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Hello all I have received an MCOL from Smart Parking / DCB Legal. 
Do i need to reply in legal jargon.

There particulars of claim:
1.The defendent (D) is indebted to the Claimant (C) for Parking Charge(s) (PC) issued to vehicle ******** at *******
2. The date of contravention is ****** and the D was issued with PC(s) by the Claimant.
3. The Defendant is pursued as the driver of the vehicle for breach of the terms on the signs (the contract). Reason insufficient paid time.
4. In the alternative the defendant is pursued as the keeper pursuant to POFA 2012 schedual 4.
AND THE CLAIMANT CLAIMS
1.£165 being the total of the PC(s) and damages
2.Interest at a rate of 8% per annum pursuant to s.69 of the County Courts Act 1984 from the date hereof at a daily rate of £.02 until judgment or sooner payment.
3.Costs and court fees



thank you in advance

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Please show us the claim form with all dates and details intact, just redact your name and address, claim number, and MCOL password.

READ THIS FIRST - Private Parking Charges Forum guide - this advises on how to upload images properly.

It would also be useful for you to confirm if you have engaged in any correspondence with Smart prior to the issuing of this claim.

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More importantly, what is the issue date of the claim?

As long as it has not been more than 19 days since the issue date of the claim, you can either submit an Acknowledgement of service (AoS) and get another 14 days on top of that to extend the deadline for submitting your defence.

If you want to submit an AoS then follow the instructions in this linked PDF:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xvqu3bask5m0zir/money-claim-online-How-to-Acknowledge.pdf?dl=0

Otherwise, here is the defence and link to the draft order that goes with it. You only need to edit your name and the claim number. You sign the defence by typing your full name for the signature and date it. There is nothing to edit in the draft order.

When you're ready you combine both documents as a single PDF attachment and send as an attachment in an email to claimresponses.cnbc@justice.gov.uk and CC in yourself. The claim number must be in the email subject field and in the body of the email just put: "Please find attached the defence and draft order in the matter of Smart Parking Ltd v [your full name] Claim no.: [claim number]."

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IN THE COUNTY COURT
Claim No: [Claim Number]

BETWEEN:

Smart Parking Ltd

Claimant

- and -

[Defendant's Full Name]


Defendant



DEFENCE

1. The Defendant denies the claim in its entirety. The Defendant asserts that there is no liability to the Claimant and that no debt is owed. The claim is without merit and does not adequately disclose any comprehensible cause of action.

2. There is a lack of precise detail in the Particulars of Claim (PoC) in respect of the factual and legal allegations made against the Defendant such that the PoC do not comply with CPR 16.4.

3. The Defendant is unable to plead properly to the PoC because:

(a) The contract referred to is not detailed or attached to the PoC in accordance with CPR PD 16(7.5);

(b) The PoC do not state the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is/are relied on;

(c) The PoC do not adequately set out the reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts the defendant has breached the contract (or contracts)

(d) The PoC do not state with sufficient particularity exactly where the breach occurred, the exact time when the breach occurred and how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked before the parking charge was allegedly incurred;

(e) The PoC do not state precisely how the sum claimed is calculated, including the basis for any statutory interest, damages, or other charges;

(f) The PoC do not state what proportion of the claim is the parking charge and what proportion is damages;

(g) The PoC do not provide clarity on whether the Defendant is sued as the driver or the keeper of the vehicle, as the claimant cannot plead alternative causes of action without specificity.

4. The Defendant attaches to this defence a copy of a draft order approved by a district judge at another court. The court struck out the claim of its own initiative after determining that the Particulars of Claim failed to comply with CPR 16.4. The judge noted that the claimant had failed to:

(i) Set out the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions relied upon;

(ii) Adequately explain the reasons why the defendant was allegedly in breach of contract;

(iii) Provide separate, detailed Particulars of Claim as permitted under CPR PD 7C.5.2(2).

(iv) The court further observed that, given the modest sum claimed, requiring further case management steps would be disproportionate and contrary to the overriding objective. Accordingly, the judge struck out the claim outright rather than permitting an amendment.

5. The Defendant submits that the same reasoning applies in this case and invites the court to adopt a similar approach by striking out the claim for the Claimant’s failure to comply with CPR 16.4.

Statement of truth

I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true. I understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without an honest belief in its truth.

Signed:


Date:

Draft Order for the defence
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Hi this is claim form

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So, with an issue date of 23rd May, you have until 4pm on Wednesday 11th June to submit the defence I have provided above. If you need extra time, then follow the instructions on how to submit an AoS and you will then have a deadline of 4pm on Wednesday 25th June for your defence.
Never argue with stupid people. They will drag you down to their level and then beat you with experience” - Mark Twain

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Thank you very much for this, most helpful.  Can I ask what is the draft order for do I need to include this in any way?

kind regards

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Otherwise, here is the defence and link to the draft order that goes with it. You only need to edit your name and the claim number. You sign the defence by typing your full name for the signature and date it. There is nothing to edit in the draft order.

When you're ready you combine both documents as a single PDF attachment and send as an attachment in an email to claimresponses.cnbc@justice.gov.uk and CC in yourself. The claim number must be in the email subject field and in the body of the email just put: "Please find attached the defence and draft order in the matter of Smart Parking Ltd v [your full name] Claim no.: [claim number]."

Not sure which bit of the above is not clear.
Never argue with stupid people. They will drag you down to their level and then beat you with experience” - Mark Twain

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Sorry missed that bit, thanks!
One final point, on the online MCOL, would you recommend filling this out with the defence and then emailing the above email address as well with the defence and draft order?  Thanks.
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No, do it by email as advised.

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Sorry missed that bit, thanks!
One final point, on the online MCOL, would you recommend filling this out with the defence and then emailing the above email address as well with the defence and draft order?  Thanks.

If you do that, you are screwed. Follow the advice and don't try to overthink this.
Never argue with stupid people. They will drag you down to their level and then beat you with experience” - Mark Twain

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Out of interest why would I not reply via the money claim online site as the case is all on there? 
I was looking at the MCOL site and it says this "Important points:
Don't just email:
You should not usually reply via email unless the claimant has specifically agreed to this method of communication. "

Sorry to be a pain but can anyone advise if I should respond back on the MCOL and email or just email.  Thank you in advance.
« Last Edit: June 06, 2025, 04:42:35 pm by poppapole »

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The defence webform is very limited in character count, removes ALL formatting and presents what's left as a wall of text that destroys the thrust of your defence. If you want to overthink this or doubt our advice, feel free to screw up your defence.
Never argue with stupid people. They will drag you down to their level and then beat you with experience” - Mark Twain

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Letter came today from court saying I have not replied to the claim for so must pay £300 odd pound?

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Letter came today from court saying I have not replied to the claim for so must pay £300 odd pound?
What letter?
Please post it here so we can see it too.

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