Nice first attempt. However, it is all over the place and the single most important thing is that you have not identified the driver and because the location is subject to byelaws, it is not relevant land for the purposes of PoFA which means that you cannot be liable as the Keeper. That should be the very first point. Additionally, if you want to argue other procedural failures, then these should also be right at the beginning. The rest of the narrative can follow.
You want the judge to look at it and before having to trudge through the rest of it, decide whether there is a case for you to answer. If there isn't, because they agree that the location is no relevant land and the driver is not identified, then there is nothing else other to deal with and they can finish early and go haver a cup of tea, or whatever. Judges want an easy life. Especially in the small claims track, they don't need overly complex argument for a simple matter.
Before you do any more, wait to see if they submit their WS by the deadline.
Having reviewed the court order against, I note so many inconsistencies and errors:
1. Contradictory deadlines and sequencingThe trial fee deadline is set as 14 November 2025, but the hearing date is listed as 12 December 2025 — less than a month later. That’s unusually tight and inconsistent with the usual 21–28 day minimum gap courts maintain between a trial fee deadline and the hearing date.
It leaves no practical time for the court to process a potential strike-out and notify parties before the scheduled hearing.
2. Inconsistent timeline for evidence exchangeThe order requires parties to serve and file witness statements by 30 December 2025 — after the hearing date (12 December 2025). That is a fundamental procedural error.
Witness evidence obviously must be served before the hearing, typically 14 or 21 days in advance under CPR 27.4(3). Having a filing date after the hearing invalidates the order’s practical effect.
3. Possible clerical or cut-and-paste errorThe text appears to be a hybrid of two separate orders:
• A trial fee order (about payment by 14 November 2025), and
• A directions order setting the evidence timetable (dated 30 December 2025).
This likely indicates the court staff used a template from another case or reused an earlier draft without adjusting the dates to fit this specific hearing.
4. Lack of consistency between hearing listing and directionsThe “Notice of Allocation to the Small Claims Track (Hearing)” dated 2 October 2025 confirms the hearing on 12 December 2025.
The subsequent order dated 10 September 2025 (an earlier date) contains post-hearing directions (filing by 30 December 2025).
Chronologically, a 10 September order could not refer to a 12 December hearing set later in October.
Therefore, the two documents are out of sequence — the later “allocation” notice appears to supersede the earlier general directions, yet the later one doesn’t correct the erroneous post-hearing dates.
5. Failure to specify service method and compliance under CPR 27The order requires that parties “serve and file” witness statements but omits:
• The standard requirement that they be exchanged simultaneously.
• Any reference to CPR 27.4(3) or Practice Direction 27A para 7.3 (which normally govern small claims evidence).
6. Ambiguous consequence wordingIt states: “If your claim has been struck out, it will no longer exist. The hearing will be vacated unless a counterclaim survives.” While legally correct, this wording is non-standard and confusingly placed before the payment instructions rather than after the consequence section, which may confuse litigants in person.
I would suggest you take the initial five in this and send the following to the court and CC the claimant and yourself as follows:
Subject: Claim [NUMBER] – Order (two pages) – URGENT clarification/correction under CPR 40.12 and CPR 3.1
Dear Listing Office,
I refer to the single two-page Order in this matter. The Order is internally inconsistent and incapable of compliance unless corrected. In particular:
1. Internal dating conflict
The Order’s heading states 2 October 2025, whereas the signature/footer states 10 September 2025. Please confirm which is the date of the Order and which governs the timetable.
2. Witness statements due after the hearing
The Order requires parties to “serve and file” witness statements and documents by 4:00 pm on 30 December 2025, i.e. after the listed hearing at 10:00 am on 12 December 2025. That is impossible and contrary to the small-claims regime (CPR 27.4; PD 27A para 7.3), which requires evidence in advance of the hearing.
3. Mediation extension that defeats the listing
The provision extending filing to seven days after any mediation would, in any scenario, push filing beyond the listed hearing. As drafted, the timetable cannot be complied with.
These are not trivial slips. Left uncorrected, they invite ambush, adjournment and wasted court time, contrary to the Overriding Objective.
Relief sought:
A. Identify the correct date of the Order and amend the document accordingly.
B. Vary the directions so that witness statements and documents are exchanged simultaneously no later than 14 days before the hearing (i.e. by 4:00 pm on 28 November 2025). If preferred, a 21-day timetable (21 November 2025) is also workable.
C. Disapply the “+7 days after mediation” filing provision as incompatible with the fixed 12 December hearing.
D. Direct that any party wishing to rely on material served after the corrected deadline must apply for relief, with costs consequences reserved.
Case-management notice:
Absent prompt clarification, the Defendant will proceed on a 14-day pre-hearing timetable to minimise prejudice. If the current defect necessitates an adjournment, the Defendant will invite the Court to give appropriate directions and deal with costs on a neutral basis (no order, or reserved), as the situation arises from the Order’s wording rather than any party default.
Given the proximity of the hearing, I request that corrected directions issue urgently.
Yours faithfully,
[Full name]
[Address]
[Email]
Personally, I would have just gone for a strike out application with costs. Had you gone for a summary judgment before allocation, you could have had £750 fixed costs plus the application and then an additional hearing for unreasonable behaviour costs on to of that.
The claimant does not have a case against the keeper if the driver is not identified.