Dear Sir / Madam,
Thank you for your letter dated 27th January 2026.
I have duly noted its contents.
In previous correspondence I have already stated that I am the vehicle keeper and that I would not be nominating a driver as there is no legal requirement to do this - that firmly remains the case.
In your latest letter you appear to claim the ability to move liability from the unknown driver onto the keeper through the use of PoFA - I accept that this can be done but only when the relevant requirements of PoFA are satisfied by the parking operator.
Ironically, you actually specify this yourself in your own boilerplate response where you state that application of PoFA only occurs 'subject to our complying with the applicable conditions under schedule 4 of that Act.'
In this instance, your PCN issued via a postal Notice to Keeper does not 'comply with the applicable conditions' set out under schedule 4 of the Act.
In particular, the requirements of paragraph 9(2)(e) are not met - para. 9(2)(e) requires specific mandatory wording immediately followed by a two limbed invitation to the vehicle keeper - the wording of the two limbs is again regarded as mandatory wording and the two limbs should be linked together with the conjunction 'or' which then sets out a legal choice for the keeper to make.
In the Parking Eye issued PCN the mandatory 'invitation to the keeper' element is missing - para. 9(2)(e)(i) and 9(2)(e)(ii) set out the requirements of each limb - you will see that your PCN contains no such invitation to the keeper 'to pay the unpaid parking charges' - the first limb is not stated on the PCN (neither is the required word 'or') and, as a result, the legal choice is never presented to the keeper in line with the requirements of schedule 4 - this is fatal to PE's reliance on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper.
In order to be compliant with para 9(2)(e) the following wording must be present in a single paragraph or sentence;
Parking Eye (the Creditor) does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver.
The keeper is now invited to pay the unpaid parking charges OR if the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to notify the creditor of the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and to pass the notice on to the driver.
I accept that some elements of para 9(2)(e) are present in your PCN (in a mixed up manner) but, unfortunately, para. 9(2)(e)(i) is clearly not present and as a result the mandatory legal choice is never presented.
The wording of schedule 4 is clear; total compliance is needed with para. 9(2) in order for the PCN to be regarded as meeting the legal requirements of the schedule.
I am the vehicle keeper and I maintain that I am not liable and that PoFA cannot be used, in this particular instance, to transfer liability to me.
Many thanks,
xxxxx xxxxxxxx