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Subject: PCN [number] – Formal Keeper Appeal
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am the registered keeper of vehicle [VRM].
I dispute your Parking Charge Notice.
Your Notice to Keeper fails to comply with the mandatory requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 and therefore you have not established keeper liability.
In particular (but not limited to):
You have failed to specify the required period of parking as required by Schedule 4 paragraph 9(2)(a). Merely stating observation times is insufficient.
Your notice does not contain fully compliant keeper liability wording required by the Act.
The alleged observation period of approximately six minutes also fails to allow the mandatory grace periods required under the British Parking Association Code of Practice.
As you have not met the strict statutory conditions, liability cannot be transferred from the driver to the keeper.
For the avoidance of doubt:
The driver has not been identified.
I am under no obligation to name the driver and will not be doing so.
Please now either:
Cancel the Parking Charge Notice, or
Provide a POPLA verification code so that I may refer the matter to Parking on Private Land Appeals.
I do not consent to debt recovery action while this charge is in dispute.
Yours faithfully,
[Name]
Registered Keeper
