There is a proposed response to a BW Legal LoC at https://www.ftla.uk/private-parking-tickets/help-needed/msg70159/#msg70159 which notes how £100 has magically become £170 and you might want to adapt to your specifics because many of the points won’t be applicable.
BW Legal
Enterprise House
Apex View
Leeds
West Yorkshire
LS11 9BH
By email to: enquiries@bwlegal.co.uk
Dear Sirs,
Re: Letter of Claim dated 25 April 2025
Client: UK Car Park Management Ltd
PCN Ref: [Insert Reference]
I refer to your Letter of Claim.
Please note that the alleged debt is disputed, and any court proceedings will be robustly defended.
I note that the sum claimed has been increased by an excessive and unjustifiable amount, which appears contrary to the principles established by the Government, who described such practices as “extorting money from motorists.” Please refrain from sending boilerplate responses or justifications regarding this issue.
Under the Pre-Action Protocol for Debt Claims, I require specific answers to the following questions:
1. Does the additional £100 represent what you describe as a “Debt Recovery” fee? If so, is this figure net of or inclusive of VAT? If inclusive, I trust you will explain why I, as the alleged debtor, am being asked to cover your client’s VAT liability.
2. Regarding the principal sum of the alleged Parking Charge Notice (PCN): Is this being claimed as damages for breach of contract, or will it be pleaded as consideration for a purported parking contract?
Furthermore, in order to understand the legal basis for your client's claim and to allow for a considered response, I require the following documentation and evidence:
a. A full, unredacted copy of the contract or agreement between your client and the landowner or lawful occupier, demonstrating the authority to issue and enforce parking charges at the site;
b. Evidence that the lease or freehold interest in the relevant bay permits the imposition and enforcement of third-party parking terms by your client.
I would caution you against simply dismissing these questions with vague or generic responses. I am fully aware of the implications of your client’s model. By claiming that PCNs are not subject to VAT while inflating a supposed “debt recovery” element, your client – with your assistance – appears to be evading tax obligations that may be due to HMRC. That raises serious questions about the legality and ethics of your practices.
I strongly advise your client to cease and desist. Should this matter proceed to court, these issues will be brought to the court’s attention, alongside a robust defence and potential counterclaim for unreasonable conduct.
Yours faithfully,
[Your Name]
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I've removed what probably isn't necessary, and tweaked the figure to my situation but not sure if I should be adding anything more (or have the knowledge to add anything in). Would this be sufficient?