Thank you once again
@b789;
1. The Notice to Keeper failed to fully comply with all of the requirements of Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 to hold the keeper liable. It did not include a mandatory invitation to the keeper to pay the unpaid parking charge, as required by section 9(2)(e)(i) of the Act – “The notice must… state that the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper: to pay the unpaid parking charges…” and section 21.11 of the Code of Practice 2024 – “The Notice to Keeper serves three purposes: It invites the keeper to pay the unpaid parking charge…”. Within the initial letter sent to ourselves as the keeper, there was no invitation, offer or request for us to make the payment of this parking charge notice.
2. The operator has not shown that the person they are pursuing is the driver – They are pursuing a company, and therefore the entity they’re pursuing cannot be the driver. We, the company, cannot be held liable due to the operators PoFA failure in point 1 above. We are responding as the company, and a company cannot be the driver.
3. The signage is deficient and there are no ground markings to delineate the different car parks which have different terms as per the attached photos. The signage provides contradictory information by initially advising motorists that there is a one-hour maximum stay for that area of the car park. There are no ground markings differentiating the different areas of a significant car park containing some 60+ spaces.
4. The operator has not demonstrated that they have a valid contract flowing from the landowner to be able to issue PCN’s in its own name. No contract has been shown to our company, as keeper, to show the operator is permitted by the landowner to issue parking charge notices to keepers.
5. The operator has breached the joint Single Code of Practice by failing to identify the location and the relevant land in their Notice to Keeper as per section 17.2.1.e – “All parking charges which are issued including:… e)Location including outward postcode…”. The letter received simply states “KFC Ellesmere Centre, Walkden”. This does not comply with the Single Code of Practice which states the full location including postcode is required.
Would this be sufficient?
Many thanks