Thanks for all the help so far- I've drafted the following appeal after finding some samples on the forums- any advice- particularly on sections 3-5 would be appreciated.
POPLA Appeal: Parking Charge Notice Issued by UK Parking Control Ltd (UKPC)
APPELLANT: Registered Keeper
PARKING OPERATOR: UK Parking Control Ltd (UKPC)
PCN REFERENCE: [Insert PCN Number]
VEHICLE REGISTRATION: [Insert Vehicle Registration]
DATE OF ALLEGED CONTRAVENTION: 10/01/2025
DATE OF NTK ISSUE: 13/01/2025
The appeal is based on the following grounds:
1. UKPC’s Notice to Keeper (NtK) Fails to Comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
2. No Presumption That the Keeper Was the Driver
3. The parking bay is a parent and child bay
4. Parking bay has obstruction within it
5. No Genuine Pre-Estimate of Loss
6. Inadequate Signage – No Contract Formed
7. Lack of Landowner Authority – No Proof of UKPC’s Right to Operate
1. UKPC’s Notice to Keeper (NtK) Fails to Comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)
• UKPC has not met the statutory requirements under Schedule 4, Paragraph 9(2)(a) of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA).
• The NtK issued only states that the vehicle was observed at 16:46, which is a single moment in time, not a period of parking.
• Case law in Brennan v Premier Parking Solutions (2023) [H6DP632H] confirms that PoFA requires a defined period of parking, and a mere timestamp does not satisfy this requirement.
• Since UKPC has failed to comply with PoFA, Keeper liability does not apply, and they can only pursue the driver, whom they have not identified.
Accordingly, POPLA must rule that the PCN is unenforceable against the Keeper.
2. No Presumption That the Keeper Was the Driver
• UKPC has made no attempt to identify the driver and is attempting to hold the Registered Keeper liable without meeting PoFA compliance.
• In VCS v Edward (2023) [H0KF6C9CC], the court reaffirmed that there is no presumption in law that the Keeper was the driver.
• The Registered Keeper has exercised their right not to name the driver, and no adverse inference can be drawn.
As UKPC has not identified the driver, and the Keeper is not liable under PoFA, the PCN must be cancelled.
3. The parking bay was a parent and child bay
• The alleged contravention is “Not parked correctly within the markings of a bay or space”, but UKPC has failed to account for the fact that the bay the driver parked in was a parent and child bay and the hatched area forms part of the bay for use of the driver and the occupants of the vehicle.
• It is not made clear in any signage that the hatched area do not form part of the parent and child bay- as the space to the left of the bay being used during this alleged contravention is also a parent and child bay it is assumed that half the hatched area is for the use of either vehicle.
• The alleged contravention is therefore ambiguous, and the burden of proof lies with UKPC to demonstrate a clear breach.
4. The bay has an obstruction within it
• As is clearly visible in photos provided by UKPC, there is a pillar that protrudes into the parking bay and thus, UKPC have not upheld their duty to provide suitable parking spaces.
• Had UKPC provided bays which are of a suitable size and without obstructions parking within the hatched area or walking path, would not have been necessary.
Since UKPC has failed to provide a suitable parking space, this PCN must be dismissed.
5. No Genuine Pre-Estimate of Loss
• UKPC has not demonstrated that being parked in the hatched area has caused any loss or inconvenience.
• In ParkingEye v Beavis (2015) UKSC 67, the Supreme Court held that a parking charge must serve a legitimate interest beyond mere deterrence.
Given that, had the driver parked in a way that would ensure all spaces around it were accessible, the charge doesn’t meet the necessary criteria of serving a legitimate interest.
6. Inadequate Signage – No Contract Formed
• The signage at this location is high up and contains very small text, making it difficult to read unless the driver actively seeks it out to review the terms and conditions of parking. Even if the driver attempts to read the sign, the charge for breaching any terms is not “adequately” brought to the attention of the driver or anyone attempting to read it.
• The parking charge of £100 is buried in a block of small print, which does not meet the PoFA requirement for “adequate notice”.
• The most prominent text on the sign states “PAY ON EXIT”, which is instructive rather than contractual.
• In ParkingEye v Beavis (2015) UKSC 67, the Supreme Court held that a parking information must be clearly and prominently displayed.
Since the terms were not adequately communicated, no contractual agreement was formed, and therefore no breach occurred.
7. Lack of Landowner Authority – No Proof of UKPC’s Right to Operate
• Under Section 7 of the BPA Code of Practice, UKPC must provide strict proof that it has the landowner’s authority to issue PCNs at this location.
• UKPC has not provided any evidence that it holds a valid contract with the landowner.
• Any contract must include specific clauses permitting the issuing and enforcement of PCNs.
• The proof must be a contractual right flowing from the landowner. A signed statement from an agent of the landowner is not evidence that the agent has the right to make a contractual arrangement with the operator.
UKPC is put to strict proof that it has a legally binding agreement to operate on this land. If no valid contract is provided, this PCN must be cancelled.
CONCLUSION
The PCN issued by UKPC is fundamentally flawed on multiple legal and evidential grounds:
• The NtK fails to comply with PoFA due to the absence of a “period of parking,” making Keeper liability impossible.
• There is no presumption that the Keeper was the driver, and UKPC has not identified the driver.
•The hatched area forms part of the parking space to ensure children are abel to enter and exit the vehicle safely.
• The bay has a permanent obstruction within it necessitating parking over the walking path.
• The signage is inadequate, meaning no contract was formed.
• UKPC has not provided proof of landowner authority.
Given these significant deficiencies, I request that POPLA allow this appeal and cancel the PCN in its entirety.
Signed,
[Registered Keeper's Name]