Yes. They appear to have corrected the wrong date re increase.
But the date of issue is wrong. I did 8 PCNs last month and the adjudicator was concerned about this. I am also looking in depth at the PCN and will be back later as, strictly speaking, it has omitted one item of mandatory information.
https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukla/2003/3/section/4/enacted(8)A penalty charge notice under this section must—
(a)state—
(i)the grounds on which the council or, as the case may be, Transport for London believe that the penalty charge is payable with respect to the vehicle;
(ii)the amount of the penalty charge which is payable;
(iii)that the penalty charge must be paid before the end of the period of 28 days beginning with the date of the notice;
(iv)that if the penalty charge is paid before the end of the period of 14 days beginning with the date of the notice, the amount of the penalty charge will be reduced by the specified proportion;
(v)that, if the penalty charge is not paid before the end of the 28 day period, an increased charge may be payable;*******
I will draft a defence later today. They usually fail to consider any technical arguments! Meanwhile, can you formulate your points please in a short paragraph too?