How's this as a more comprehensive appeal to submit?
The Notice to Keeper (attached copy for reference) does not comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. Specifically, in PoFA 2012, Schedule 4, item 9(2)(e)(i), the NtK must "state that the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper to pay the unpaid parking charges".
The NtK does not fulfil the requirements of 9(2)(e)(i) as there is no invitation (or synonym thereof) to pay the unpaid parking charges as the registered keeper. There is only the invitation to pay as the driver, or nominate someone else as the driver.
In additon, the NtK does not comply with the British Parking Association Code of Practice, e.g. items 2.4, 21.2, 21.13, 22.6 & 24.3.
BPA CoP item 2.4 states that all AOS member should be aware of their legal obligations, include the PoFA 2012 Schedule 4, which is shown above that ParkingEye do not comply with.
BPA CoP item 21.2 states that as long as the strict conditions of Schedule 4 of the PoFA 2012 are met, unpaid parking charges can be reclaimed from the keeper, rather than the driver of the vehicle. As shown above, Schedule 4 of the PoFA 2012 aren't met and therefore there is no right to reclaim the unpaid parking charge from myself, as the registered keeper of the vehicle.
BPA CoP item 21.13 states "You should see the relevant part of Schedule 4 of POFA 2012 to make sure you know:
• what contents you need to include in the Notice to
Keeper (paragraph 8(2) or 9(2))" As shown above, Schedule 4 of the PoFA 2012 is not met.
BPA CoP item 22.6 states "If you want to make use of the Keeper Liability provisions in Schedule 4 of POFA 2012 and you have not issued and delivered a parking charge notice to the driver in the car park where the parking event took place, your Notice to Keeper must meet the strict
requirements and timetable set out in the Schedule (in particular paragraph 9)." As shown above, Schedule 4 of the PoFA 2012 is not met.
BPA CoP item 24.3 states "Under POFA 2012, you can gain the right to recover unpaid charges from keepers only if particular conditions have been met. Once the conditions are met you may use your right to recover, after the end of the period of 28 days beginning with the day on which the Notice to Keeper was given. You should read paragraph 4 of Schedule 4 of POFA 2012 to understand what these conditions are" As shown above, Schedule 4 of the PoFA 2012 is not met, and therefore there is no right to recover unpaid charges from the myself, as the registered keeper.
As shown above, there are multiple requirements in both the BPA CoP & PoFA 2012 that ParkingEye have not complied with & therefore the NtK is invalid & they have no right to reclaim any unpaid parking charges from myself, as the registered keeper.