Hi All - is this draft OK? Grateful for review...
I am writing to appeal a recent penalty charge notice received for briefly drifting into a bus lane while making a left turn.
The incident occurred on a road the driver does not regularly travel, and their momentary lapse was not an attempt to exploit the bus lane. It was an unintended mistake while navigating unfamiliar roads. Importantly, this the drivers first offence of this nature, and the incursion into the bus lane was on a de-minimis basis, with no disruption to traffic flow or safety - furthermore, there was no intention to gain any advantage over any other motorist.
Considering the minimal nature of the infringement, the drivers commitment to safe driving, and this being a first-time offence, I respectfully request your discretion in cancelling the fine.