If you can show us a draft of what you have so far we can offer feedback.
Ive left it a bit late due to some unforeseen issues the last couple of days. Here is a draft:
Dear POPLA Assessor,
I am formally appealing the Parking Charge Notice issued by PPS at Bushey Medical Centre. This charge is unjustified, and I request its cancellation for the following reasons:
1. Use of Disabled Bay with a Displayed Blue Badge
I parked in a designated disabled bay, displaying my father’s valid Blue Badge in accordance with all requirements. Due to limited space left by the adjacent vehicle, I positioned my car at a slight angle to facilitate my elderly father’s safe and accessible exit. This minor adjustment was necessary given the bay’s restrictive layout and adjacent parking constraints.
2. Inadequate Signage Specifying Parking Requirements
The signage directly above and around the bay where I was parked does not explicitly state that vehicles must park strictly within the bay lines or that angled parking constitutes a violation. The only relevant signage pertains to parking on yellow lines or obstructing pathways, neither of which applied to my vehicle’s position. Based on the signage provided, no enforceable terms relate to the alleged contravention, making this charge baseless.
As indicated in the attached images, the only signage near my vehicle, accessible to a blue badge holder, mentions a charge for parking in a disabled bay without a visible blue badge. I, too, hold a blue badge due to my own mobility issues, and it is unreasonable to expect a disabled motorist to cross the car park to review other signs. The alleged contravention of "Parking in No Parking area" is unsupported by any definition of "No Parking areas" in the signage. Additionally, other signage mentions charges for parking on yellow lines or causing obstructions, neither of which were relevant in this case. I am being accused of neither. These signs are also only strictly positioned in locations around the car park where there are double yellow lines- there are no double yellow lines in or around the bays where I parked.
A motorist cannot be held to non-existent contractual terms.
3. Lack of Obstruction and Minimal Duration
My vehicle was parked responsibly to ensure accessibility without obstructing other bays or paths. I was inside the facility for under five minutes to accompany my father and did not cause any obstruction to other vehicles or access routes.
In summary, my actions were compliant with the visible conditions at the site, ensuring both safety and accessibility. Given these facts, I request this charge be canceled as it fails to meet POPLA’s requirements for contractual clarity and enforceability.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,