I have no idea where you go that old into from. You reference the BPA Code of Practice (CoP) v8 (Jan 2020) but that was superseded by v9 (Jan 2024), the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) v1 (Oct 2024) and v1.1 (Feb 2025).
Make sure you are referring to the correct CoP and any sections within it. Also, you are going on with PoFA references without explaining why each reference has been breached. For example, you say:
"The NtK must invite the keeper to pay or to name the driver in the prescribed form. [Explain any wording defect you can quote from your letter.]"
Do you know which paragraph you are referring to? Just stating that without understanding it and leading the PIOPLA assessor by the nose to your point is futile. Have a read of PoFA paragraph 9(2)(e)(i).
You go on about PoFA paragraphs 9(4)-9(5) and state the obvious without clearly understanding it. If you are going to quote that, is it clear that the NtK was not delivered (given) within the relevant period? Date of alleged contravention was 12/08/2025. Date of issue of the NtK was 18/08/2025. Presumption of delivery (given) is 2 working days after issue, = 20/08/2025 which is 8 days after the alleged contravention. The 'relevant period' is 14 days, so I don't understand the reason that point is even being mentioned unless you are rebutting the presumption of delivery, in which case you would have to put the operator to strict proof of posting or delivery.
Whilst the argument that the ANPR does not show the actual period of parking, only the time on site and you cannot add any consideration period to any grace period because once the contract is accepted (the vehicle remained parked for longer then the minimum consideration period), then the consideration period is no longer relevant. Also, the consideration period in a car park with >500 spaces is a minimum of 10 minutes, not 5, if it were even relevant.
You mention PoFA 9(2)(h) without explaining why it has failed that point. Yes, the NtK does fail that point but unless you lead the POPLA assessor by the nose as to exactly why, they will simply say "it's bleedin' obvious that the creditor is GroupNexus"! You have to show why it may not be (certainly is not) GroupNexus.
GroupNexus Ltd was registered as a separate company in March 2025. Before that, GroupNexus was just a trading name used by CP Plus Ltd. But by the time this notice was issued, there were two possible companies—CP Plus Ltd and GroupNexus Ltd.
PoFA (the law) says the notice MUST name the actual company (the creditor) that is owed the money. It must say either “CP Plus Ltd” or “GroupNexus Ltd.” Just saying “GroupNexus” is not enough. That’s a brand name, not a legal entity unless they clearly say “GroupNexus Ltd” and give the company details. They haven't.
Because the notice was issued after GroupNexus Ltd became a separate legal entity, the operator had a legal duty to be clear about which company was owed the money. If they didn’t do that, the notice breaks the rules and is, therefore, not PoFA compliant. That means they can’t hold the keeper of the vehicle responsible. They’d have to prove who the driver was, which they can’t unless the Keeper blabs it to them.
So the timing matters. After March 2025, they had to be specific. If they weren’t, you’re not liable as keeper. Make the POPLA assessor understand that point.
I could go on but I suggest you have a look at a few more recent POPLA appeals posted on the forum and try again.