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In the County Court at Romford
Claim No:xxxxxxxxxxx
Between:
HORIZON PARKING LIMITED (Claimant)
–and–
XXXXX (Defendant)
 Introduction
 1. I, XXXXX, being the Defendant in this matter, make this statement in response to the Witness Statement of Deanne Nevers dated 1st July 2026. The facts stated herein are within my own knowledge except where otherwise indicated.
 2. I respectfully request that the Court dismiss this claim in its entirety. The Claimant is attempting to enforce an unfair, disproportionate parking charge alongside artificially inflated, legally unrecoverable administrative fees.
### 1. Fundamental Lack of Standing and Authority
 3. In Paragraph 3 of her statement, the Claimant’s witness explicitly admits that the Claimant is *not authorised to disclose the landowner agreement* governing the site at Tesco Leyton. The Claimant relies entirely on assertions of a valid contract.
 4. The Claimant misapplies One Parking Solution Ltd v Wilshaw [2021]. In Wilshaw, the explicit lack of authority was an issue raised late by a District Judge sua sponte (of his own motion) without giving the parking operator a fair chance to respond. In the present case, the Defendant explicitly challenges the Claimant's strict legal capacity and standing to issue and litigate claims in its own name at this specific location.
 5. A commercial agreement must convey the specific right to assign a debt and initiate legal proceedings in the operator’s name. By actively withholding the contract under the guise of "commercial sensitivity", the Claimant fails to discharge its burden of proof to demonstrate it possesses the explicit corporate locus standi required to bring this claim.
### 2. Disproportionate and Unfair Contractual Terms
 6. The Claimant asserts that the vehicle exceeded the 1-hour maximum stay limit by 37 minutes on 14/09/2024. However, under Section 62 of the *Consumer Rights Act 2015*, a contractual term is unfair if, contrary to the requirement of good faith, it causes a significant imbalance in the parties' rights to the detriment of the consumer.
 7. The consumer, entering a busy retail supermarket car park (Tesco Leyton), is subjected to automated ANPR tracking from the exact split-second of entry to the exit boundary. This completely fails to factor in standard operational realities, such as:
 * Time spent navigating traffic within the car park to locate an available space.
 * Time spent queuing to exit the site back onto a busy main road (825 High Road, Leyton).
 8. Demanding a severe financial penalty for a minor deviation within a busy commercial environment creates a gross imbalance under Section 62, rendering the core restriction unfair and unenforceable.
### 3. Artificial Inflation of the Claim (Abuse of Process)
 9. In their Schedule of Losses, the Claimant seeks a judgment sum that includes a baseline parking charge of £70.00, an additional £10.00 administrative charge, and a further claim of *£70.00 for "additional costs"*.
 10. This secondary £70.00 charge is a transparent attempt at double recovery and an abuse of civil court process. The baseline operational costs of managing a parking enforcement business—including debt letters and standard administrative processing—are already factored directly into the primary £70.00 charge itself.
 11. The Claimant’s own exhibited case law, One Parking Solution Ltd v Wilshaw [2021], extensively details instances where courts have heavily scrutinized and struck out parking claims where arbitrary debt collection and administrative markups were tacked onto the principal sum. The inclusion of these completely unparticularised "additional costs" serves only to distort the small claims system and artificially inflate the claim value.
### 4. Flawed Witness Evidence
 12. The witness statement submitted by Deanne Nevers is highly formulaic, generic, and entirely transactional. Ms. Nevers is an employee of a professional legal services firm based in Warrington, miles away from the site. She possesses zero personal, first-hand knowledge of the physical environment, localized traffic patterns, or the specific visibility/obscurity of the signage layout at the Tesco Leyton site on the date of the alleged breach.
 13. Her statement consists almost entirely of generic legal arguments and aggressive template assertions dismissing the Defendant's case as "internet-sourced". It fails to establish any credible, direct factual evidence regarding the specific parking event.
### Conclusion & Order Sought
 14. The Claimant has failed to provide a copy of its chain of authority to litigate, relies on unfair contractual terms that breach consumer protection law, and has actively abused the court process by tacking on duplicate, fabricated administrative fees to punish a motorist.
 15. I respectfully invite the Court to:
 * *Dismiss the claim* in its entirety.
 * *Strike out the additional £70.00 cost element* as an impermissible double recovery.
 * Award the Defendant appropriate fixed travel and loss of time expenses for attending the hearing listed on 17th July 2026.
### Statement of Truth
I believe that the facts stated in this witness statement are true. I understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without an honest belief in its truth.
*Signed:* ............................................................
Name: XXXXXX
Date: 1st July 2026

Re: Legal claim received for Parking in Tesco
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Apologies, i have updated the access setting, hopefully should be editable.

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That’s fine, I don’t need to edit but couldn’t read before, now it’s OK.
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So that’s the claimant’s Witness Statement.

You should have received a letter from your local court - the one you nominated on your N180 form - with dates of hearing, dates by which the claimant has to pay the court fee, dates by which both parties have to submit Witness Statements.

I don’t think you’ve posted this letter.

So you are now filing your WS in response to theirs.

It reads more like a defence, although yours was previously a boilerplate/template defence.

But it probably ticks the boxes I guess. It’s too much about the process and their failings than it is about your story.

Is that a correct summary, and do you have any information on the other dates that are important here?
« Last Edit: July 03, 2026, 03:47:30 pm by jfollows »

Re: Legal claim received for Parking in Tesco
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Apologies, I got distracted by illness and other things in life. I will post the notice of allocation from the court shortly.

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Re: Legal claim received for Parking in Tesco
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The claimant has to pay the court fee by 19 June - did they pay?
Both parties - including you - have to submit Witness Statements by 3 July. Did you? Your last post doesn’t look like a Witness Statement to me, but it may be better than nothing.
We can give you advice but you need to stay on top of the process. If you’re too distracted by other things, please don’t waste our time.
« Last Edit: July 09, 2026, 08:23:53 pm by jfollows »

Re: Legal claim received for Parking in Tesco
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Okay, a bit too harsh, but I will eat the humble pie, I suppose. I certainly did not intend to waste your time. I do not know how to find if the claimant paid their fees or not. Yes, I am late in uploading my statement but I know its upto the judge to decide whether they will accept it or not. If you do not want to help you can simply say that rather than giving me a dressing down.

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Write to the court manager as per the letter of allocation if you want confirmation that the hearing is going ahead because the fee has been paid, or just assume that it will be in the absence of getting this information.
I guess the fact that the claimant has submitted a WS means that they intend to proceed, they would not have gone to this effort were they planning on discontinuing.

The original PCN is included in the recent post from you, showing a parking period of 14:29.26 to 16:06.58. Free parking is limited to 1 hour acording to the signs in the same post.

So how will you defend this if it goes to court? The claimant will maintain that the signs are clear and therefore the driver entered into a contract under the stated terms, although I can’t clearly see anything stating £70/£40 for overstaying.

You seem to be arguing that 1 hour is too short a period of free parking, so do you have evidence why this might be the case? The counter-argument might be that if you don’t like it, don’t park there, and many people find it long enough, plus I believe you have the option for paying for longer parking also.

You originally mentioned PoFA 2012 so, since you have not identified the driver, are you making any argument of non-compliance so the registered keeper can't be liable?

If it goes to court, how do you explain your posted defence? I know you got it from here originally, but it’s a boilerplate/template which, more recently, has been struck out because it does not address the claim, it just moans about how bad the Particulars of Claim are. Of course, in your case it hasn’t been struck out.
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Re: Legal claim received for Parking in Tesco
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Here is my witness statement. It's not same as the one I posted here, i think i may have a decent chance here.

Google Docs · drive.google.com


Re: Legal claim received for Parking in Tesco
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There's certain aspects of your witness statement which are too specific and which you could hold back until the hearing.

Think tactically here.

The problem their witness has with the issue dates is one where you could win on the day by raising these points at the hearing - their legal rep will not be able to combat your points as they will not be prepared for them.

If your WS points these errors out in advance then you give them a chance to sort their case out with either a Supplementary Witness Statement or additional points which could be clarified by their legal rep on the day.

Once you get to the hearing you would then present the inconsistency and state something along the lines of;

"I draw the Court's attention to the fact that the alleged parking contravention occurred on 14th September 2024. The Claimant's Exhibit GS-4 shows that their PCN was prepared on 19th September 2024. The date shown on the PCN does not demonstrate the date of posting and I have raised this point in previous correspondence with the Claimant. I can state that I never received a PCN from the Claimant within this time period. In her Witness Statement, Deanne Nevers then appears to acknowledge that the postal PCN wasn't actually sent until 20th October 2024. This issue date is well beyond the 14 day period allowed under Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 in order to invoke what is know as 'keeper liability'. With the driver unknown and no POFA keeper liability, there is no route to liability in this Claim."
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