In the meantime, you could write a complaint to POPLA outlining their assessors 'procedural error' in applying PoFA in a situation where the requirements of PoFA weren't met. Their response could help you if the matter were progressed.
You could but you'd probably be wasting your time. Even b789 intimated in their first post it was unlikely a POPLA assessor would find in favour of the keeper based on that appeal. Have we ever seen this avenue work with a PPC or second stage appeal?
Just sit tight and wait for the LOC.
It is always worth complaining.
Even though POPLA is a one stage appeal process, it would definitely help a defendant's case if they could evidence that their appeal had been mis-handled due to a procedural error.
We've seen this before when POPLA assessors have incorrectly applied PoFA on non-relevant land - at the complaint stage POPLA admitted that they'd screwed up - this legally scuppered the operators chance of pursuing the matter to court as the POPLA complaint response acknowledged that the airport land involved was not relevant land and therefore the keeper could never be held liable.
So effectively you can manipulate the system to make it a two stage process if you know how to play it.
In this particular case, if the NtK didn't contain the required wording then the matter is entirely objective in nature - meaning; that the procedural error is clearly obvious.
In terms of PoFA Schedule 4 para. 9(2)(e) - the section not only requires that the relevant information is provided to the keeper but the information must be provided in a specific fashion - namely; that the 9(2)(e) specified a generic wording followed by the specific wording of 9(2)(e)(i) followed by the word "or" followed by the specific wording of 9(2)(e)(ii) - this means that collectively the keeper is advised of their legal position and is then presented with a legal choice - a choice of either paying the unpaid parking charges themself OR by nominating the driver - if the required wording is not present (as appears the case in this situation) then the keeper is never presented with the legal choice which is specified in 9(2)(e) - the POPLA assessor clearly misses this and this is a procedural error.