how does something like this sound? I was thinking of adding lack of land authority as welL?
I am writing in response to the operator's evidence regarding the above-referenced Parking Charge Notice (PCN). I wish to reaffirm my appeal on the basis that the Notice to Keeper (NtK) is non-compliant with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA), specifically Schedule 4, Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i). As a result, keeper liability cannot be established.
While the operator asserts general compliance with PoFA, such assertions are insufficient. The law requires full compliance with all PoFA requirements for liability to transfer to the registered keeper. Partial or substantial compliance does not meet this threshold. In this case, the NtK falls short of the statutory standard.
Paragraph 9(2)(e) of PoFA specifies that the NtK must:
“state that the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper... to pay the unpaid parking charges” (as per subparagraph (i)).
A critical requirement of this provision is the explicit need to "invite the keeper to pay the unpaid parking charges." This is not optional; it is a clear legislative directive. While the use of the word "invite" is not mandatory, the NtK must include equivalent language that conveys an unmistakable invitation to pay. Merely informing the keeper of the charge or providing payment methods does not satisfy this requirement.
In this instance, the operator’s NtK fails to explicitly invite me, as the keeper, to pay the charges. Instead, it merely provides information about the charge. This omission is a direct breach of Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) and renders the NtK non-compliant.
The operator may point to compliance with other parts of PoFA, such as Paragraph 9(2)(b) regarding the specified amount of the charge. However, compliance with certain sections does not excuse non-compliance with others. Full adherence to all relevant provisions is required to establish keeper liability. The operator’s failure to address this fundamental non-compliance undermines their claim of PoFA adherence.
As the NtK does not meet the statutory requirements of PoFA, the operator cannot lawfully establish keeper liability. Consequently, this PCN is unenforceable against me as the registered keeper.
I respectfully urge the POPLA assessor to carefully review this specific point of non-compliance. The explicit invitation to pay is not a trivial detail but a crucial legal requirement. Overlooking this omission would result in an incorrect assessment of the operator’s adherence to PoFA.
For these reasons, I kindly request that my appeal be upheld and the PCN cancelled.