Have you tried taking a deep breath and telling us what actually happened? We don't charge by the word, or extra for punctuation, or at all for that matter.
We know what a NIP is (and they don't conventionally specify a camera location address, although they are supposed to indicate where the alleged offence was committed), and that's about as much as we do know after reading your first attempt.
Any story which starts with "*the* NIP" is going to be full of drug fuelled flashbacks, and presumably be directed by David Lynch. Not necessarily because how this particular MacGuffin came into existence is necessarily crucial to the plot, but because the author seems to be hell bent on using as few characters as possible to tell us as little as possible. That said, the number of ways in which the presumed error is irrelevant will likely depend on the circumstances.
