There are two boxes and they're not that far from each other:

The suggestion that Bromley Police Station is in Kent is without foundation, I know that some people in the outer borough think that they're in the neighboring county, but they're not. In fact Bromley Police station is in the north of the borough, and it's closer to the border with Lewisham than the border with Kent.
Here is a revised draft:
Dear London Borough of Bromley,
Firstly the alleged contravention did not occur, because there is no such location as High Street Bromley South, Bromley Police Station is located on High Street Bromley, but that is not the location of the alleged contravention in any event.
The location shown in the video is the junction between High Street and the unnamed access road to the Waitrose supermarket car park, which is not the location stated on the penalty charge notice.
Furthermore, the penalty charge notice is defective in any event. This is because the penalty charge wrongly states that the authority may disregard representations made later than 28 days from the date of the notice, rather than 28 days from the date of service of the notice. The authority is not permitted to cut short the period for making representations in this way.
In light of the above the penalty charge notice must be cancelled.
Yours faithfully,