ticket for parking at a hospital

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I haven't fully read it yet as there is little formatting to break up such large walls of text. However, looking at the points, you should order them as such:

1) The Notice to Keeper is not compliant with the POFA 2012 – no keeper liability.

2) The operator has not shown that the individual who it is pursuing is in fact the driver who may have been potentially liable for the charge

3)  There are no ground markings at this site to delineate bays where a driver can and cannot park.
 
4) Misleading and unclear signage 

5) No evidence of Landowner Authority

6) No standing or authority to pursue charges nor form contracts with drivers 

I suggest you edit the document to make it more readable by inserting suitable paragraph breaks.

thanks, it was just a draft, i just wanted to check the wording and arguements were ok. if you do get a chance i would be ever so grateful. thanks in advance. when i get a chance ill change the order of the points as you suggested

I'm sorry. I simply do not have the time to read through even the first point which runs to 5 pages without breaks. I note that there is mention of "OPS" indicating that you have simply copied and pasted from other appeals without even checking it.

You have to put a bit more effort into it and we will advise as necessary but please don't expect us to do your proof-reading.

It'd be wise for you to do some formatting before we take a look. As @b789 notes, there are a complete lack of paragraphs, which makes it appear as a wall of text, and therefore hard to read. You should try to make it as readable as possible for the assessor.

I also notice reference to a few URLs - where you do this, you should ensure that any content you want to draw attention to from that website is included in your appeal - you should work on the assumption that the assessor will not click any links.

https://1drv.ms/w/s!AkS0W5E6rdFJwnvUc1aj1EApdo0t?e=598ujt

is this better, sorry i have very little time, as im a full time carer, and have 3 children.
not making excuses, just literally no time.
if someone can just let me know if it makes sense.