-I have submitted proof of payment and in their response letter BFC state "whilst I appreciate payment was made to park", can I use this in my representation as their acknowledgement that payment was made?
I wouldn't bother, something short and simple will do:
Dear Bracknell Forest Borough Council,
The allegation on the PCN is "73 - Parked without payment of the parking charge". I attach proof of payment, as the charge was paid the contravention did not occur. it follows that the penalty charge notice must be cancelled.
I remind you that where a contravention did not occur the council cannot pursue enforcement on the basis of some other contravention, should this representation be rejected I will contend at the Traffic Penalty Tribunal that your decision to reject these representations is wholly unreasonable, and in such circumstances the tribunal may make an order for costs against you even if the appeal itself is not contested.
Yours faithfully,
I can't see them wanting to reject that.