Ive done some cleaning and further corrected, referenced both guidelines just to see what they can say
I am the registered keeper of the vehicle and I herby dispute your 'Parking Charge'. I deny any liability or contractual agreement.
I note the allegation / contravention stated is Your vehicle was not authorised to park. I hearby put you on the strict burden of proof to demonstrate the vehicle was parked, CCTV images of an entry and exit from a road are not evidence of a vehicle being parked. It simply indicates a vehicle passed through a given point at a specific time. It cannot be assumed simply a vehicle entering the vehicle must have parked.
It is also noted the Notice to keeper shows no parking time, merely two images of a number plate of the vehicle in question. There is no connection demonstrated with the car park in question. For the avoidance of doubt the entry/exit point is in the town centre where mark public car parking spaces exist and all the roads are a similar road design. There is no evidence to support the road itself is a car park.
The Notice to keeper states: On the 15/07/2025 the vehicle entered at 17:29:29 and departed at 17:45:30. The times do not equate any to any single evidence of parking period. Since there is no evidence of actual parking times, this would fail the requirements of POFA 2012 paragraph 9(2)(a)
The signage at the entry does not comply with the BPA code of practice Appendix B - If there are any previous allowances made for this by the BPA, please provide evidence of the same.
The following non-compliance of the part of ECP is noted;
1) The Notice to Keeper does not meet PoFA requirements. The NTK does not fully comply with ALL requirements of the PoPA 2012, the keeper cannot be held liable for the charge. Partial or even substantial compliance is not sufficient. There is no admission as to who was driving and no inference or assumptions can be drawn. ECP has relied on contract law allegations of breach against the driver only. The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have been the driver, nor pursued. The notice to keeper can only hold the driver liable for which the registered keeper is not liable for.
2) Inadequate signage, Version 1.1 of the BPA code of practice point 3.1.1 requires an entrance sign to be displayed at the entrance to any said car park. I note as the registered keeper a single sign exists on the right hand side and no sign exist on entry on the left hand site. The location is a road for heavy good vehicles and delivery vehicles which simply by driving out of the road would obscure the sign to the right. With no sign on the entry road to the left side to which traffic drives given we are in England it would be non compliant with BPA rules but also unreasonable to assume every driver must have read the sign to the right.
3) The signage used by ECP indicated a parking sign with a P in a blue font, its noted it states authorised staff and visitor vehicles only. The road itself is part of a number of passage ways in the city centre. The interpretation by the average person would indicate the parking bays themselves are controlled and not the act of entering and leaving the road. ECP relies on implied consent, the signage does not stipulate the act of entering the road and moving in traffic or being stationary on the road but not parked in any of the bays is a breach of the rules. The registered keeper highlights the signage should state controlled entry zone, only authorised staff and visitors.
4) The information available to the registered keeper indicated the vehicle did not enter any parking bay and was stationary awaiting traffic to move from a delivery vehicle in front of them.
5) the entrance sign also fails BPA code of practice 3.1.2 (b) with no details of payments on the entrance. The act of a vehicle entering, not parking and therefore having no reason to review any of the signage for parking bays would fall foul to inadequate information.
6) The BPA code of practice V1.0 Annex A.1 the signage on entry fails to comply with the requitement if public parking is not welcome then it must be made clear. The statement authorised staff and visitor vehicles only does not state entry to the road is not permissible or the zone is controlled for entry. it is noted non of the text from the Group 1 in table A.1 is found on the sign.
7) The BPA code of practice V1.0 Annex 2.2 states the signs should be placed so that its reasonable by the driver without needing to look away from the road ahead. With no sign on the entry section on the left hand side, its not in compliance with the BPA code.
8) The entry sign would also fall foul of The BPA code of practice V1.0 Table B.1 types of controlled land, no-stopping, the entry signs should state no stopping. The sign fails to comply with the requirement.
While I trust you will cancel this charge notice, I do intend as the registered keeper to vigorously defend this matter and pursue adverse costs as a result of its actions.