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I have rewritten my defence using some of the advice given here and taken out any wording that identifies me as a driver. Could someone kindly look through if it's all good to send off, please? Apologies in advance, I need to file this defence  by 4pm on Monday. Thank you.


In the County Court
Claim number: [Claim number]
Between ParkMaven Ltd (Claimant)
and
Name  (Defendant)

1.   The Defendant denies that the Claimant is entitled to the relief claimed or at all.
2.   The Defendant disputes the additional sum added to the original parking charge. The purported “debt recovery”, “damages”, or similar costs are not recoverable and represent an attempt at double recovery. Such practices have been widely criticised by the courts and are unsupported by statute, common law, or the Supreme Court decision in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis.
3.    The defendant is a Blue Badge holder with protected characteristics under the Equality Act 2010. If the claimant issued a Parking Charge Notice against my vehicle without making reasonable adjustments for my disability, then the charge is unlawful and unenforceable.
4.   The Claimant is put to strict proof of full compliance with the mandatory requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (“POFA”)
5.   The claimant’s signage and contractual terms will not withstand scrutiny. Based on my past experience with private parking operators, their notices often fail to comply with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012, and the amount claimed is likely to include sums that constitute an abuse of process.
6.   Further, under the provisions of the Equality Act 2010, service providers must make reasonable adjustments for disabled persons. The issuing of a parking charge in circumstances where a disabled person reasonably used a disabled bay may amount to a failure to make such reasonable adjustments.
7.   The Defendant further denies that the Claimant has suffered any loss or damage and disputes that the additional sums added to the original charge represent legitimate or recoverable costs.
8.   For the reasons stated above, the Defendant respectfully requests that the
claim be dismissed.

9. Statement of Truth
10. The defendants believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true.
11. Signed: ___________________
12. Name: ___________________
13. Date: ___________________

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Update, please see the defence, I have removed 2 and any wording that identifies the driver

Defence
1.The Defendant denies that the Claimant is entitled to the relief claimed, or to any relief whatsoever.
2.The Claimant is put to strict proof of full compliance with the mandatory requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (“POFA”). In the absence of such compliance, the Claimant is unable to transfer liability from the driver to any other party. The Claimant is therefore put to strict proof as to the identity of the driver.
3.It is denied that the Claimant has established that any legally binding contract was formed between the Claimant and the driver. The Defendant avers that the signage at the site was inadequate to form a contract, being unclear, insufficiently prominent, and incapable of conveying the alleged terms in a transparent or intelligible manner.
4.The Claimant is put to strict proof that the signage at the location clearly and prominently communicated any requirement for a “valid parking reservation” in relation to the use of disabled bays. The Defendant avers that no such requirement was clearly displayed or reasonably capable of being understood by a motorist.
5.The vehicle was parked in a clearly marked disabled bay due to disability and reasonable necessity. The use of the disabled bay was reasonable in the circumstances.
6.Further, pursuant to the Equality Act 2010, service providers are under a statutory duty to make reasonable adjustments for disabled persons. The issuing of a parking charge in circumstances where a disabled bay was used due to disability and reasonable need may amount to a failure to comply with those statutory duties.
7.The Defendant denies that the Claimant has suffered any loss or damage. The parking charge is penal in nature, excessive, and unconscionable, and does not represent a genuine pre estimate of any loss.
8.The Defendant disputes the additional sum added to the original parking charge. The purported “debt recovery”, “damages”, or similar costs are not recoverable and represent an attempt at double recovery. Such practices have been widely criticised by the courts and are unsupported by statute, common law, or the Supreme Court decision in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis.
9.The Claimant is put to strict proof of its legal standing to bring the claim, including evidence of a valid, contemporaneous contract with the landowner that expressly authorises the Claimant to issue parking charges and to pursue litigation in its own name.
10.In the alternative, which is denied, if any contract were found to have been formed, the Defendant avers that the terms relied upon are unfair and unenforceable pursuant to the Consumer Rights Act 2015, due to lack of transparency and a significant imbalance in the parties’ rights and obligations.
11.For the reasons stated above, the Defendant respectfully requests that the claim be dismissed.
________________________________________
Statement of Truth
The Defendant believes that the facts stated in this Defence are true.
Signed: __________________________
Name: __________________________
Date: __________________________
________________________________________

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Okay thanks for your response. Is the below better? I used ChatGPT

Defence
1.The Defendant denies that the Claimant is entitled to the relief claimed, or to any relief whatsoever.
2.The Claimant is put to strict proof of full compliance with the mandatory requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (“POFA”). In the absence of such compliance, the Claimant is unable to transfer liability from the driver to any other party. The Claimant is therefore put to strict proof as to the identity of the driver.
3.It is denied that the Claimant has established that any legally binding contract was formed between the Claimant and the driver. The Defendant avers that the signage at the site was inadequate to form a contract, being unclear, insufficiently prominent, and incapable of conveying the alleged terms in a transparent or intelligible manner.
4.The Claimant is put to strict proof that the signage at the location clearly and prominently communicated any requirement for a “valid parking reservation” in relation to the use of disabled bays. The Defendant avers that no such requirement was clearly displayed or reasonably capable of being understood by a motorist.
5.The vehicle was parked in a clearly marked disabled bay due to disability and reasonable necessity. The use of the disabled bay was reasonable in the circumstances.
6.Further, pursuant to the Equality Act 2010, service providers are under a statutory duty to make reasonable adjustments for disabled persons. The issuing of a parking charge in circumstances where a disabled bay was used due to disability and reasonable need may amount to a failure to comply with those statutory duties.
7.The Defendant denies that the Claimant has suffered any loss or damage. The parking charge is penal in nature, excessive, and unconscionable, and does not represent a genuine pre estimate of any loss.
8.The Defendant disputes the additional sum added to the original parking charge. The purported “debt recovery”, “damages”, or similar costs are not recoverable and represent an attempt at double recovery. Such practices have been widely criticised by the courts and are unsupported by statute, common law, or the Supreme Court decision in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis.
9.The Claimant is put to strict proof of its legal standing to bring the claim, including evidence of a valid, contemporaneous contract with the landowner that expressly authorises the Claimant to issue parking charges and to pursue litigation in its own name.
10.In the alternative, which is denied, if any contract were found to have been formed, the Defendant avers that the terms relied upon are unfair and unenforceable pursuant to the Consumer Rights Act 2015, due to lack of transparency and a significant imbalance in the parties’ rights and obligations.
11.For the reasons stated above, the Defendant respectfully requests that the claim be dismissed.
________________________________________
Statement of Truth
The Defendant believes that the facts stated in this Defence are true.
Signed: __________________________
Name: __________________________
Date: __________________________
________________________________________

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Hi,
Can someone check my defence please if it’s ok to send it. I need to file my defence by Monday 30th March. I have posted the original PCN here as requested. I have posted my defence twice here but please see it below for ease. Thank you.



1. The Defendant denies that the Claimant is entitled to the relief claimed or at all.
2. The Particulars of Claim are vague and fail to provide sufficient detail of the alleged breach, the contractual terms relied upon, or how the sum of £170 has been calculated. The Defendant is therefore unable to fully understand the case against them.
3. The Defendant parked in a marked disabled bay due to disability and reasonable need. The Defendant reasonably believed that parking in the disabled bay was permitted and necessary.
4. The Claimant is put to strict proof that the signage at the site clearly communicated the alleged requirement for a “valid parking reservation” in relation to disabled bays. The Defendant does not recall any clear signage indicating that disabled bay users were required to make such a reservation.
5. The Defendant avers that any signage present was insufficiently prominent, unclear, or incapable of forming a legally binding contract with the driver.
6. Further, under the provisions of the Equality Act 2010, service providers must make reasonable adjustments for disabled persons. The issuing of a parking charge in circumstances where a disabled person reasonably used a disabled bay may amount to a failure to make such reasonable adjustments.
7. The Defendant further denies that the Claimant has suffered any loss or damage and disputes that the additional sums added to the original charge represent legitimate or recoverable costs.
8. The Defendant also disputes the added sum above the initial parking charge, which appears to be an attempt at double recovery and is unsupported by law.
9. For the reasons stated above, the Defendant respectfully requests that the claim be dismissed.
10. Statement of Truth
11. I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true.
12. Signed: ___________________
13. Name: ___________________
14. Date: ___________________

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Hi, apologies this is the original PCN received via email from DCB LEGAL. Please see the link. Thanks

https://ibb.co/8Ls4mhzP
https://ibb.co/k6120RcL

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I don’t have the original PCN but here’s the PoC I received from the CNBC

https://ibb.co/sd8dbS7b
https://ibb.co/gL1N553q

Please see also DCB legal submissions to the court which they emailed a copy to me https://ibb.co/MynG8qR7

Thank you

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Apologies I posted the defence summary with a link, please see below for ease. Thank you. I used ChatGPT for this

1. The Defendant denies that the Claimant is entitled to the relief claimed or at all.
2. The Particulars of Claim are vague and fail to provide sufficient detail of the alleged breach, the contractual terms relied upon, or how the sum of £170 has been calculated. The Defendant is therefore unable to fully understand the case against them.
3. The Defendant parked in a marked disabled bay due to disability and reasonable need. The Defendant reasonably believed that parking in the disabled bay was permitted and necessary.
4. The Claimant is put to strict proof that the signage at the site clearly communicated the alleged requirement for a “valid parking reservation” in relation to disabled bays. The Defendant does not recall any clear signage indicating that disabled bay users were required to make such a reservation.
5. The Defendant avers that any signage present was insufficiently prominent, unclear, or incapable of forming a legally binding contract with the driver.
6. Further, under the provisions of the Equality Act 2010, service providers must make reasonable adjustments for disabled persons. The issuing of a parking charge in circumstances where a disabled person reasonably used a disabled bay may amount to a failure to make such reasonable adjustments.
7. The Defendant further denies that the Claimant has suffered any loss or damage and disputes that the additional sums added to the original charge represent legitimate or recoverable costs.
8. The Defendant also disputes the added sum above the initial parking charge, which appears to be an attempt at double recovery and is unsupported by law.
9. For the reasons stated above, the Defendant respectfully requests that the claim be dismissed.
10. Statement of Truth
11. I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true.
12. Signed: ___________________
13. Name: ___________________
14. Date: ___________________

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Hi all,
Thank you all for your help. I have today attended the hearing and the judge has granted the set aside and the registration has been cancelled. The judge told me to file my defence to the court and send a copy to the claimant within 14 days from today.

I have drafted my defence and will be grateful if someone can look through to see if it’s all okay to send. Please see the link below for my defence. Thanks

https://ibb.co/9H0rHyy9

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Yes, I do. But when I search for the claim on there is asking for defence pack password which I don’t have. Thanks

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Thank you for your prompt response. Does it mean that I don’t have to attend the hearing in person on Monday and also where and how do I file my defence for the original claim?

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Hi all,
I have the hearing for the set aside in person on Monday 16 March. I have today received this letter from DCB legal via email
https://ibb.co/YTdBLNSh
Please could someone explain what this means? Thank you.

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Hi all,
Happy New Year. I have today received the hearing date for the set‑aside application, which is scheduled to take place in March. I did not receive any response from DCB Legal to the letter I sent requesting confirmation of signatory authorisation.
My question is: what evidence will I need to present to the court at the hearing? Many Thanks.

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Yes, I have, thank you. I will use this.

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Thank you very much, I will send this straight away. I have a question, though. Could you please clarify the statement below, as I have already paid for the set aside? Thank you.

Without prejudice to my primary position, given that my N244 has already been filed and no fee has yet been requested by the CNBC,

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Based on the SAR you have received, can you identify every person that has signed any document you received after the date of the initial claim? If so, does that document also make clear their position within the company (solicitor, paralegal, assistant etc.)? NO, the documents they send are the PCN and certificate of postage which says it was sent via hybrid mail.


If you are not sure, you need to send a warning shot across the bows of DCB Legal that you believe that persons unauthorised to conduct litigation have being doing so in your case and you require verification of every person that has signed any document is permitted to do so under the Legal Services Act 2007. ok, will do how do I go about that please?

Conducting litigation when not authorised is a criminal offence and must be reported to the SRA. I will hazard a guess that the original PoC were signed by Sarah Ensall who is NOT authorised to conduct litigation. When you obtained the details of the PoC, did they tell you the name of the person who signed them? No signature of that either. you are correct, it is criminal, they have disabled bays there and the PCN is based on a camera whilst entering and leaving.


Link to PoC received from CNBC https://imgur.com/a/kZTUHFf

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