Hi Everyone,
Bumping this with a new thread since my
original post didn't get any replies.
Out of 4 identical IAS appeals, 2 were allowed and 2 were dismissed. Universal Parking Enforcement (UPE) has now issued a
Letter before Claim for the two dismissed ones.
I used AI to draft the response below to Credit Investigation Services (the debt collectors). Could the forum seniors please review it? Let me know if it looks good to send or if I'm leaving any loopholes open.
Thanks in advance!
FORMAL RESPONSE TO LETTER BEFORE CLAIM — INTENT TO DEFEND
Dear Sirs,
I am writing in formal response to the Letters Before Claim dated 15 July 2026 issued by Universal Parking Enforcement Ltd regarding Debt References X and Y. I deny any liability to your client for these alleged debts.
Please note that this matter is heavily disputed. If your client chooses to issue formal court proceedings without attempting Alternative Dispute Resolution (ADR), I will bring this response directly to the attention of the Court to seek formal sanctions and a full conduct cost order against them under Paragraph 13 of the Pre-Action Protocol for Debt Claims.
My defense rests on the following binding grounds:
1. Definitive Legal Adjudication on Keeper Liability (POFA 2012)
The alleged debts stem from a series of five PCNs issued within a brief window at 391 Dunstable Road involving hire vehicles where I was the hirer, not the driver.
While your client may reference earlier dismissed historical appeals, the Independent Appeals Service (IAS) has since issued definitive, final rulings on identical tickets involving the exact same hirer, location, and operating procedures (see PCN C and PCN D). In decisions dated 04/06/2026, the legally qualified IAS Adjudicator explicitly ruled:
"To transfer liability to the hirer as the hirer, POFA sets out specific requirements, referenced by the Appellant, which have not been met... The appeal is allowed."
Your client completely failed to comply with the mandatory statutory conditions set out in Schedule 4, Paragraph 14(2) of the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012. Specifically, your client failed to provide the mandatory hire documentation "together" with the Notice to Hirer in the post. Your client only supplied these documents months later during the IAS appeal platform stages.
Because your client's administrative mailing process is fundamentally non-compliant with PoFA, keeper liability has failed to transfer. They have no lawful right to pursue me for these debts. Any attempt to litigate these remaining claims despite an independent body ruling their transfer process illegal constitutes vexatious litigation.
2. Procedural Failure and Absolute Lack of Service (The 5th PCN: E)
I am aware through my hire company, Enterprise, that a fifth citation exists (PCN E, issued 31/12/2025). Your client failed to ever serve a statutory Notice to Hirer to my home address for this ticket, completely denying me my consumer right to access the portal and appeal. Consequently, liability has completely failed to transfer under PoFA 2012, and any claim on this ticket will be robustly defended as an abuse of process.
3. Formal Request for ADR
To avoid wasting valuable court time, I formally request that you refer these accounts back to independent ADR or mediation. Given that the IAS has already established that your client's hire transfer documentation is legally invalid, a neutral mediator will confirm that pursuing these claims is completely unsustainable.
4. Civil Procedure Rules (CPR) Document Request
To narrow the issues, please provide the following documentation within 14 days:
1.Full copies of the original single-page mandatory PoFA-compliant documentation your client claims to have served "together" to transfer liability for PCNs A and B.
2.A copy of the direct contract providing your client with landowner authority to operate at 391 Dunstable Road.
If you fail to provide these or reject ADR to rush into a claim, I will immediately request the Court to stay the proceedings until you comply and seek full conduct costs.
I expect your written confirmation that these accounts have been placed on a formal protocol hold.
Yours faithfully,