the start of the video was irrelevant. It was their bad editing I think
Will send through this appeal letter this weekend if no one else has anything to add.Do not send a letter in the post, representations should always be made online unless there's some really good reason not to.
Is this correct? Sorry for my english and thank you so much for all your input.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am appealing against the penalty charge, and I will explain the events in the order they occurred before this alleged contravention so you can understand how and why it happened.
I was driving from Green Lanes toward High Road when, at the junction outside Turnpike Lane station, a police car with sirens on approached from the opposite direction. A vehicle behind me crashed into the right rear of my car before turning right into Westbury Avenue. A bus behind me repeatedly flashed its front lights, which I believed was the bus driver trying to get my attention.
To eliminate any risk in continuing to drive following:
TSRGD schedule 7, part 6, para 4(2)(b)
"a vehicle which is prevented from proceeding by circumstances beyond the driver’s control or which has to be stopped in order to avoid injury or damage to persons or property;"
I decided to stop where it made sense to assume the bus would stop and to let ongoing traffic pass before checking with the driver. After inspecting the rear of my vehicle, I waited for the bus. When it pulled alongside, the driver explained that he had witnessed the collision and had captured everything on the bus's CCTV. He advised me to contact TFL for a copy of the footage. After our conversation, I continued driving."
I hope that, after explaining the sequence of events that occurred, you can understand the intention behind this alleged contravention.
I claim the exemption afforded my the above quoted regulation and as such the PCN should now be cancelled
Your faithfully
Hi all,
Here is my updated draft. Let me know your thought.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to appeal my penalty charge, and I will explain the events in the order they occurred before this alleged contravention so you can understand how and why it happened.
I was driving from Green Lanes toward High Road when, at the junction outside Turnpike Lane station, a police car with sirens on approached from the opposite direction. A vehicle behind me crashed into the right rear of my car before turning right into Westbury Avenue. I stopped by the edge of the yellow junction box to quickly visually check the damage, but the car had already driven off.
Although I was still shocked, I tried to recall what had happened and remember the vehicle's number plate as I continued the journey on High Road. Subsequently a bus behind me repeatedly flashed its front lights, which I believed was the bus driver trying to get my attention.
To eliminate any risk in continuing to drive following:
This led me to II decided to pulled into the bus stop, where it made sense to assume the bus would stop and to let ongoing traffic pass before checking with the driver. After inspecting the rear of my vehicle, I waited for the bus. When it pulled alongside, the driver explained that he had witnessed the collision and had captured everything on the bus's CCTV. He advised me to contact TFL for a copy of the footage. After our conversation, I continued driving."
I hope that, after explaining the sequence of events that occurred, you can understand the intention behind this alleged contravention.
Have you explored the possibility of a statement from the 'bus driver?
I've had a look at the road layout and tried to visualise what happened, The only issue that will need explaining is why once you clear the junction did you not stop before the bus stop and when did you notice the bus driver flashing you
Let me have these two bits of info and i will draft you an appeal
I don't know, I never applied for it !Just remember: the more salient representations you make, the more they have to consider. This is a statutory duty. Personally, I would include as much as relevant. It is generally agreed on both forums (fora?) that many council officers are not that fully-conversant with the law(s)!I sometimes think it is "all", not "many" !
How does one apply to be a Hero Member? 8)
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Stress the impact, that you were trying to get your wits, concerned with damage and to top it all, a bus driver was flashing you so you felt forced to pull over as soon as possible, which happened to be the bus stop
As this request involved one of our buses I have forward your request on to the team within our UK Bus Division for their review and processing, at Arriva Group we do not generally process customer data and as such do not have access to the systems required, therefore your request will be handled by colleagues within our UK Bus division. They will soon reach out to acknowledge your request.
Just remember: the more salient representations you make, the more they have to consider. This is a statutory duty. Personally, I would include as much as relevant. It is generally agreed on both forums (fora?) that many council officers are not that fully-conversant with the law(s)!I sometimes think it is "all", not "many" !
Thank you everyone for the input. All very valid, especially HCA for pointing out the very important reason why I pulled into the bus stop which was because of the constant flashing of the front light by the bus driver behind.
I will post up a draft soon that follow HCA's suggestion while waiting for the CCTV footage.
Just remember: the more salient representations you make, the more they have to consider. This is a statutory duty. Personally, I would include as much as relevant. It is generally agreed on both forums (fora?) that many council officers are not that fully-conversant with the law(s)!I sometimes think it is "all", not "many" !
I think the details of the collision are important. Looking at the council video without context, it just looks like an unjustified stop in a bus stop, and the bus that pulls up alongside could be stopping to remonstrate about the car stopping in a bus stop.
IMO, there's no point drilling into the detail of the collision i.e. where, how etc, the issue is what you reasonably inferred from the driver's signals and why you stopped in the bus stop area.I think the details of the collision are important. Looking at the council video without context, it just looks like an unjustified stop in a bus stop, and the bus that pulls up alongside could be stopping to remonstrate about the car stopping in a bus stop.