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« on: March 12, 2025, 03:51:26 pm »
With the help of ChatGPT have drafted the following for the car leasing company. This not being my forte, is there anything you would call out?
Subject: Urgent Complaint – Unlawful Payment of Penalty Notice to APCOA
Dear [Leasing Company],
I am writing to formally raise a strong objection regarding your decision to pay a so-called "Penalty Notice" issued by APCOA. It is deeply concerning that [Leasing Company], as a responsible leasing company, has failed to recognise that APCOA has absolutely no legal authority to issue Penalty Notices for breach of railway bylaws.
To be absolutely clear: APCOA is not a statutory authority and does not possess the legal power to enforce railway bylaw penalties. Only the Train Operating Company (TOC) or the landowner, such as Network Rail, has the statutory power to issue a legitimate Penalty Notice. Furthermore, any properly issued penalty would be payable to the public purse, not to a private entity like APCOA.
The Department for Transport (DfT) made this explicitly clear in a 2018 response to POPLA, stating that they expect any minor parking breach at a railway station to be dealt with under civil contract law, not under railway bylaw 24.1, which is reserved for more serious offences. In addition, parking offences were decriminalised in 1999 with the introduction of the Road Traffic Act. This reinforces the fact that APCOA’s so-called “Penalty Notice” is not a legally enforceable fine, but rather an offered contract that no one is legally obliged to accept.
APCOA’s use of misleading and unlawful language – implying that payment is necessary to avoid criminal prosecution – is wholly deceptive and legally baseless. Any genuine bylaw offence would require a TOC to lay evidence before a magistrates’ court, where the burden of proof is beyond a reasonable doubt. APCOA, however, has no authority to issue, enforce, or prosecute any Penalty Notice. They are deliberately misrepresenting their powers to mislead the public into paying charges they are not legally obligated to pay.
By paying this invalid demand, [Leasing Company] has effectively legitimised an unlawful claim and encouraged APCOA’s deceptive practices. Furthermore, if you have made any charge to me as a result of this improper payment, I reserve the right to take legal action against [Leasing Company] for unlawfully charging me for a bogus penalty that should never have been paid in the first place.
I expect an immediate response from [Leasing Company] confirming:
1. Why this payment was made without verifying the legitimacy of the notice.
2. What steps you will now take to recover this unlawful payment from APCOA.
3. Confirmation that you will refund any charges made to me, or face legal action.
This matter is one of legal principle and fairness. APCOA’s actions are misleading, unlawful, and deceptive. Your compliance with their baseless demands only emboldens them to continue such practices.
I strongly urge you to rectify this situation immediately.
I look forward to your prompt response.