Hi all,
this be draft representation I'm looking to send. I tried to capture most of the arguments proffered above...excessive or too little? let me know your mind
Dear Luton Borough Council, Parking Services, Town Hall, Luton
LU1 2BQ
Dear Sir,
PCN Number: LU06800240
I refer to the NTO in respect of the above PCN, see copy enclosed. I hereby make representation on the grounds of procedural impropriety on behalf of the authority.
[1]As you will see, the notice gives a 'Notice to Owner Date' of 11 October 2023 and a 'Date of Posting' of 9 October. This is a procedural impropriety because the date of the notice is clearly not the date it was posted. The NTO is further rendered improper because the recipient is unable to assess which date, if either, is the date of posting which therefore renders all subsequent references to payment and appeals meaningless because they can only be calculated by reference to the date of service which itself is predicated on the date of posting.
The Civil Enforcement of Road Traffic Contraventions (Approved Devices, Charging Guidelines and General Provisions) (England) Regulations 2022 Notice to owner 20.—(1) Where— (a)a penalty charge notice has been given with respect to a vehicle under regulation 9, and
(3) A notice to owner must, in addition to the matters required to be included in it under regulation 3(2) of the 2022 Appeals Regulations, state—
(a)the date of the notice, which must be the date on which the notice is posted,
[2] the notice's statement that the penalty will be increased (as opposed to 'may' which is prescribed under the regulations) is a further impropriety. [cf Regulation 2022 section 20 (3) (g)]
(g)that if, after the payment period has expired, no representations have been made under regulation 5 of the 2022 Appeals Regulations and the penalty charge has not been paid, the enforcement authority may increase the penalty charge by the applicable surcharge,
[3] signage was inadequate as there was no sign within the required distance of start of the prohibition [Traffic Signs Manual 3:13.4.15. A sign should normally be erected within 15 m of the start and end of the prohibition]
[4] I believe that council has acted improperly and in breach of regulations for the above reasons; and request that this PCN be cancelled
Yours faithfully,