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Draft POPLA Appeal
POPLA Code: [Insert POPLA Code] Vehicle Registration: [Insert VRM] PCN Reference: [Insert PCN Number] Appellant: [Insert Your Name] (Keeper)
Summary of Appeal
I am the registered keeper of the vehicle and I submit this appeal on the following grounds:
Keeper Liability not established: The Notice to Keeper (NtK) was not delivered within the relevant period required by Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA).
No Breach of Contract (Loading is not Parking): The vehicle was stopped briefly for the purpose of loading, which is distinct from parking (Jopson v Homeguard).
Breach of the Equality Act 2010: The operator failed to make reasonable adjustments for a driver with a protected characteristic (Blue Badge holder).
De Minimis: The duration of the stop (1 minute 5 seconds) is trivial and falls within a reasonable grace period.
Inadequate Signage: The operator has not proved that clear and obvious signs formed a contract.
No Landowner Authority: The operator has not proved they have the authority to issue charges on this land.
Detailed Grounds for Appeal
1. Keeper Liability not established (PoFA Schedule 4 Non-Compliance) The operator has issued a Notice to Keeper (NtK) citing the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA) to claim keeper liability. However, they have failed to meet the strict conditions required to transfer liability from the driver to the keeper.
The alleged contravention took place on 17/10/2025. The NtK is dated 25/10/2025. However, this document was not received by me until 07/11/2025.
PoFA Schedule 4, Paragraph 9(5) specifies that the relevant period for service of the notice is 14 days beginning with the day after that on which the specified period of parking ended.
While PoFA Paragraph 9(6) creates a rebuttable presumption that a notice is delivered on the second working day after posting, I hereby rebut this presumption. I certify that the Notice was not received until 07/11/2025, which is 21 days after the event and well outside the statutory 14-day limit.
As the keeper, I cannot be held liable unless the operator can provide concrete evidence (such as a certificate of posting or a track-and-trace record) proving that the Notice was actually posted via First Class mail on the working day immediately following the "Date of Issue." A generic bulk-mail print log is insufficient to prove the specific date of entry into the postal system for this specific letter. Since the Notice was served late, the operator has forfeited the right to claim keeper liability.
2. No Breach of Contract (Loading is not Parking) The vehicle was not "parked" in the definition of the term established by case law. The vehicle was stationary for a total of 1 minute and 5 seconds for the sole purpose of collecting pre-ordered heavy goods.
In the key appeal case of Jopson v Homeguard Services [2016] B9GF0A9E, His Honour Judge Harris QC found that the act of stopping to load or unload does not constitute "parking." The Judge distinguished between "parking" (leaving a car) and "stopping" (a temporary pause for a specific purpose, such as loading). As the vehicle was engaged in loading heavy goods—an activity incompatible with "parking"—no breach of the parking contract occurred.
3. Breach of the Equality Act 2010 (Reasonable Adjustments) The driver of the vehicle is a Blue Badge holder and suffers from a disability that limits their mobility and ability to carry heavy items over distance. A valid Blue Badge was clearly displayed and is visible in the operator's own evidence.
On the day in question, all designated disabled bays were occupied (some by vehicles not displaying Blue Badges). Under the Equality Act 2010, service providers are under a statutory duty to make "reasonable adjustments" to allow disabled persons to access their services.
Forcing a disabled driver to park in a distant bay (had one even been available) and carry heavy goods is not a reasonable expectation. A temporary stop of 65 seconds nearest to the collection point to load goods is a "reasonable adjustment" to the parking policy. By issuing a PCN for this necessary accommodation, the operator is engaging in indirect discrimination and is in breach of the Equality Act 2010.
4. De Minimis and Grace Periods The operator’s evidence shows the vehicle was present for a mere 1 minute and 5 seconds. The British Parking Association (BPA) Code of Practice requires operators to allow a reasonable grace period. A duration of roughly one minute is de minimis (too small to be concerned with by the law) and clearly falls within the time required for a driver to assess the situation, attempt to locate a valid bay, or load goods. It is unreasonable to suggest a contract to park was formed, accepted, and breached in such a trivial timeframe.
5. Inadequate Signage The operator is put to strict proof that their signage is prominent, clear, and legible, and that it specifically forbids the activity of loading/unloading. If the signage is "forbidding" (e.g., "No Parking"), it offers no license to park and therefore no contract can be formed; the matter would be one of trespass, for which only the landowner can sue for actual damages (which are zero).
6. No Landowner Authority The operator is put to strict proof that they have a valid contract with the landowner that specifically authorises them to pursue parking charges in their own name at this location, and that this authorisation was in effect on the date in question. A redacted or generic witness statement is insufficient; I require a copy of the actual contract chain.
Conclusion For the reasons stated above—specifically the failure to serve the NtK within the PoFA 14-day limit and the protection afforded by the Equality Act—this charge is invalid and must be cancelled.
Yours faithfully,
[Your Name]