Would the below be suitable or how i can i give it a little more oomph:
FORMAL APPEAL - PCN xxx
To Whom It May Concern,
I wish to make formal representations against PCN [number] issued on [date].
I am appealing this parking charge on the grounds of POFA 2012
non-compliance, namely, Paragragh 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 the Protection of Freedoms Act says the notice must:
warn the keeper that if, after the period of 28 days beginning with the day after that on which the notice is given.
However, the PCN notice received states:
"You are advised that, if after the period of 30 days beginning with the day after that on which this Parking Charge Notice to Keeper is given."
Also, the parking company operator has no legal right to enforce the charge against the keeper, and also has no legal right to require the keeper to name the driver.
With both of these facts in place, the charge cannot be allowed to stand and my appeal should stand.
