn the keeper that the parking operator is required to comply with all aspects of schedule 4 in order to rely on it.
Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(f) of PoFA requires that the notice must state that 'the creditor will, if all applicable conditions under this Schedule are met, have the right to recover from the keeper so much of that amount that remains unpaid'.
The NTK does not fully comply with all the requirements of PoFA 2012. Partial or even substantial compliance is not sufficient, therefore PPS are unable to hold the keeper of the vehicle liable for the charge.