Can you please check my draft appeal? Does it look fine or should I amend it?
I appeal as the keeper of the vehicle. The driver, on the date in question, was authorized to park at the location as they were patrons of the leisure center, as evidenced by [provide evidence].
The driver made their best endeavors to comply with the system and entered the vehicle details, and can only think the iPad/device signal/software failed, which is out of the driver’s control.
Your NtK failed to fully comply with the strict requirements of PoFA because you failed to include the required invitation for the keeper to pay the charge as required in PoFA 9(2)(e)(i). There is no legal obligation for me to name the driver, and I will not be doing so. Please cancel this PCN and save us both time and money, or issue me a POPLA code where you will have it confirmed that you cannot hold me, the keeper, liable.
Should you obtain the registered keeper's data from the DVLA without reasonable cause, please take this as formal notice that I reserve the right to sue your company and the landowner/principal, for a sum not less than £250 for any Data Protection Act breach. Your aggressive business practice and unwarranted threat of court for the ordinary matter of a driver using my car without causing any obstruction nor offense, has caused significant distress to me.
I do not give you consent to process data relating to me or this vehicle. I deny liability for any sum at all, and you must consider this letter a Section 10 Notice under the Data Protection Act. You are required to respond in writing to the address below within 21 days. I have kept proof of submission of this appeal and look forward to your reply.