The NtK for the 25th July alleged contravention is not even PoFA compliant with paragraph 9(5) as it was not given within the relevant period.
All the issues as with the older case you referenced, still apply.
Thanks for your help with this. A reminder, I have two tickets to deal with, one I have given the driver's details (and have appealed), the other not. It's time to appeal the latter, is is still ok to use this template from the other thread for this car park?:
"Re: Parking Charge Notice (PCN) No. [PCN no.]
Vehicle Registration No: [VRM]
Issue Date: [issue date]
I am appealing as the registered keeper of the vehicle, and I would like to emphasise that I was not the driver on the date of the alleged contravention. I am under no legal obligation to provide the driver’s details, and I decline to do so.
ParkingEye (PE) has failed to comply with the strict requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012, which are necessary to hold the keeper liable. I outline the following points of non-compliance:
1. Failure to comply with PoFA paragraph 2(2):
PoFA paragraph 2(2) states that 'adequate notice' of the parking charge must be given to drivers. In this case, no adequate notice was provided. There were no visible signs at the entrance, at the location where the vehicle was parked, or along the route to the entrance of the premises, communicating the parking terms and conditions.
2. Failure to comply with PoFA paragraph 2(3):
Paragraph 2(3) further clarifies that 'adequate notice' means signs must clearly specify the parking charge and be positioned in such a way that the charge is brought to the attention of drivers. In this case, PE did not display sufficient signage to meet this requirement.
3. Failure to comply with PoFA paragraph 9(2)(c):
PoFA paragraph 9(2)(c) requires that the Notice to Keeper describe how the parking charge arose and how the requirement to pay was brought to the attention of the driver. Given that PE has failed to provide adequate notice as defined in paragraphs 2(2) and 2(3), the Notice to Keeper does not comply with this requirement. PE’s partial or substantial compliance with PoFA is insufficient to establish keeper liability, as full compliance with all PoFA requirements is mandatory.
4. Failure to comply with POFA paragraph 9)2)(e)(i):
This paragraph mandates that for a parking operator to hold the vehicle's registered keeper liable for a parking charge, the Notice to Keeper (NtK) must include:
• An "Invitation to Pay": The notice must explicitly invite the keeper to pay the unpaid parking charges.
• Exact Wording: The wording must clearly convey this invitation and mere implication or indirect suggestions are insufficient. The act requires strict compliance, meaning that any failure to fully incorporate this invitation renders the notice non-compliant with the requirements of PoFA 2012.
In addition, should PE reject my appeal, I will expect you to provide the following evidence to POPLA:
• A detailed layout of the car park showing the location of all signage.
• Proof of the exact location where the vehicle was parked, and how this relates to any signage.
• Evidence that the signage used to display the parking terms and conditions is fully compliant with the British Parking Association (BPA) and Independent Parking Committee (IPC) Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP).
PE will be put to strict proof of the vehicle’s parking location and the relationship of that location to any signs passed between the parking space and the premises entrance.
In light of these clear breaches of PoFA and the inadequate signage, I request that the Parking Charge Notice be cancelled"
A couple more pics of the car park attached for reference, one at night around the same time as these tickets.
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/f0pwz0pacnn2v8zdt1tpx/2025-09-04-11.12.11.jpg?rlkey=b7d09gxdalwmv3l54zml125r3&st=xm9ls2o0&dl=0https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/n4oelccorh00i9odxbkm2/2025-09-04-23.29.57.jpg?rlkey=m4bijpieogt1sn0wmqgwm14tp&st=t47j56vd&dl=0Thanks again!