1. Failure to Specify the "Relevant Land" The Notice to Keeper (NTK) identifies the location of the alleged contravention as "Epsom High Street." However, the car park in question is not located on High Street; both the entrance and exit are situated on Station Approach. Under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA), a notice must accurately specify the "relevant land" on which the vehicle was parked. By providing an incorrect location, NCP has failed to meet the strict requirements of PoFA 2012, and therefore cannot transfer liability for this charge to me, the registered keeper.
2. Non-Compliance with PoFA 2012 (Delivery Date) Furthermore, I challenge the validity of this notice regarding the timeline of service. For a notice to be PoFA-compliant where no ticket was fixed to the vehicle, it must be delivered to the keeper within 14 days of the incident. Given the date of the incident (03/01/2026) and the date of sending (14/01/2026), the notice did not arrive within the statutory 14-day window. This constitutes a further failure to meet the requirements necessary to invoke keeper liability.
3. Consideration Period and Lack of Contract The evidence provided shows a total stay of only 14 minutes. According to the BPA Code of Practice, operators must allow a sufficient "consideration period" for a driver to enter a car park, find a parking space, and read the terms and conditions on the signage to decide whether to stay. A 14-minute window is entirely consistent with a driver entering the site, finding the terms unacceptable or the site unsuitable, and subsequently exiting. No contract was ever entered into, and no parking "breach" occurred.
As NCP has failed to comply with the requirements of PoFA 2012 and the BPA Code of Practice, I request that this charge be cancelled immediately.
should i remove point 2 ?