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Thanks to you both for the help. I just thought I should give an update -- after waiting for a surprisingly long time(!), Smart cancelled the charge on appeal.

Taking inspiration from your short-and-sweet versions this is what was sent:

Dear Smart Parking Ltd,

We have received your Parking Charge Notice (notice number XXXXXXXXXX) for the vehicle XXXXXXX which you allege has incurred a parking charge at Newspaper House, Blackburn.

Under Schedule 4, paragraph 9 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012, your notice does not fall under the specified conditions for a Notice to Keeper, most notably as the date of issue (10 September) does not fall within the relevant period of 14 days from the alleged date of contravention (22 August).

Therefore, we are under no obligation to disclose driver details or settle the alleged charge. We are unable to help you further in this matter and look forward to your confirmation that the charge has been cancelled. Please note that if you wish to reject this appeal you must issue a POPLA code.

Regards,

DWMB2 -- Good call, the address on the V5 was indeed wrong! Not sure how that one happened.

b789 -- while I would love to send an appeal like your suggestion I think I'll save giving them any attitude for if I get one sent to myself

Hi all,

My stepfather runs a small business (I'll call it "our company") and recently received a PCN (on 27 September no less) from Smart Parking in the post: https://imgur.com/a/Shf6HgA

It is a possibility that the vehicle in question could have entered this car park in order to load/unload goods hired by a contractor working for the owners of the building and adjoining car park. However, I believe the owners (Empire Property Holdings) have been having... liquidation issues... and appear to be uncontactable having disconnected their phone line.

As far as I'm concerned having seen this notice, it does not conform to POFA 2012 - mostly because it was sent too late (19 days) and also to an incorrect address - and therefore my stepfather's company is under no obligation to disclose the driver of the vehicle to Smart Parking Ltd, nor liable to pay the charge. Here's what I drafted up:

Dear Smart Parking Ltd,

x Ltd ("we"; "us"; "our") recently received a "parking charge notice" from Smart Parking Ltd ("you"; "your"), notice number x, relating to the vehicle x of which we are a keeper.

The validity of this charge notwithstanding, you have failed to comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012.

I draw your attention to Schedule 4 of the Act.

A "notice to driver" was not provided before the vehicle was removed from the relevant land (sub-paragraph 7(4)(a), thus under paragraph 6 you must provide a "notice to keeper" in accordance with paragraph 9 in order to claim rights to recover charges from us under paragraph 4(2)(a)

You have not provided a "notice to keeper" in accordance with the requirements set out in paragraph 9, assuming your vague correspondence is intended to be interpreted as such:

- Your notice does not inform us that the driver is required to pay the parking charges (required by sub-paragraph 9(2)(b)), only stating the charge and offering various options.

- Your notice does not state that you do not know the name and a current address for the driver (required by sub-paragraph 9(2)(e)).

- Your notice does not clearly warn that if the charge remains unpaid and you do not know the name and current address of the driver, that you have the right to recover the charge from us, as the keeper (required by sub-paragraph 9(2)(f)).

- Your notice does not clearly relate to a single period of parking (required by sub-paragraph 9(3)) as you have not shown that the vehicle did not exit and re-enter the location between the claimed arrival and departure times.

- Your notice was not sent by post to a current address for service for the keeper (required by sub-paragraph 9(4)(b)) as the given address uses the incorrect postcode "x".

- Your notice was not sent by post within the relevant period of 14 days beginning on the day after that on which the specified period of parking ended (required by sub-paragraph 9(5)). This is clearly demonstrated by the issuance date of 10th September which is 19 days after the specified period ending on 22nd August.

- Your notice cannot be presumed to have been delivered on the second working day after it was posted (i.e. 12th September) as given in sub-paragraph 9(6) due to the previously-mentioned incorrect address given; the date of delivery (thus notice given to ourselves) was in fact 27 September.

Furthermore, I am concerned that pursuant to sub-paragraph 11(1)(b) (as specified in sub-paragraph 4(2)(a)), the application for our details as keeper were not made within the relevant 14-day period due to the listed issuance date, and I will be raising an official complaint to the Information Commissioner's Office over this matter.

In conclusion, as you have not fulfilled the requirements set out in the Act, we will not be held liable for any charges, and we are under no obligation to provide you with any further details. Further correspondence regarding this matter will discarded.

Regards,
[myself]
x Ltd

Maybe a bit excessive but it covers all the deficiencies I thought I found in the letter, I feel that this should be enough to be dismissed through an appeal (via POPLA if not through Smart Parking).

My stepfather says he thinks it is worth writing about the loading/unloading aspect and that the contractor should have authorised the vehicle to be in the car park -- I believe that Smart Parking Ltd likely don't give a toss about our company's involvement with the contractor as they are only working for the owner and nobody else. Of course if the owner of the car park hasn't gone AWOL I would have suggested asking them to cancel the charge...

Any feedback from anyone here (who probably knows better than I do) would be greatly appreciated.

Cheers.