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Re: Court letter
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Hi

I’ve filed an acknowledgement of service so now have to prepare my defence.

Do I state…non-compliance with PoFA 2012 and the reasons why with proof that the parking charge was sent outside of the 14 days. Do I then state the driver has not been identified? Do I also say I did not have an answer to my appeal. I know it’s up to me to do this. I want to get it right. I would really appreciate help from people who know.

Thank you

Re: Court letter
« Reply #16 on: »
Just structure it logically, ie you are the registered keeper of the vehicle, the driver at the time of the event has not been identified and Smart has failed to meet the requirements of PoFA 2012 to transfer liability to you because …. and therefore you are not liable for any alleged breach of contract by the driver of the car.

You can mention the appeal if you want because it demonstrates you tried to resolve this without going to court, but the claimant never responded. If you mention the appeal, state the basis on which you appealed also.

Post it here for comments if you want.

Re: Court letter
« Reply #17 on: »
This is what I’m writing for my defence. Is it enough? Am I waffling on?

I am defending the debt that DCB legal say I owe for a parking charge.
The parking charge came from a company called Smart Parking Ltd.
Smart Parking failed to comply with the strict timing conditions set ou by schedule 4 of the Protections of Freedoms act 2012.
I, the defendant, am the registered keeper of the vehicle. The driver had not been identified at the time of the event.
Smart parking had failed to meet the requirements of PoFA 2012 to transfer the alleged breach of contract to the keeper. ( Please see attached evidence 1. PCN as evidence and note the date of contravention and date of issue are 21 days apart. There was also the time it was within the mailing service to add to those 21 days)
I appealed to Smart parking. Stating that the parking charge notice was clearly sent after the 14 days set out by PoFA 2012. My appeal was sent within the 28 days of the notice being issued. I had an acknowledgement of my appeal. (Please see evidence 2. Acknowledgment email. Note the date of acknowledgement is within 28 days of the date the pcn was issued)
You can not email your appeal to Smart parking you have to use their online form. At the time I wasn’t savvy enough to copy my appeal but hoping the appeal acknowledgement email should be enough to prove my appeal. Since the acknowledgement Smart parking have not responded. I did not receive a 10 digit code to appeal to PoPLA. Smart parking therefore is in breach of their trade association’s, British Parking Associations, code of practice. I checked my junk and spam and all other emails for 60 days and heard nothing. After numerous attempts to contact Smart parking for a response I heard nothing back. I then received a letter from debt collectors on the 10th of October 2024. Had my appeal failed I should’ve been sent a 10 digit code so I could appeal through PoPLA. I continued to try to contact smart parking but didn’t get a response. It all went quiet for around a year and then I started receiving demands for payments from DCB Legal.
I have explained to DCB Legal that I still haven’t had a response to my appeal and that they have no proof of debt. I have asked for proof. I have asked for the original pcn. I have asked for any photographs and proof that there was an outcome to my appeal and the 10 digit code that would’ve been sent to me. I am told these aren’t reasonable requests.




Re: Court letter
« Reply #18 on: »
I don’t know how to put this other than this is terrible, and you need to start again. I’m not trying to be rude.

Facts, short paragraphs are all that is required.

0. You are defending the case in full.

1. That you are the registered keeper and not liable because the driver has not been identified and because Smart failed to comply with the Protections of Freedom Act to transfer liability by issuing the PCN xx days after the original event. State the relevant days.

2. That you submitted an appeal on xx/yy/zzzz in which you made this point but never received a response to your appeal.

That’s it. All the rest is just confusing waffle. Don’t attach things here, that will come in due course in the unlikely event this actually goes to court.

But wait for other comments as well. I may have missed some points.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2026, 06:27:31 pm by jfollows »

Re: Court letter
« Reply #19 on: »
Thank you. Don’t find it rude at all. I’m glad I asked. I said I needed help.