Long time lurker, first time poster.
The case this rider bring to the attention of the forum today is almost identical to
that of sinaloa's, two months prior. One substantial difference is that while in sinaloa's case the vehicle was left in this location for ~1 hour, the vehicle in this rider's case was only there for a matter of minutes (the rider entered Aldi and promptly exited, supposedly having not found what they were looking for). This rider had been using the guidance given in that thread as a starting point for their own defence; the OP (sinaloa) has been advised to hold out for a Letter of Claim which, at the time of writing this, does not appear to have been issued. This rider, on the other hand, received such a letter in the post 2 days ago.
A brief timeline of events:
- NtK issued for an alleged contravention on 21/06/2024. Reason given was [motorcycle] "Not parked correctly within the marking of the bay or space". As mentioned in the other post, this is an expansive paved area which sits level with the 'main' tarmac area of the car park. There are no signs, markings, or any other indication that parking is expressly forbidden there. It is quite common to see motorcycles/scooters and even occasionally cars parked in this area, which is usually otherwise strewn with trolleys. This rider will try and find a copy of the NtK to upload here if the mods will find it helpful, but a few important details which chip away at (if not outright invalidate) the legitimacy of the NtK:
- No 'period of parking' is specified in relation to the NtK
- The timestamps on the photos provided show that the motorcycle was 'parked' in this location for no more than 2 minutes and 27 seconds
- The image of the motorcycle has been significantly squashed/distorted as it appears on the NtK which arrived in the post
Here's a clearer view of what this area looks like (the rider's vehicle would have been parked a few feet in front of where this photo was taken):

- Appeal lodged with UKPC citing lack of 'specified period of parking'; PoFA 9(2)(a) and (b)
- Boilerplate response received: "To assist us in making a decision regarding your appeal, please confirm the full name and address of the driver to our appeals department... Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 discusses the recovery of unpaid parking charges. It allows parking operators to hold the registered keeper liable... etc."
- POPLA code is issued; appeal is lodged with the following statement:
As the registered keeper (RK) of the vehicle in question, I have reviewed the evidence submitted by UKPC in its entirety and wish to make the following comments:
In their case summary, UKPC have contended that “the period of parking is the time in which the vehicle was parked”. However, given that the photos that they have provided as evidence only show the vehicle at this location for 2 minutes and 27 seconds, and they have not provided any evidence to demonstrate the vehicle was in this location for any longer than that, this is insufficient to describe a “period of parking”. The British Parking Association (BPA) Code of Practice (CoP) section 13.1 states that drivers must be provided with a reasonable amount of time to consider the terms & conditions and decide whether they wish to be bound by them by remaining on the site. Section 13.1 also specifies that the consideration period afforded must be a minimum of 5 minutes:
"The driver must have the chance to consider the Terms and Conditions before entering into the ‘parking contract’ with you. If, having had that opportunity, the driver decides not to park but chooses to leave the car park, you must provide them with a reasonable consideration period to leave, before the driver can be bound by your parking contract. The amount of time in these instances will vary dependant on site size and type but it must be a minimum of 5 minutes."
At this stage, I would like to point out that one of these photos, which was used in the original Notice to Keeper (NtK), - a copy of which may be found on page 29 of the case summary - appears to have been ‘squashed’ or cropped in order to fit the grey box, which itself is in breach of the BPA CoP, Section 21.5a which requires that “all photographs used for evidence should be clear and legible and must not be retouched or digitally altered.”
Given the aforementioned inadequate signage in respect of the paved area adjacent to the car park, it is conceivable that the driver used this consideration period to familiarise themselves with the terms and conditions of the car park before deciding to move their vehicle. As is demonstrated by UKPC’s image entitled ‘Additional evidence.png’, this would not have been possible to do from the vehicle’s location, as what UKPC have somewhat ironically indicated as “clear, UKPC signage” is in fact not legible owing to said signage being obscured by a tree. Pursuant to the BPA CoP Section 13.1, closer inspection of this sign, or others like it, would be necessary in order for a contract to be formed while also explaining why the vehicle appears to be unattended by the driver.
UKPC have also alleged that the vehicle in this location - referred to previously as a ‘pedestrian’ area for the sole purpose of distinguishing it from the (tarmac) car park proper and not withstanding the earlier stated fact of the vehicle not being “parked” owing to the timeframe falling within the BPA CoP’s minimum consideration period - caused an obstruction to any would-be users of the disabled bay. This is patently untrue as evidenced by UKPC’s own photos, which show the vehicle well clear of the crosshatch markings which denote the additional space which must be left clear to provide adequate access.
On the matter of insufficient/inadequate signage at the entrance to the car park, UKPC have also contested the authenticity and/or relevance of the photos I have supplied to demonstrate this point. Regretfully, my consumer-grade smartphone camera does not overlay timestamps on top of images, but you will note from the screenshots here: https://imgur.com/a/AMPu2Tw that the sign was facing the wrong way at the beginning of September. Furthermore, despite UKPC’s statement that they have “notified the relevant department in order to get the entrance signage turned back the correct way”, as of yesterday (20th September), the sign continues to face the wrong way.
Given UKPC’s inability to correct a crucial element of their signage not less than two weeks after it was brought to their attention (by me; one would assume one of their operators would have notified them much sooner), it is probable that this insufficient signage was also in place on June 21st (when the PCN was issued); as evidenced by the image on page 25 of UKPC’s case summary, the most recently they are able to prove that the entrance signage was facing the right way was 21 February 2024 - a full 4 months before the PCN was issued - whereas my photos proving the opposite were taken significantly more recently.
Such inadequate signage is in breach of the BPA CoP section 19.2, stating that an entrance sign must “take into account the expected speed of vehicles approaching the car park”, which would be difficult enough to do even if facing the correct way owing to its position next to a short & steep ramp but virtually impossible when it is facing traffic *leaving* the car park, as opposed to approaching.
Since UKPC has not fully complied with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 in that they have failed to specify the “period of parking” to which the charge relates, they may not invoke any right to hold the registered keeper liable in respect of any such charge. UKPC’s failure to meet these strict legal requirements in their entirety must mean that responsibility for settling the charge cannot be transferred to the registered keeper: they may only pursue the driver, who has not been identified by either myself nor any evidence presented by UKPC.
This fact alone is grounds for cancellation for the charge, however I would once again point out procedural errors committed by UKPC in the processing of this charge amounting to breaches of the British Parking Association’s Code of Practice at Sections 13.1, 19.2 and 21.5a. I would like to draw the assessor’s attention to a recent appeal (reference 2413353469; assessor: Gayle Stanton) in which the appellant’s appeal was upheld on the grounds that the images in the NtK had been altered contrary to the rules set out by BPA CoP 21.5a. As the images used in this charge have been similarly altered, this precedent should be considered in this case also.
For these reasons, I would respectfully request that the assessor rightfully upholds this appeal and cancels the PCN.
- POPLA rejects the appeal
- Debt collection letters from ZZPS arrive sporadically over the course of the next few months
- Finally, a Letter of Claim arrives.
This rider acknowledges that they should have perhaps acted sooner, both in bringing this matter to the attention to the forum and in requesting the landowner (or agent thereof) to intervene in cancelling the charge, but hopes that it is not too late to receive assistance in responding to the Letter of Claim and ridding themselves of this ridiculous matter once & for all.