Hello,
Thank you for your help!
I have made a draft as below
1. No Contract Was Formed – Signage Does Not Offer Parking to the Public Between 7am–6pm Weekdays
The signage at the site (Urban Student Life, 1 Devon Street, Liverpool) fails to make any clear offer of parking to the general public during weekday hours of 7am to 6pm. The sign states, in small print, that the area is for “permit holders only” during these times. There is no price listed for public use during these hours, nor is there any invitation to park or pay.
This means no offer was made, and thus no valid contract could be formed for a non-permit holder. A contract cannot be enforced if no clear offer is made to the driver at the time of parking. This PCN was issued during this exact restricted time window (09 May 2025, 12:10 to 12:39), when public parking was not available or offered by the operator.
2. Signage is Misleading and Fails Consumer Protection Standards
The core restriction—permit holders only from 7am to 6pm—is buried in small print and not clearly brought to the attention of drivers. According to the Consumer Rights Act 2015 (CRA):
Section 68 requires that any contract term must be “transparent and prominent.”
Section 62 states that unfair terms are not binding on the consumer.
Schedule 2 flags terms as potentially unfair where they impose a disproportionate financial burden.
In this case, a driver entering the site could reasonably believe they can pay to park using the app, as per the larger, more visible information. But the restriction in the small print contradicts this, and a £100 charge is excessive when the driver had no fair opportunity to understand they were in breach.
3. App Confirms That No Payment Option Was Offered
I attempted to pay using the official app (evidence attached – screenshot taken at the same location), and the app showed a £0.00 charge, with no option to pay. This supports the position that no contract was offered or accepted.
If the system doesn’t allow a user to pay during those hours, this further confirms that no public parking is available, and no enforceable contract exists for the public. This strengthens the argument that the driver was set up to fail and unfairly penalised.
4. The Operator Has Not Identified the Driver
This Notice to Keeper has been issued under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA), but no evidence has been supplied that the operator has identified the driver. I am the registered keeper and do not admit to being the driver. Liability under PoFA must therefore be established strictly according to the requirements of the Act, which have not been demonstrated.
5. Strict Proof of Date of Posting Required
The NtK was received several days after its issue date (16 May 2025). I require the operator to provide strict proof of posting date, including evidence of postage and a certificate of posting, in accordance with Schedule 4 of PoFA. Without this, the operator cannot demonstrate compliance with the requirement to serve the notice within the prescribed time limits.
6. Lack of Evidence of Landowner Authority
The operator is put to strict proof that they have a valid contract with the landowner which allows them to issue parking charges and enforce them in their own name. The BPA Code of Practice (Section 7) requires operators to have written authorisation from the landowner to manage and enforce parking.
This must include:
The identity of the landowner(s)
A site boundary plan
The terms and conditions being enforced
Duration of agreement
Details of how and where charges can be issued
A generic statement will not suffice. The contract must be specific to this site and cover the date in question. If the operator fails to provide this documentation, the charge must be cancelled.
Is this enough for the appeal or would you recommend adding anything else?
Thanks!