Zenith’s latest reply is wholly inadequate, factually incorrect in places, and ultimately self-serving. Here is a formal rebuttal to their email that you should send in response (either to the same representative or escalated to their formal complaints team) and CC: [Fleet Manager Name],
– for visibility and also CC yourself:
Subject: Formal Complaint – Continued Mishandling and Misstatements Regarding PCN [REF]
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your delayed response. Regrettably, your email fails to address the material issues raised and introduces several inaccuracies that must now be formally challenged. This is now escalated as a formal complaint.
1. Misstatement Regarding PoFA Schedule 4 and Lease Vehicles
You claim that Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 does not apply to long-term lease vehicles and only to short-term hire agreements. That is categorically incorrect.
PoFA Sch 4 clearly applies to both hire and lease vehicles, as the legislation refers to “a vehicle hired to a person under a hire agreement”, and includes no distinction based on the hire duration or whether the hirer is a corporate entity. Further, the standard required for transferring liability is not that the lease agreement must be ‘suitable’ or contain specific wording. It simply requires:
• A copy of the hire/lease agreement; and
• A statement of liability signed by the hirer (Schedule 4, paragraph 13(2)).
If your lease documentation with the company is unsuitable for this statutory mechanism, then it is a failing of your processes—not of the law. Your claim that “parking companies reject” such transfers is unsubstantiated and immaterial. It is your legal obligation as Keeper to attempt the transfer under PoFA, and Premier Park's own NtK expressly invites you to do so. Instead, you chose to pay the charge and pass on the cost, thereby extinguishing my legal right to appeal. This is not best practice; it is systemic failure.
2. Incorrect Application of Policy Wording
Your continued reference to “fines” and “penalty notices” in your lease agreement documentation does not cover Parking Charge Notices (PCNs) issued by unregulated private firms. PCNs issued by Premier Park are not fines in law—they are speculative invoices based on alleged breach of contract.
Unless the wording of the agreement explicitly extends to civil contractual charges of this nature, your actions in paying and recharging the amount are legally questionable. You have admitted that the terminology is “not technically accurate”. That is a tacit admission that you are relying on vague or misleading language to justify automatic deductions from employees' wages—amounts that are not statutory, not enforceable without court judgment, and are hotly contested.
3. Post-Payment Appeal Option – Misleading Advice
Your claim that most operators allow appeals after payment is unsupported and directly contradicted by Premier Park’s own NtK, which states:
“Please note, where payment of the parking charge is made this will preclude the ability to appeal.”
It is misleading to suggest that appeal is still available. POPLA also confirms this explicitly: payment is deemed acceptance of liability and removes any right of appeal.
Further, your suggestion that I take the matter up with my employer is both inappropriate and evasive. You are the contracting party who paid the charge, failed to exercise your legal rights under PoFA, and are now attempting to shift responsibility. My employer was not a party to the appeal process and cannot retrospectively resolve a situation caused by your failure.
4. Goodwill Gesture – Refund of Admin Fee
While the refund of your administrative fee is noted, this does not resolve the substantive issue: the full charge was paid and recharged to me when it should never have been paid at all.
5. Outstanding Requirements
To resolve this matter, I require the following within 14 days:
• A full refund of the PCN amount recharged to me;
• A copy of the actual lease agreement you claim precludes PoFA compliance (if not provided, this will be assumed to be a false representation);
• Confirmation of your membership status with the BVRLA;
• Confirmation that this matter has now been logged as a formal complaint and is being investigated at the appropriate level.
Please treat this email as a Letter Before Action. If the refund is not issued within 14 days, I will:
• Pursue the matter via the small claims track of the County Court, and
• Report your organisation to the BVRLA and the Information Commissioner's Office (ICO) regarding unlawful processing of my personal data and unauthorised deductions.
This incident reveals a fundamental failure in your internal processes, a misapplication of law, and repeated attempts to shift blame. That is unacceptable in any regulated leasing operation, let alone one dealing with large-scale corporate clients and employee salary deductions.
I am copying in Fleet and HR colleagues as this matter has implications for employee rights and salary deductions under the current car scheme agreement with Zenith. I respectfully request that this issue be reviewed internally in light of Zenith's failure to follow statutory process.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Full Name]
[Employee Number, if relevant]
[Vehicle Registration Number]
It is advisable—and tactically sound—to copy your employer’s fleet manager and/or HR department into the correspondence, for the following reasons:
Zenith claims their actions were “in line with the agreement made with your company”. If your employer is a party to that agreement, they may bear some contractual or practical responsibility for the flawed process that led to your loss of appeal rights. Your employer should therefore be aware that their agreement is causing financial and legal detriment to staff—particularly where it allows automatic deductions for speculative, non-statutory charges without due process.
Once your employer sees that Zenith’s system is undermining employees’ legal rights, they may apply pressure for better handling in future. It also opens the door to a broader review of the lease agreement, deduction process, and handling of PCNs.
If you escalate to court, copying your employer shows that you made every attempt to resolve the issue and highlight the flaws in the process, which supports a claim for reasonable conduct.
That response is a classic example of intellectual malnourishment from whoever authored it. I suggest you respond robustly with the following:
Subject: Re: Mishandling of Parking Charge Notice – Formal Rebuttal and Refund Demand
Dear Zenith,
Thank you for your response, which regrettably fails to address the substance of the issue raised and instead offers a series of evasions dressed up as procedural compliance.
Your assertion that the PCN was “paid and recharged in line with the agreement made with your company” is a non-answer. I invite you to identify the specific clause in that agreement which authorises payment of speculative invoices issued by unregulated private parking firms—particularly where liability could have been lawfully transferred under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). The agreement refers to penalties and fines, not Parking Charge Notices, which are neither statutory nor enforceable without a valid contract.
Your failure to follow the statutory mechanism for transferring liability—despite clear instructions on the Notice to Keeper—has deprived the hirer of their legal right to appeal. This is not a minor administrative oversight; it is a fundamental breach of process that has resulted in financial loss and procedural injustice.
Moreover, your repeated reference to Premier Park as an “issuing authority” is both factually and legally indefensible. Premier Park is a private, unregulated parking firm. It is not an authority in any statutory sense. Authorities—such as local councils or the police—issue penalty charge notices under statutory powers. Premier Park issues parking charge notices, which are speculative invoices based on alleged breach of contract. The distinction is not semantic; it is foundational.
Your use of the term “authority” in this context suggests either:
• A fundamental misunderstanding of the legal framework governing parking enforcement, or
• A deliberate attempt to mislead, by cloaking a private entity in the language of statutory legitimacy.
Either interpretation reflects poorly on your organisation’s competence and integrity. I suggest you review your internal communications protocols to ensure that future correspondence does not perpetuate such legally illiterate terminology.
Your suggestion to “appeal in writing” to Premier Park is equally disingenuous. POPLA and Premier Park’s own documentation confirm that payment constitutes admission of liability and extinguishes any right of appeal. Your advice is therefore not only misleading but demonstrably futile.
I now require the following:
• A full refund of any amount charged to my account in relation to this PCN.
• A copy of the agreement you rely on to justify payment of non-statutory charges.
• Confirmation of your internal process for handling PCNs and how it aligns with PoFA 2012.
• Confirmation of your BVRLA membership status, as I am preparing a formal complaint under their ADR scheme.
I reserve the right to escalate this matter via the County Court should you fail to resolve it within 14 days. Your procedural failure is not shielded by vague references to internal agreements, and I will not absorb the cost of your statutory illiteracy.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
If your stupid ignorant lease company have paid the charge, there is absolutely nothing you can do to appeal this. Premier Park are laughing all the way to the bank and your only recourse is to either chargeback the amount your stupid lease company have paid or sue them for it in the small claims track of the county court.
If your lease company is a member of the BVRLA, report them as being incompetent idiots. All they had to do was follow the instruction on the back, right at the top which states:
Vehicle Hirers
If you are a vehicle-hire firm and the vehicle was on hire at the time of the parking incident, please let us know and provide us with a copy of the hire agreement and a copy of a statement of liability signed by the hirer under that hire agreement.
Having done that, they would be absolved of any liability under PoFA 2012 as the Keeper of the vehicle and Premier Park would have had to issue a Notice to Hirer (NtH) in your name and, knowing how every single unregulated private parking firm manages to screw this part up, you would only have had to appeal to POPLA for this to be cancelled.
Check your lease agreement and show us exactly what it says about parking charges, not fines or penalties, as a Parking Charge Notice (PCN) is simply a speculative invoice and an unregulated private parking firm is not an 'authority' of any kind. You have been stung by the incompetence of your lease company and you should make sure that any charge they make to you is refunded, either by getting your bank or credit card company to make a chargeback or by making a claim in the county court small claims track.
I suggest you write to your lease company with the following which will put you in a very strong position should they try to charge you for their mistake and you then need to recover the money, either through a chargeback or with a court claim:
Subject: Formal Complaint and Demand for Refund – Mishandling of Parking Charge Notice
Dear [Lease Company Name],
I am writing to express my profound disappointment and anger at your handling of a Parking Charge Notice (PCN) issued by Premier Park in relation to a leased vehicle under your management. Your decision to summarily pay the charge—rather than correctly transferring liability to the hirer in accordance with Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA)—is both procedurally negligent and demonstrative of a troubling lack of competence in managing statutory obligations.
The Notice to Keeper (NtK) issued by Premier Park included clear instructions for vehicle-hire firms, prominently stating:
Vehicle Hirers If you are a vehicle-hire firm and the vehicle was on hire at the time of the parking incident, please let us know and provide us with a copy of the hire agreement and a copy of a statement of liability signed by the hirer under that hire agreement.
Had your team taken the minimal effort required to read and act upon this guidance, liability would have been lawfully transferred to the Hirer, and Premier Park would have been required to issue a Notice to Hirer (NtH). This would have afforded the Hirer a straightforward route to appeal.
This Parking Charge Notice (PCN) is not a 'fine' or 'penalty' issued by an 'authority' under statutory law. It is simply a speculative invoice from an unregulated private parking firm, yet you have decided arbitrarily to simply pay it and asked the Hirer to appeal, which is an impossibility. Had you bothered to actually read the NtK, you would, or should have known that once this speculative invoice had been paid, there is no recourse to appeal as it clearly states on the back, just under the instructions to Hire/lease companies that:
Appeals & Enquiries
Please note, where payment of the parking charge is made this will preclude the ability to appeal.
Instead, your actions have deprived the Hirer of any opportunity to appeal, handed an unregulated private firm an unearned financial reward, and demonstrated a worrying disregard for both statutory process and customer protection. This is not merely an administrative oversight—it is a failure of basic competence.
I therefore require the following:
• A full refund of any amount charged to my account in relation to this PCN.
• Written assurance that your internal procedures will be reviewed and amended to ensure future compliance with PoFA.
• Confirmation of your membership status with the British Vehicle Rental and Leasing Association (BVRLA), as I am considering escalation via their ADR scheme for breach of Code of Conduct.
Should you fail to issue the refund within 14 days of this letter, I will pursue recovery through a chargeback or the small claims track of the County Court without further correspondence.
I trust you will treat this matter with the seriousness it warrants and take immediate steps to rectify the consequences of your mismanagement.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Address]
[Your Contact Information]