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Quote from: jfollows on 07 Mar, 2026 08:42See https://www.moneyclaim.gov.uk/web/mcol/welcomeQuoteContact by PostMoney Claim Online (MCOL)4th floor21-27 St Katherine's StreetNorthamptonNN1 2LHt: 0300 123 1057 or 01604 619 402f: 0870 324 0166e: mcol@hmcts.gsi.gov.ukw: www.moneyclaim.gov.ukThis is the organisation responsible for issuing N1SDT claim forms and recording default judgements if they are not responded to.It would appear, registering with the details of the person in question + address (which has not changed since this saga began) there are no claims registered. I imagine this is now a waiting game for an N1SDT to arrive?Many thanks,

Urgh. No, we have not moved. I will keep an eye out for a N1SDT form. Is there any way to check if one was missed/default judgement awarded otherwise?Thanks.

Good evening. Whilst browsing, i came across other moorside threads. In essence, probably several months ago now i received a LOC such as depicted in https://ibb.co/93YHQt2zI assumed it was a fake LOC as it looked nothing remotely like the ones from DCBL/etc with particulars of claim. it is well past 30 days for obvious reasons and i have no further correspondence with them. Is it just a matter of waiting or have I dropped the ball?

DecisionSuccessfulAssessor NameHeidi BrownAssessor summary of operator caseThe operator has issued the Parking Charge Notice (PCN) as the motorist exceeded the maximum stay.Assessor summary of your case- The appellant states the Notice to Keeper does not comply with the requirements outlined by the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012. They state there is no evidence to demonstrate the individual they are pursuing is the driver. - The appellant states the signage does not give adequate notice in accordance with the British Parking Association (BPA) Code of Practice. - The appellant states the operator has not confirmed if Group Nexus is the agent or principal. - The appellant requests evidence of landowner authorisation. Upon reviewing the operator’s evidence, the appellant has reiterated and expanded on their grounds. The appellant has provided copies of the correspondence with the operator, images of the signage and documents containing their full appeal.Assessor supporting rational for decisionI am allowing this appeal, with my reasoning outlined below: When assessing an appeal, the burden of proof begins with the operator to evidence that the PCN has been issued correctly. - The appellant requests evidence of landowner authorisation. The Private Parking Sector Single Code of Practice (The Code) sets the standards its parking operators need to comply with. Section 14.1 of the Code states that where controlled land is being managed on behalf of a landowner, written confirmation must be obtained before a parking charge can be issued. The operator stated in the case file that the landowner contract was in section F however upon looking through the documentation, there is no landowner contract. As such, I am unable to confirm that the operator has the appropriate authorisation to enforce charges on the land. Accordingly, I must allow this appeal. I note the appellant has raised grounds of appeal and evidence, however I have not considered these, as they do not have any bearing on my decision.Many thanks.

done. thank you.

they have submitted a reply via Popla, as attached. (https://limewire.com/d/nGzWV#rVOSiYxhu5)Anything in particular to comment/add at this stage?I note they state "We can confirm that we have the authority to act on behalf of the landowner. The onus is on theappellant to provide evidence to support their claim that we do not - if the appellant genuinely believesthat we do not have such authority, they are to go to the BPA to obtain this information. Thephotographs included in Section F show that signage and equipment is in place at the site to manage thefunction of enforcement and this cannot happen without the landowner’s authority."many thanks

Quote from: DWMB2 on 28 Apr, 2025 13:59Whenever I've used POPLA, in the actual box where it asks for your appeal, I just put something like "See attached document for full appeal".thank you.

Quote from: b789 on 28 Apr, 2025 13:44what is wrong with "OTHER"Given i can only do this once, i would rather ask than make a silly mistake. Especially as i haven't done it before. May I thus assume that its OK to give an overview in the written text box, and upload the appeal in its entirety as its own document?Many thanks

Is it acceptable to state under "summary of reasons to appeal": "I am the registered keeper of the vehicle and I am appealing against the issue of this Parking Charge Notice on the following grounds:1.   The signage is inadequate and unclear – breach of section 3.1.3(J) of the BPA code 2.   Inadequate notice of charge 3.   The Notice to Keeper fails to inform the keeper of the reason behind the charge as per Paragraph 9(2)(b) of PoFa4.   The Notice to Keeper does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 – no invitation to the keeper to pay.5.   The Notice to Keeper  does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 of PoFa. There is no valid reference to a 28 day warning period. 6.   The Notice to Keeper fails to identify the creditor as required by Paragraph 9(2)(h) of PoFA.7.   The NtK fails to clarify whether Groupnexus is acting as an agent or principal8.   The operator has not identified the driver and cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper.9.   The operator is put to strict proof that it holds a valid contract flowing from the landowner in accordance with PPSCoP Section 14." And then upload the whole entity as its own document?

with regards to submitting the appeal and uploading evidence, besides the NTK, correspondance and picture of the T+C, is there anything else i should be uploading?I assume things like a copy of the BPA code of practice/PoFa are not required?AndUnder "grounds for appeal" would this come under "other"?thank you.

Thank you.Version 3: POPLA Verification Code: [Verification Code]GROUPNEXUS PCN Number: [PCN Number]Vehicle Registration: [Vehicle Registration]Re: Response to GROUPNEXUS Evidence Submission and Reaffirmation of Appeal PointsI am the registered keeper of the vehicle and I am appealing against the issue of this Parking Charge Notice on the following grounds:1. The signage is inadequate and unclear – breach of section 3.1.3(J) of the BPA code 2. Inadequate notice of charge 3. The Notice to Keeper fails to inform the keeper of the reason behind the charge as per Paragraph 9(2)(b) of PoFa4. The Notice to Keeper does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 – no invitation to the keeper to pay.5. The Notice to Keeper  does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 of PoFa. There is no valid reference to a 28 day warning period. 6. The Notice to Keeper fails to identify the creditor as required by Paragraph 9(2)(h) of PoFA.7. The NtK fails to clarify whether Groupnexus is acting as an agent or principal8. The operator has not identified the driver and cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper.9. The operator is put to strict proof that it holds a valid contract flowing from the landowner in accordance with PPSCoP Section 14.1. The signage is inadequate and unclear – breach of section 3.1.3(J) of the BPA code GROUPNEXUS asserts that their signage complies with the BPA Code of Practice but provides no specific evidence to support this claim. They rely on generic statements that their signs meet the necessary standards. I wish to draw attention to the following breaches with respect to the BPA code of practice, version 1.1 :(i) 3.1.1: No evidence was provided of adequate entrance signage that clearly conveys the terms and conditions of parking. GROUPNEXUS failed to show that the entrance sign made it clear that terms and conditions applied. The signage at the site does not clearly convey the parking charge of £100. It is buried in a wall of small text, making it almost impossible for a motorist to understand that they are entering into a contract that includes a substantial penalty for non-compliance. In contrast, the signage in ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67 prominently displayed the charge in large, bold text.(ii) 3.1.3 GROUPNEXUS has not shown that the parking charge is prominently displayed. As demonstrated by the image comparison with the Beavis case signage, the £100 charge is obscured in small print, violating Section 3.1.3 of the BPA Code.(iii) 3.1.4 The parking charge is not sufficiently distinct from other information on the sign, making it easy to miss. This violates the requirement for important terms to be clearly distinguishable.The image comparison I provided clearly shows how the £100 charge is obscure and neither bolded nor prominent, supporting my claim that no valid contract was formed.2.Inadequate notice of charge The charge was not adequately brought to the attention of the driver and fails to meet the standards required under ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67The appellant submits that the signage at the location does not sufficiently bring the parking charge to the attention of the driver. This is a key requirement for a charge to be enforceable under the principles established by the Supreme Court in ParkingEye v Beavis.In that case, the Supreme Court made clear that although parking charges possess many of the characteristics of a penalty, they may still be enforceable if they serve a legitimate interest and are not extravagant or unconscionable. Crucially, the Court attached great importance to the fact that the £85 charge in that case was clearly and prominently displayed in large lettering on the signage. At paragraph 100 of the judgment, the Court stated:“None of this means that ParkingEye could charge overstayers whatever it liked. It could not charge a sum which would be out of all proportion to its interest or that of the landowner for whom it is providing the service.”Therefore, proportionality and prominence are central to the enforceability of such charges.In a recent POPLA decision, an assessor rightly concluded that:“The reference to a £100 PCN is written in a much smaller font than the conditions that precede it, particularly the requirements of the maximum stay times, which is significantly more prominent. […] Taking these principles into account, I am going to consider the charge amount in the appellant’s case, as well as the signage. On this, I conclude the charge is not sufficiently brought to the attention of motorists on the signs and therefore it does not meet the expectations of ParkingEye v Beavis.”The same deficiency exists in the present case. The signage fails to present the parking charge with sufficient prominence. The amount is buried in small print and is overshadowed by other conditions on the sign, such as maximum stay time or tariff details, which are displayed more conspicuously. This is not in keeping with the Beavis requirement that the charge be clearly and prominently stated.As such, the signage fails to bring the charge amount to the driver’s attention in a meaningful way, and the charge cannot be considered proportionate or enforceable. The appeal should therefore be allowed.3. The Notice to Keeper fails to inform the keeper of the reason behind the charge as per Paragraph 9(2)(b) of PoFa[/b]GROUPNEXUS has failed to comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012, meaning they cannot transfer liability for the alleged parking charge from the driver to the registered keeper.Under Schedule 4 of PoFA, strict conditions must be met before the keeper can be held liable for a parking charge incurred by the driver. GROUPNEXUS's failure to comply with several key requirements renders the Notice to Keeper (NtK) non-compliant, meaning they cannot hold the registered keeper liable for the charge.GROUPNEXUS’s NtK fails PoFA on the following points:Paragraph 9(2)(a): The NtK must specify the relevant land on which the vehicle was parked. GROUPNEXUS’s vague description of the location is insufficient under PoFA, as it does not clearly identify where the vehicle was allegedly parked, nor does it specify a defined area.Paragraph 9(2)(b): PoFA requires that the NtK must inform the keeper of the reason for issuing the charge. In this case, GROUPNEXUS fails to make the alleged breach of contract clear in their NtK. There is merely a reference to signage on the site. The NtK must inform the keeper why the parking terms were allegedly breached. Thus, this is not sufficiently communicated.4. Notice to Keeper does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 – no invitation to the keeper to pay.It is important to emphasise that PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) sets out a mandatory and unambiguous requirement. It states that the Notice to Keeper must:“state that the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper — (A) to pay the unpaid parking charges; or (B) if the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to provide the creditor with a statement...”The key phrase here is “invite the keeper...to pay the unpaid parking charges.”This requirement is not optional, and there is no allowance in law for this obligation to be met by implication or assumption. The law does not say that a notice may merely “imply” that the keeper is being invited to pay, nor does it say that the fact the NtK is addressed to the keeper is somehow enough. The statute uses the word MUST—meaning that an explicit, unambiguous invitation must be present within the wording of the notice itself.In this case, the Notice to Keeper fails to meet that condition. It does not state anywhere that the keeper is invited to pay the charge. The only references made are to the effect that the keeper should either provide the driver’s details or pass the notice to the driver. There is no direct, clear statement inviting the keeper themselves to make payment. That is a fundamental omission.To be absolutely clear for the avoidance of doubt:• The Notice is not compliant simply because it is addressed to the keeper.• It is not compliant because it implies that someone should take action.• It is only compliant if it specifically and expressly invites the keeper to pay.Adjudicators cannot rewrite or gloss over statutory language. Parliament deliberately included this requirement in Schedule 4 to ensure that the transition of liability from the unknown driver to the registered keeper only occurs when all strict statutory safeguards are met. These safeguards are not technicalities—they are legal thresholds.Whilst some assessors choose to simply gloss over PoFA 9(2)(e), they fail to take into account that sub paragraph (i) is also required to be considered. It is a binary matter and here it is clear that it has not been complied with.In failing to include the required wording, the operator has not met the requirements of PoFA Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i). It is irrelevant what the operator intended to imply. What matters is whether the statutory wording is present on the face of the notice. It is not.Therefore, POPLA must find that the NtK does not comply with PoFA and that keeper liability has not been established. The charge cannot be enforced against the registered keeper.5. The Notice to Keeper  does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 of PoFa. There is no valid reference to a 28 day warning period. Paragraph 9(2)(f): PoFA mandates that the NtK must include a warning to the keeper that if, after 28 days, neither payment nor driver details are provided, the keeper will become liable. GROUPNEXUS’s NtK fails to provide this warning with clearly and in the correct format.6. The Notice to Keeper fails to identify the creditor, as required by Paragraph 9(2)(h) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012Paragraph 9(2)(h) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 states:“The notice must—identify the creditor and specify how and to whom payment or notification to the creditor may be made.”This is a mandatory statutory requirement, and one which this NtK blatantly fails to meet. Nowhere in the Notice does it state who the creditor actually is. There is no sentence—nor even a vague attempt—to say: “The creditor is GroupNexus,”or any other entity to this effect, as required by law.Instead, the Notice merely refers to “we” throughout, without defining who “we” actually is in a legal context. If the operator intends to rely on this ambiguous term to signify the creditor, then at the very least the Notice must state “we, the creditor” or “we, GroupNexus as the creditor.” It does not. The word “creditor” is not mentioned once in the document. The failure to explicitly identify the creditor means the NtK is not compliant with Paragraph 9(2)(h), and therefore the operator cannot hold the keeper liable. As keeper, I cannot be expected to respond to a notice that fails to state, even once, who is legally entitled to the charge.Accordingly, I respectfully request that POPLA allow this appeal and instruct the operator to cancel the charge.7. The NtK fails to clarify whether Groupnexus is acting as an agent or principalFurther compounding the breach of Paragraph 9(2)(h) of PoFA, the Notice to Keeper also fails to state whether Groupnexus is acting:• as the principal, issuing the parking charge in its own name and right (in which case it must be clearly named as the creditor), or• as an agent of the landowner, in which case the actual creditor is the landowner and must be identified.There is no information in the NtK to clarify the capacity in which Groupnexus is acting. This creates a situation where the keeper is being pursued for a payment allegedly owed to an unknown party. This undermines the basic requirements of legal certainty and transparency.POPLA and courts have consistently held that the operator must identify the creditor and clarify their legal standing in relation to the land. Without such clarification, the Notice is materially non-compliant, and keeper liability cannot be established.Given these failures, GROUPNEXUS has not complied with the requirements of PoFA, meaning they cannot transfer liability to the keeper.  Without strict compliance with PoFA, GROUPNEXUS cannot hold the keeper liable, and this charge is therefore unenforceable.8. The operator has not identified the driver and cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper.As GROUPNEXUS cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper, they must provide evidence that the keeper was the driver at the time of the alleged parking contravention.GROUPNEXUS have not provided any evidence to suggest that the registered keeper was the driver.GROUPNEXUS has made no attempt to prove the identity of the driver, and they have not demonstrated why they believe the registered keeper should be held liable without PoFA compliance.As there is no evidence that I, as the registered keeper, was the driver, GROUPNEXUS has no legal grounds to pursue this charge against me.9. The operator is put to strict proof of landowner authority to issue PCNs in their own nameIt is a well-established requirement under the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) and longstanding POPLA precedent that a private parking operator must have clear, current, and contractual authority flowing from the landowner to manage parking and issue PCNs in their own name.GroupNexus is therefore put to strict proof. The operator must produce, but not limited to:• A contemporaneous, unredacted contract or agreement with the landowner (or the landowner’s agent, with written proof of such agency),• Confirmation that the contract permits the operator to issue PCNs in their own name and to pursue unpaid charges,• Proof that the contract is still valid and in force as of the date of the alleged contravention,• Identification of the exact land covered (including “New Street Retail Park”),• Disclosure of all material terms, including the scope, duration, enforcement conditions, and authority limits,• Confirmation of any variations agreed since the contract was first executed.Importantly, any redactions of critical parts of the contract—such as the validity term, the agreed parking conditions, the times of enforcement, or the names, signatures, and dates of the signatories—renders the evidence incomplete and unreliable. These elements are essential to proving that a valid, enforceable contract existed at the material time.Excessive or unnecessary redactions serve only to raise suspicion that the operator has something to hide. It is not sufficient for an operator to say “there is a contract” or to supply a heavily redacted version that fails to meet the standards set out in Section 14 of the PPSCoP. That section sets clear expectations about what a compliant contract must contain.A simple assumption that “there must be a contract because signs are in place” is not acceptable. That position shows a total disregard for the PPSCoP and POPLA’s evidential standards. Signage presence is not proof of legal authority. If the operator cannot prove that all required contractual points under Section 14 have been satisfied, then any suggestion that they have a valid contract must be treated as null and void.Unless GroupNexus produces full, unredacted contractual proof meeting all the criteria of the PPSCoP, they cannot demonstrate any legal standing to issue or pursue this charge. The appeal must therefore be upheld.ConclusionThe Parking Charge Notice fails on multiple substantive grounds, both statutory and procedural. GroupNexus has not complied with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 or the Private Parking Single Code of Practice or the BPA code of practice. As the operator has failed to establish keeper liability and has not evidenced a valid authority to issue the charge, I respectfully request that POPLA uphold this appeal and instruct the operator to cancel the PCN.[/quote]

Version 2: POPLA Verification Code: [Verification Code]GROUPNEXUS PCN Number: [PCN Number]Vehicle Registration: [Vehicle Registration]Re: Response to GROUPNEXUS Evidence Submission and Reaffirmation of Appeal PointsI am the registered keeper of the vehicle and I am appealing against the issue of this Parking Charge Notice on the following grounds:1. The signage is inadequate and unclear – breach of section 3.1.3(J) of the BPA code 2. The Notice to Keeper fails to inform the keeper of the reason behind the charge as per Paragraph 9(2)(b) of PoFa3. The Notice to Keeper does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 – no invitation to the keeper to pay.4. The Notice to Keeper  does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 of PoFa. There is no valid reference to a 28 day warning period. 5. The Notice to Keeper fails to identify the creditor as required by Paragraph 9(2)(h) of PoFA.6. The NtK fails to clarify whether Groupnexus is acting as an agent or principal7. The operator has not identified the driver and cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper.8. The operator is put to strict proof that it holds a valid contract flowing from the landowner in accordance with PPSCoP Section 14.1. The signage is inadequate and unclear – breach of section 3.1.3(J) of the BPA code GROUPNEXUS asserts that their signage complies with the BPA Code of Practice but provides no specific evidence to support this claim. They rely on generic statements that their signs meet the necessary standards. I wish to draw attention to the following breaches with respect to the BPA code of practice, version 1.1 :(i) 3.1.1: No evidence was provided of adequate entrance signage that clearly conveys the terms and conditions of parking. GROUPNEXUS failed to show that the entrance sign made it clear that terms and conditions applied. The signage at the site does not clearly convey the parking charge of £100. It is buried in a wall of small text, making it almost impossible for a motorist to understand that they are entering into a contract that includes a substantial penalty for non-compliance. In contrast, the signage in ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67 prominently displayed the charge in large, bold text.(ii) 3.1.3 GROUPNEXUS has not shown that the parking charge is prominently displayed. As demonstrated by the image comparison with the Beavis case signage, the £100 charge is obscured in small print, violating Section 3.1.3 of the BPA Code.(iii) 3.1.4 The parking charge is not sufficiently distinct from other information on the sign, making it easy to miss. This violates the requirement for important terms to be clearly distinguishable.The image comparison I provided clearly shows how the £100 charge is obscure and neither bolded nor prominent, supporting my claim that no valid contract was formed.2. The Notice to Keeper fails to inform the keeper of the reason behind the charge as per Paragraph 9(2)(b) of PoFaGROUPNEXUS has failed to comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012, meaning they cannot transfer liability for the alleged parking charge from the driver to the registered keeper.Under Schedule 4 of PoFA, strict conditions must be met before the keeper can be held liable for a parking charge incurred by the driver. GROUPNEXUS's failure to comply with several key requirements renders the Notice to Keeper (NtK) non-compliant, meaning they cannot hold the registered keeper liable for the charge.GROUPNEXUS’s NtK fails PoFA on the following points:Paragraph 9(2)(a): The NtK must specify the relevant land on which the vehicle was parked. GROUPNEXUS’s vague description of the location is insufficient under PoFA, as it does not clearly identify where the vehicle was allegedly parked, nor does it specify a defined area.Paragraph 9(2)(b): PoFA requires that the NtK must inform the keeper of the reason for issuing the charge. In this case, GROUPNEXUS fails to make the alleged breach of contract clear in their NtK. There is merely a reference to signage on the site. The NtK must inform the keeper why the parking terms were allegedly breached. Thus, this is not sufficiently communicated.3. Notice to Keeper does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 – no invitation to the keeper to pay.It is important to emphasise that PoFA Schedule 4 Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i) sets out a mandatory and unambiguous requirement. It states that the Notice to Keeper must:“state that the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper — (A) to pay the unpaid parking charges; or (B) if the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to provide the creditor with a statement...”The key phrase here is “invite the keeper...to pay the unpaid parking charges.”This requirement is not optional, and there is no allowance in law for this obligation to be met by implication or assumption. The law does not say that a notice may merely “imply” that the keeper is being invited to pay, nor does it say that the fact the NtK is addressed to the keeper is somehow enough. The statute uses the word MUST—meaning that an explicit, unambiguous invitation must be present within the wording of the notice itself.In this case, the Notice to Keeper fails to meet that condition. It does not state anywhere that the keeper is invited to pay the charge. The only references made are to the effect that the keeper should either provide the driver’s details or pass the notice to the driver. There is no direct, clear statement inviting the keeper themselves to make payment. That is a fundamental omission.To be absolutely clear for the avoidance of doubt:• The Notice is not compliant simply because it is addressed to the keeper.• It is not compliant because it implies that someone should take action.• It is only compliant if it specifically and expressly invites the keeper to pay.Adjudicators cannot rewrite or gloss over statutory language. Parliament deliberately included this requirement in Schedule 4 to ensure that the transition of liability from the unknown driver to the registered keeper only occurs when all strict statutory safeguards are met. These safeguards are not technicalities—they are legal thresholds.Whilst some assessors choose to simply gloss over PoFA 9(2)(e), they fail to take into account that sub paragraph (i) is also required to be considered. It is a binary matter and here it is clear that it has not been complied with.In failing to include the required wording, the operator has not met the requirements of PoFA Paragraph 9(2)(e)(i). It is irrelevant what the operator intended to imply. What matters is whether the statutory wording is present on the face of the notice. It is not.Therefore, POPLA must find that the NtK does not comply with PoFA and that keeper liability has not been established. The charge cannot be enforced against the registered keeper.4. The Notice to Keeper  does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 of PoFa. There is no valid reference to a 28 day warning period. Paragraph 9(2)(f): PoFA mandates that the NtK must include a warning to the keeper that if, after 28 days, neither payment nor driver details are provided, the keeper will become liable. GROUPNEXUS’s NtK fails to provide this warning with clearly and in the correct format.5. The Notice to Keeper fails to identify the creditor, as required by Paragraph 9(2)(h) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012Paragraph 9(2)(h) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 states:“The notice must—identify the creditor and specify how and to whom payment or notification to the creditor may be made.”This is a mandatory statutory requirement, and one which this NtK blatantly fails to meet. Nowhere in the Notice does it state who the creditor actually is. There is no sentence—nor even a vague attempt—to say: “The creditor is GroupNexus,”or any other entity to this effect, as required by law.Instead, the Notice merely refers to “we” throughout, without defining who “we” actually is in a legal context. If the operator intends to rely on this ambiguous term to signify the creditor, then at the very least the Notice must state “we, the creditor” or “we, GroupNexus as the creditor.” It does not. The word “creditor” is not mentioned once in the document. The failure to explicitly identify the creditor means the NtK is not compliant with Paragraph 9(2)(h), and therefore the operator cannot hold the keeper liable. As keeper, I cannot be expected to respond to a notice that fails to state, even once, who is legally entitled to the charge.Accordingly, I respectfully request that POPLA allow this appeal and instruct the operator to cancel the charge.6. The NtK fails to clarify whether Groupnexus is acting as an agent or principalFurther compounding the breach of Paragraph 9(2)(h) of PoFA, the Notice to Keeper also fails to state whether Groupnexus is acting:• as the principal, issuing the parking charge in its own name and right (in which case it must be clearly named as the creditor), or• as an agent of the landowner, in which case the actual creditor is the landowner and must be identified.There is no information in the NtK to clarify the capacity in which Groupnexus is acting. This creates a situation where the keeper is being pursued for a payment allegedly owed to an unknown party. This undermines the basic requirements of legal certainty and transparency.POPLA and courts have consistently held that the operator must identify the creditor and clarify their legal standing in relation to the land. Without such clarification, the Notice is materially non-compliant, and keeper liability cannot be established.Given these failures, GROUPNEXUS has not complied with the requirements of PoFA, meaning they cannot transfer liability to the keeper.  Without strict compliance with PoFA, GROUPNEXUS cannot hold the keeper liable, and this charge is therefore unenforceable.7. The operator has not identified the driver and cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper.As GROUPNEXUS cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper, they must provide evidence that the keeper was the driver at the time of the alleged parking contravention.GROUPNEXUS have not provided any evidence to suggest that the registered keeper was the driver.GROUPNEXUS has made no attempt to prove the identity of the driver, and they have not demonstrated why they believe the registered keeper should be held liable without PoFA compliance.As there is no evidence that I, as the registered keeper, was the driver, GROUPNEXUS has no legal grounds to pursue this charge against me.8. The operator is put to strict proof of landowner authority to issue PCNs in their own nameIt is a well-established requirement under the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) and longstanding POPLA precedent that a private parking operator must have clear, current, and contractual authority flowing from the landowner to manage parking and issue PCNs in their own name.GroupNexus is therefore put to strict proof. The operator must produce, but not limited to:• A contemporaneous, unredacted contract or agreement with the landowner (or the landowner’s agent, with written proof of such agency),• Confirmation that the contract permits the operator to issue PCNs in their own name and to pursue unpaid charges,• Proof that the contract is still valid and in force as of the date of the alleged contravention,• Identification of the exact land covered (including “New Street Retail Park”),• Disclosure of all material terms, including the scope, duration, enforcement conditions, and authority limits,• Confirmation of any variations agreed since the contract was first executed.Importantly, any redactions of critical parts of the contract—such as the validity term, the agreed parking conditions, the times of enforcement, or the names, signatures, and dates of the signatories—renders the evidence incomplete and unreliable. These elements are essential to proving that a valid, enforceable contract existed at the material time.Excessive or unnecessary redactions serve only to raise suspicion that the operator has something to hide. It is not sufficient for an operator to say “there is a contract” or to supply a heavily redacted version that fails to meet the standards set out in Section 14 of the PPSCoP. That section sets clear expectations about what a compliant contract must contain.A simple assumption that “there must be a contract because signs are in place” is not acceptable. That position shows a total disregard for the PPSCoP and POPLA’s evidential standards. Signage presence is not proof of legal authority. If the operator cannot prove that all required contractual points under Section 14 have been satisfied, then any suggestion that they have a valid contract must be treated as null and void.Unless GroupNexus produces full, unredacted contractual proof meeting all the criteria of the PPSCoP, they cannot demonstrate any legal standing to issue or pursue this charge. The appeal must therefore be upheld.ConclusionThe Parking Charge Notice fails on multiple substantive grounds, both statutory and procedural. GroupNexus has not complied with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 or the Private Parking Single Code of Practice or the BPA code of practice. As the operator has failed to establish keeper liability and has not evidenced a valid authority to issue the charge, I respectfully request that POPLA uphold this appeal and instruct the operator to cancel the PCN.

sorry to bump the post - still looking for the "OK" before sending this off!

I have concocted/amended the following: "POPLA Verification Code: [Verification Code]GROUPNEXUS PCN Number: [PCN Number]Vehicle Registration: [Vehicle Registration]Re: Response to GROUPNEXUS Evidence Submission and Reaffirmation of Appeal PointsI am the registered keeper of the vehicle in question and have reviewed the evidence submitted by GROUPNEXUS. I submit the following detailed response to their evidence, highlighting critical points from my original appeal that have not been fully addressed or rebutted, alongside new issues with the evidence they have provided.1. **Signage: Inadequate and Unclear – No Valid Contract Formed**The signage at the site does not clearly convey the parking charge of £100. It is buried in a wall of small text, making it almost impossible for a motorist to understand that they are entering into a contract that includes a substantial penalty for non-compliance. In contrast, the signage in ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67 prominently displayed the charge in large, bold text.GROUPNEXUS's Response:GROUPNEXUS claims their signage complies with BPA Code of Practice, but they fail to address the core issue: the size, clarity, and prominence of the £100 parking charge. Their response does not rebut the comparison to the Beavis case, where the £85 charge was displayed clearly and conspicuously. GROUPNEXUS’s sign, by contrast, buries the charge in small print, failing to make it obvious to motorists.GROUPNEXUS did not provide evidence that their £100 charge is displayed in a similarly prominent fashion as required by the BPA Code of Practice, Section 3.1.3 (specifically, subsection J: “display the parking charge that the parking operator may apply for breaches of such terms and conditions as may apply in a large font”) or that it was brought to the driver’s attention in line with PoFA requirements. The image comparison I provided clearly shows how the £100 charge is obscure and neither bolded nor prominent, supporting my claim that no valid contract was formed.2. **Keeper Liability – Non-Compliance with PoFA 2012**GROUPNEXUS has failed to comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012, meaning they cannot transfer liability for the alleged parking charge from the driver to the registered keeper.Under Schedule 4 of PoFA, strict conditions must be met before the keeper can be held liable for a parking charge incurred by the driver. GROUPNEXUS's failure to comply with several key requirements renders the Notice to Keeper (NtK) non-compliant, meaning they cannot hold the registered keeper liable for the charge.GROUPNEXUS’s NtK fails PoFA on the following points:Paragraph 9(2)(a): The NtK must specify the relevant land on which the vehicle was parked. GROUPNEXUS’s vague description of the location is insufficient under PoFA, as it does not clearly identify where the vehicle was allegedly parked, nor does it specify a defined area. Paragraph 9(2)(b): PoFA requires that the NtK must inform the keeper of the reason for issuing the charge. In this case, GROUPNEXUS fails to make the alleged breach of contract clear in their NtK. There is merely a reference to signage on the site. The NtK must inform the keeper why the parking terms were allegedly breached. Thus, this is not sufficiently communicated.Paragraph 9(2)(e): PoFA requires that the NtK must include reference to the fact the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper to (i)to pay the unpaid parking charges; or(ii)if the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to notify the creditor of the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and to pass the notice on to the driver. There is no reference to a creditor in this notice to keeper. Therefore, this requirement is not satisfied as it is not specific to the fact that the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and current address for the service for the driver. Second, with reference to an “invitation” for the keeper to pay the charge, the NTK must “invite” the keeper to pay the charge or provide the name and address of the driver. The wording on GROUPNEXUS’s NtK does not contain this necessary invitation, which is a critical requirement under PoFA.Paragraph 9(2)(f): PoFA mandates that the NtK must include a warning to the keeper that if, after 28 days, neither payment nor driver details are provided, the keeper will become liable. GROUPNEXUS’s NtK fails to provide this warning with clearly and in the correct format.Paragraph 9(2)(h) PoFa requires the NTK to identify the creditor and specify how and to whom payment or notification to the creditor may be made. Again, there is no such reference to the creditor to be found on the NTK. Given these failures, GROUPNEXUS has not complied with the requirements of PoFA, meaning they cannot transfer liability to the keeper.  Without strict compliance with PoFA, GROUPNEXUS cannot hold the keeper liable, and this charge is therefore unenforceable.3. **No Evidence That the Keeper is the Driver**As GROUPNEXUS cannot rely on PoFA to transfer liability to the keeper, they must provide evidence that the keeper was the driver at the time of the alleged parking contravention.GROUPNEXUS have not provided any evidence to suggest that the registered keeper was the driver.GROUPNEXUS has made no attempt to prove the identity of the driver, and they have not demonstrated why they believe the registered keeper should be held liable without PoFA compliance.As there is no evidence that I, as the registered keeper, was the driver, GROUPNEXUS has no legal grounds to pursue this charge against me.4. **Breaches of BPA Code of Practice**GROUPNEXUS's signage and operational practices fail to comply with the British Parking Association (BPA) Code of Practice, including Section 3.1.1  (clear and prominent entrance signs), Section 3.1.3 (prominent display of parking charges) and section 3.1.4 (adequate contrast of sign text) GROUPNEXUS asserts that their signage complies with the BPA Code of Practice but provides no specific evidence to support this claim. They rely on generic statements that their signs meet the necessary standards. (i) 3.1.1: No evidence was provided of adequate entrance signage that clearly conveys the terms and conditions of parking. GROUPNEXUS failed to show that the entrance sign made it clear that terms and conditions applied.(ii) 3.1.3 GROUPNEXUS has not shown that the parking charge is prominently displayed. As demonstrated by the image comparison with the Beavis case signage, the £100 charge is obscured in small print, violating Section 3.1.3 of the BPA Code.(iii) 3.1.4 The parking charge is not sufficiently distinct from other information on the sign, making it easy to miss. This violates the requirement for important terms to be clearly distinguishable.**Conclusion:**In conclusion, GROUPNEXUS has failed to sufficiently demonstrate compliance with both PoFa and the BPA code. (a) Inadequate signage that fails to form a valid contract with the driver, particularly regarding the display of the £100 charge.(b) Non-compliance with PoFA 2012, meaning they cannot hold the registered keeper liable.In the alternative, no evidence has been provided that the registered keeper was the driver.(c) Breach of the BPA Code of Practice, with inadequate entrance signage and unclear display of parking terms. Based on these points, I respectfully request that POPLA uphold my appeal and instruct GROUPNEXUS to cancel the Parking Charge Notice."The one i am unsure about is 9(2)(a) - as the NTK makes reference to where the client's property is based. Which is simply "retail park + [first three letters of postcode] many thanks

"Dear Sir/Madam,Thank you for your correspondence relating to your Parking Charge.The Charge was issued and the signage is displayed in compliance with The Private Parking Sector Single Code of Practice and all relevant laws and regulations. Clear signs at the entrance of this site and throughout inform drivers of the 3-hour limit, and it is not possible to access any part of the premises without passing multiple signs. Your representations are not considered a mitigating circumstance for appeal.We confirm the Charge was issued under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. As no driver details have been provided, we are holding the registered keeper of the vehicle liable.In light of this, on this occasion, your representations have been carefully considered and rejected.We can confirm that we will hold the Charge at the current rate of £60 for a further 14 days from the date of this correspondence. If no payment is received within this period, and no further appeal to POPLA is made, the Charge will escalate and further costs may be added.Please find below the payment options: Online: www.groupnexus.co.uk/pcnBy Telephone: Credit/Debit cards via our automated payment line: 0844 371 8784By Post: Cheques or Postal Orders to: PO Box 1750, Northampton, NN1 9PN ----------You have now reached the end of our internal appeals procedure. This correspondence represents our final stance on the matter and we will therefore not enter into any further correspondence.CORRESPONDENCE RECEIVED FOLLOWING THE REJECTION OF AN APPEAL WILL NOT CHANGE THE OUTCOME OR EXTEND THE DATE IN WHICH PAYMENT SHOULD BE MADE.Although we have now rejected your appeal, you may still have recourse to appeal to Parking On Private Land Appeals (POPLA), an independent appeals service. An appeal to POPLA must be made within 28 days of the date of this correspondence.  POPLA will only consider cases on the grounds that the Parking Charge exceeded the appropriate amount, that the vehicle was not improperly parked or had been stolen, or that you were otherwise not liable for the Parking Charge.  To appeal to POPLA, please go to their website http://www.popla.co.uk and follow the instructions. If you would rather deal with this matter by post, please contact our Appeals Office and we will send you the necessary paperwork. Your POPLA reference number is: [REMOVED]Please note that if your appeal does not relate to the above criteria or is rejected by POPLA for any reason, you will no longer qualify for payment at the reduced rate. POPLA will not consider any cases where payment has been made. You must pay the charge or appeal to POPLA, you cannot do both.By law we are also required to inform you that Ombudsman Services (www.ombudsman-services.org/) provides an alternative dispute resolution service that would be competent to deal with your appeal.  However, we have not chosen to participate in their alternative dispute resolution service.  As such should you wish to appeal then you must do so to POPLA, as explained above.Yours faithfully,CP Plus Ltd      "