Zenith’s latest reply is wholly inadequate, factually incorrect in places, and ultimately self-serving. Here is a formal rebuttal to their email that you should send in response (either to the same representative or escalated to their formal complaints team) and CC: [Fleet Manager Name],
– for visibility and also CC yourself:
Subject: Formal Complaint – Continued Mishandling and Misstatements Regarding PCN [REF]
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your delayed response. Regrettably, your email fails to address the material issues raised and introduces several inaccuracies that must now be formally challenged. This is now escalated as a formal complaint.
1. Misstatement Regarding PoFA Schedule 4 and Lease Vehicles
You claim that Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 does not apply to long-term lease vehicles and only to short-term hire agreements. That is categorically incorrect.
PoFA Sch 4 clearly applies to both hire and lease vehicles, as the legislation refers to “a vehicle hired to a person under a hire agreement”, and includes no distinction based on the hire duration or whether the hirer is a corporate entity. Further, the standard required for transferring liability is not that the lease agreement must be ‘suitable’ or contain specific wording. It simply requires:
• A copy of the hire/lease agreement; and
• A statement of liability signed by the hirer (Schedule 4, paragraph 13(2)).
If your lease documentation with the company is unsuitable for this statutory mechanism, then it is a failing of your processes—not of the law. Your claim that “parking companies reject” such transfers is unsubstantiated and immaterial. It is your legal obligation as Keeper to attempt the transfer under PoFA, and Premier Park's own NtK expressly invites you to do so. Instead, you chose to pay the charge and pass on the cost, thereby extinguishing my legal right to appeal. This is not best practice; it is systemic failure.
2. Incorrect Application of Policy Wording
Your continued reference to “fines” and “penalty notices” in your lease agreement documentation does not cover Parking Charge Notices (PCNs) issued by unregulated private firms. PCNs issued by Premier Park are not fines in law—they are speculative invoices based on alleged breach of contract.
Unless the wording of the agreement explicitly extends to civil contractual charges of this nature, your actions in paying and recharging the amount are legally questionable. You have admitted that the terminology is “not technically accurate”. That is a tacit admission that you are relying on vague or misleading language to justify automatic deductions from employees' wages—amounts that are not statutory, not enforceable without court judgment, and are hotly contested.
3. Post-Payment Appeal Option – Misleading Advice
Your claim that most operators allow appeals after payment is unsupported and directly contradicted by Premier Park’s own NtK, which states:
“Please note, where payment of the parking charge is made this will preclude the ability to appeal.”
It is misleading to suggest that appeal is still available. POPLA also confirms this explicitly: payment is deemed acceptance of liability and removes any right of appeal.
Further, your suggestion that I take the matter up with my employer is both inappropriate and evasive. You are the contracting party who paid the charge, failed to exercise your legal rights under PoFA, and are now attempting to shift responsibility. My employer was not a party to the appeal process and cannot retrospectively resolve a situation caused by your failure.
4. Goodwill Gesture – Refund of Admin Fee
While the refund of your administrative fee is noted, this does not resolve the substantive issue: the full charge was paid and recharged to me when it should never have been paid at all.
5. Outstanding Requirements
To resolve this matter, I require the following within 14 days:
• A full refund of the PCN amount recharged to me;
• A copy of the actual lease agreement you claim precludes PoFA compliance (if not provided, this will be assumed to be a false representation);
• Confirmation of your membership status with the BVRLA;
• Confirmation that this matter has now been logged as a formal complaint and is being investigated at the appropriate level.
Please treat this email as a Letter Before Action. If the refund is not issued within 14 days, I will:
• Pursue the matter via the small claims track of the County Court, and
• Report your organisation to the BVRLA and the Information Commissioner's Office (ICO) regarding unlawful processing of my personal data and unauthorised deductions.
This incident reveals a fundamental failure in your internal processes, a misapplication of law, and repeated attempts to shift blame. That is unacceptable in any regulated leasing operation, let alone one dealing with large-scale corporate clients and employee salary deductions.
I am copying in Fleet and HR colleagues as this matter has implications for employee rights and salary deductions under the current car scheme agreement with Zenith. I respectfully request that this issue be reviewed internally in light of Zenith's failure to follow statutory process.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Full Name]
[Employee Number, if relevant]
[Vehicle Registration Number]
It is advisable—and tactically sound—to copy your employer’s fleet manager and/or HR department into the correspondence, for the following reasons:
Zenith claims their actions were “in line with the agreement made with your company”. If your employer is a party to that agreement, they may bear some contractual or practical responsibility for the flawed process that led to your loss of appeal rights. Your employer should therefore be aware that their agreement is causing financial and legal detriment to staff—particularly where it allows automatic deductions for speculative, non-statutory charges without due process.
Once your employer sees that Zenith’s system is undermining employees’ legal rights, they may apply pressure for better handling in future. It also opens the door to a broader review of the lease agreement, deduction process, and handling of PCNs.
If you escalate to court, copying your employer shows that you made every attempt to resolve the issue and highlight the flaws in the process, which supports a claim for reasonable conduct.