After discussion with a very long serving district judge about the issue of "technical flaws" in a NtK regarding PoFA compliance, it was agreed that any flaws, including the one I will describe below, would be considered and decided on whether it was factually correct if raised in a defence.
In the case of the NtK in this case, the wording "You are advised that if, after the period of 28 days..." does not strictly comply with the wording required by the Act. Paragraph 9(2) states that the NtK MUST and 9(2)(f) WARN the keeper...
When something is required by law, it means there are consequences for failing to do it. If the operator is legally obligated by the Act to warn someone about potential risks, and the operator doesn't, there could be legal repercussions such as, in this case, a lawsuit. On the other hand, when something is advised, it is only a suggestion or recommendation without the same level of legal backing.
So in a legal context, there is a significant difference between advice and a warning. A legal requirement to "warn" someone carries a much stronger obligation and consequence compared to when it is merely "advised."
Additionally, in this NtK, there is a failure to adhere to PoFA 9(2)(e) which MUST state that if the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver and invite the keeper—
(i) to pay the unpaid parking charges; or
(ii) if the keeper was not the driver of the vehicle, to notify the creditor...
There is no invitation as per 9(2)(e)(i).
There are plenty of PPCs that do strictly adhere to the wording requirements of the Act. It is not beyond the remit of this operator to adhere strictly to the requirements of the Act when they could easily have chosen to.