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Private parking tickets / Re: Civil Enforcement Ltd Court Claim
« on: November 10, 2025, 11:06:43 pm »
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DEFENCE
 
1.   The Defendant denies the claim in its entirety. The Defendant asserts that there is no liability to the Claimant and that no debt is owed. The claim is without merit and does not adequately disclose any comprehensible cause of action.
 
2.   There is a lack of precise detail in the Particulars of Claim (PoC) in respect of the factual and legal allegations made against the Defendant such that the PoC do not comply with CPR 16.4.
 
3.   The Defendant is unable to plead properly to the PoC because:
 
(a)   The contract referred to is not detailed or attached to the PoC in accordance with CPR PD 16(7.5);
 
(b)   The PoC do not state the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is/are relied on;
 
(c)   The PoC do not adequately set out the reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts the defendant has breached the contract (or contracts)
 
(d)   The PoC do not state with sufficient particularity exactly where the breach occurred, the exact time when the breach occurred and how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked before the parking charge was allegedly incurred;
 
(e)   The PoC do not state precisely how the sum claimed is calculated, including the basis for any statutory interest, damages, or other charges;
 
(f)   The PoC do not state what proportion of the claim is the parking charge and what proportion is damages;
 
(g)   The PoC do not provide clarity on whether the Defendant is sued as the driver or the keeper of the vehicle, as the claimant cannot plead alternative causes of action without specificity.
 
4. The Defendant attaches to this defence a copy of a draft order approved by a district judge at another court. The court struck out the claim of its own initiative after determining that the Particulars of Claim failed to comply with CPR 16.4. The judge noted that the claimant had failed to:
 
(i)   Set out the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions relied upon;
 
(ii)   Adequately explain the reasons why the defendant was allegedly in breach of contract;
 
(iii)   Provide separate, detailed Particulars of Claim as permitted under CPR PD 7C.5.2(2).
 
(iv)   The court further observed that, given the modest sum claimed, requiring further case management steps would be disproportionate and contrary to the overriding objective. Accordingly, the judge struck out the claim outright rather than permitting an amendment.
 
5. The Defendant submits that the same reasoning applies in this case and invites the court to adopt a similar approach by striking out the claim for the Claimant’s failure to comply with CPR 16.4.
 
Statement of truth
 
I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true. I understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without an honest belief in its truth.
 

Would the above template work in this case?

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Private parking tickets / Civil Enforcement Ltd Court Claim
« on: November 09, 2025, 09:55:37 pm »
Hi,

I got the claim form below:

https://ibb.co/pjP6j8PP

I already filed the AoS within two weeks. I was in hospital unexpectedly for a few days hence the delay until today of posting this here. I can submit defence as soon as I hear back from experts on here.

I don't remember receiving any private parking tickets from these guys since the contravention date of May 2025.

What defence should I go with?

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Hi all,

I have been living at my address in Hillingdon, London for 10+ years. In early March I got a PCN for parking without a permit on my road - this came as a surprise to me as I am a resident and pay the annual fee. Upon investigation, I realised that my permit had expired at the end of January and mentally missed this. In previous years, I'd get reminder emails weeks in advance of the expiry date and this is what allowed me to ever avoid similar PCNs in the last 10 years of living at my address.

I challenged the PCN on the grounds that I had not received a reminder email and my challenge was rejected as they claimed reminder emails were indeed sent. I then challenged it again on the same grounds but this time asking for proof such reminder emails were sent to me. This has again been rejected (without such a proof being sent to me).

Image of latest communication: https://ibb.co/8gFpWJhF

(I don't have the other earlier appeal rejection/communication to hand as I am currently abroad. Also, I haven't specified the exact address as it is the one I am resident in but the parking hours of operation are 9am-10pm 7 days a week - strict due to proximity to Heathrow)

Do I have any grounds to appeal further or should I just pay the reduced fee (I still have a chance to do so)? I should have probably posted on here before appealing but this didn't come to mind as I have only previously used this forum for help with private parking tickets.

Thanks,



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(Sorry I know I redacted more than my name and address, just noticed your ask above, let me know if you require a reupload)

Please - just blank your own name and address.

Please see the below:

https://ibb.co/cDvgZhB

I noticed that the letter says 10:46 to 10:46 but the image at the bottom shows 10:45 to 10:45.. not sure if noteworthy but just pointing out.

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Foor meaningful advice please to have a read of
https://www.ftla.uk/civil-penalty-charge-notices-(councils-tfl-and-so-on)/read-this-first-before-posting-your-case!-this-section-is-for-council-tfl-dartme/

and post up here all sides of the PCN, redacting only your name & address, and a GSV link to the location.

The Google Street View link (the start of Douglas road - where the alleged contravention happened):

https://maps.app.goo.gl/HdLwQo9RyeiGS9v39


The pages of the PCN itself:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/18nakPNhXCQbLl0j5lyz9nLC-VgRAIXmL?usp=sharing

(Sorry I know I redacted more than my name and address, just noticed your ask above, let me know if you require a reupload)

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Hi,

Last week I had an appointment on Hounslow High Street in the London Borough of Hounslow - an area I haven't frequented before and a borough I am not particularly familiar with. I was looking for the multi story car park and during this process accidentally turned into a confusing no-through side road that leads to the high street. After turning in, I drove towards the end of the side road but did not actually enter the restricted area (the area beyond the red stop sign), but instead did a quick U-turn so I could leave the side road and find the car park entry. To be clear, I entered the road and drove towards the end (before the stop sign) where I did the u-turn.

At this point (after u-turning), for a period of around 30 seconds my car stalled and wouldn't restart despite me trying a few times. Just as I got the engine revving again, I saw an enforcement officer approaching from a distance of like 30 metres (towards the front of the car) holding a camera pointed at the front of my car shouting something.

Before he reached my car, I had started moving the car in his direction (to leave the side road) and as I was driving past him (with my window down) he was shouting "why are you parking there for?". As I was driving past him, I informed him that I hadn't parked but just did a U turn. During our conversation, he tried to print a ticket (I assume to put on my windshield) but as there were no cars in front of me and I thought he was being unreasonable, I didn't wait around and just drove off. I heard him shouting that he'd send the PCN to my house.

Now I've received the PCN from the London Borough of Hounslow and it states the following grounds:

"02, Parked or loading / unloading in a restricted street where waiting and loading / unloading restrictions are in force"

It states that the enforcement officer observed the vehicle in question from 11:47 to 11:47. And there are two images attached showing my car.

My question is: do I have any grounds for an appeal? He observed me for less than a minute.

I haven't got a council ticket in years so I am keen to take advantage of the reduced rate but only if I have no real grounds for appeal.

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