It’ll be rejected, simply because they always do, acceptance means no ££. But it’s fine as far as I can see. If you also can’t read the sign then you may want to add something about this too.
Noted. Amended the letter to include a point of the fact the photo of the sign is difficult to read. See below. Thanks again for your help
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to formally appeal the above Parking Charge Notice, issued in respect of an alleged contravention at Beckton Triangle Retail Park, 5 Claps Gate Lane, London, E6 6LG on 15/07/2026.
**First ground of appeal: the Notice to Keeper does not comply with Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012**
Schedule 4, paragraph 9(2)(a) of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 sets out mandatory requirements for a notice to keeper. It states that the notice must:
"specify the vehicle, the relevant land on which it was parked **and the period of parking** to which the notice relates."
The Notice to Keeper I received specifies only a single timestamp — "on the 15/07/2026 at 19:06:05" — as the moment the vehicle was recorded. It does not state a period of parking, i.e. it gives no start time and end time for the parking event to which the charge relates. A single point-in-time observation is not a "period of parking" within the meaning of paragraph 9(2)(a).
As the Notice to Keeper fails to meet this mandatory statutory requirement, it does not comply with paragraph 9 of Schedule 4. Consequently, the provisions in paragraph 6 of Schedule 4 which would otherwise transfer liability from the driver to the registered keeper do not apply. As I am not obliged to name the driver, and in the absence of a compliant notice to keeper, there is no lawful basis on which keeper liability can be pursued in this case.
**Second ground of appeal: UK Parking Control Ltd has not evidenced that the signage terms were legible**
The Notice to Keeper asserts that "the Terms and Conditions of the car park were clearly and prominently displayed." The burden of proving this rests with UK Parking Control Ltd. However, the photographic evidence of the signage provided in support of this Parking Charge is not legible — the text of the terms and conditions cannot be read from the photograph, even on close inspection.
For a Parking Charge to be enforceable, UK Parking Control Ltd must be able to demonstrate that the terms were brought adequately to the attention of the driver by way of clear and legible signage, in line with the British Parking Association's Code of Practice, of which it is a member. As the photographic evidence relied upon fails to establish that the signage was legible, UK Parking Control Ltd has not discharged its burden of proving that the terms were adequately displayed, and I do not accept that a contract on those terms was validly formed.
I look forward to your written confirmation that this charge has been cancelled. Should you reject this appeal, please note my right to escalate to POPLA, and I reserve all rights in relation to this matter.
Yours faithfully,