How about something like this
I am making formal representations against the Notice to Owner because the PCN contains an error. The PCN states that I was at Maples Place. However, my vehicle was parked on Cavell Street, which is a different location.
Because the PCN does not correctly say the location of the where I was parked.
As a result, the PCN is invalid, the contravention did not occur, and the PCN and the Notice to Owner must be cancelled.