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Live cases legal advice => Private parking tickets => Topic started by: fkdacam1234 on March 26, 2025, 07:35:26 pm

Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on June 28, 2025, 06:29:19 pm
If you've had the fob-off response from the DVLA to your step 1 complaint, then show us so that the appropriate Step 2 can be formulated. The process is identical to Step 1 but the link is to Head of Complaints:

https://contact.dvla.gov.uk/head-of-complaints
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on June 28, 2025, 04:20:00 pm
That is a win. However, please do send the DVLA complaint. WE need to Mae sure that these rogue companies are investigated and that these complaints are logged with the DVLA for future reference.

You will likely receive a Step 1 response to the c complaint which will essentially be a fob-ff by the DVLA. However, let us know and we can advise on bow to escalate it to eh Head of Complaints at the DVLA in a Step to application.

Yup they did, what should I do to step 2
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on May 15, 2025, 08:16:06 pm
Bluntly, the ones that apply to your case...

The obvious one that springs to mind is them claiming the ability to rely on Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act to recover the charge from the keeper, when the land on which the vehicle was parked is not "relevant land" for the purposes of that Act

Cheers DWMB2
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: DWMB2 on May 15, 2025, 08:09:48 pm
Bluntly, the ones that apply to your case...

The obvious one that springs to mind is them claiming the ability to rely on Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act to recover the charge from the keeper, when the land on which the vehicle was parked is not "relevant land" for the purposes of that Act
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on May 15, 2025, 08:06:19 pm
Here’s how to make a DVLA complaint:

[INSERT A SHORT SUMMARY OF THE BREACH(ES), e.g. failure to follow grace periods, misleading notices, refusal to engage with a complaint, pursuing a charge despite having evidence of disability or mitigation, etc.]

Would like to ask which reason(s) would be the best describe please, thanks
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: DWMB2 on May 15, 2025, 07:26:16 pm
Makes a change, they're often stubborn enough to waste their money on the POPLA fee even when it's a lost cause!

Well done!
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on May 15, 2025, 07:19:40 pm
That is a win. However, please do send the DVLA complaint. WE need to Mae sure that these rogue companies are investigated and that these complaints are logged with the DVLA for future reference.

You will likely receive a Step 1 response to the c complaint which will essentially be a fob-ff by the DVLA. However, let us know and we can advise on bow to escalate it to eh Head of Complaints at the DVLA in a Step to application.
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on May 15, 2025, 07:08:33 pm
NO. However, at some stage, Britannia will provide their evidence to POPLA and you will be given 7 days to respond. If/when they do, host the suitably redacted evidence pack on DropBox or Google Drive and we can provide a suitable rebuttal, which will be to POPLA, not Britannia.

Thanks b789, I got email from POPLA that Britannia cancelled the PCN, I gonna make the DVLA complaint in the next step
Once again, tyvm for your help

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Dear Mr XXX,

The operator has contacted us and told us that they have withdrawn your appeal.

If you have already paid your parking charge, this is the reason your appeal will have been withdrawn. Unfortunately, you cannot pay your parking charge and appeal, which means that POPLA’s involvement in your appeal has ended. You will not be able to request a refund of the amount paid in order to resubmit your appeal to us.

If you have not paid your parking charge, the operator has reviewed your appeal and chosen to cancel the parking charge. As the operator has withdrawn your appeal, POPLA’s involvement has now ended and you do not need to take any further action.

Kind regards

POPLA Team
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on April 24, 2025, 02:10:13 pm
NO. However, at some stage, Britannia will provide their evidence to POPLA and you will be given 7 days to respond. If/when they do, host the suitably redacted evidence pack on DropBox or Google Drive and we can provide a suitable rebuttal, which will be to POPLA, not Britannia.

Thanks b789
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on April 24, 2025, 12:38:52 pm
NO. However, at some stage, Britannia will provide their evidence to POPLA and you will be given 7 days to respond. If/when they do, host the suitably redacted evidence pack on DropBox or Google Drive and we can provide a suitable rebuttal, which will be to POPLA, not Britannia.
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on April 24, 2025, 05:04:27 am
Use the following to make your POPLA appeal:

Tyvm b789, I'm really appreciate your help
One little question, besides make this appeal to POPLA,
do I have to reply or send anything to Britannia
Thanks
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on April 24, 2025, 05:00:31 am
Did you make the DVLA complaint?

Planned to make the complaint after Britannia admitted their fault and cancelled the PCN
But now they looks stubborn
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on April 23, 2025, 10:34:13 am
Use the following to make your POPLA appeal:

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POPLA Verification Code: 6011075025
Parking Charge Number: 13962079
Vehicle Registration: [REDACTED]
Operator: Britannia Parking
Site: Saundersfoot Harbour

I am the registered keeper and I appeal as such. The driver has not been identified.

1. No Keeper Liability – Land Is Not “Relevant Land” Under PoFA 2012

This alleged contravention took place on land which is subject to statutory control and therefore not 'relevant land' as defined in Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). The land in question is Saundersfoot Harbour, managed by the Saundersfoot Harbour Commissioners, a statutory body created under the Saundersfoot Harbour Order 2011 (SI 2011/1406).

Schedule 4, Paragraph 3 of PoFA 2012 is clear and unambiguous:

“‘Relevant land’ means any land (including land above or below ground level) other than—
...land which is subject to statutory control.”

The legislation could not be more explicit. Land under statutory control is excluded from the scope of PoFA. No parking operator has any lawful right to rely on PoFA to hold a registered keeper liable for charges on such land.

An official boundary map issued pursuant to the Saundersfoot Harbour Order 2011 is included with this appeal. It proves that the location of the alleged contravention falls within the controlled harbour area and is therefore under statutory control. Britannia Parking has no statutory power, and PoFA cannot apply. They may only pursue the driver, who has not been identified.

(https://i.imgur.com/U6k46yU.jpeg)

This ground is fatal to the charge. Britannia’s use of PoFA wording on its NtK in this context is legally incompetent and must result in cancellation.

2. Even If Land Were Relevant (It Isn’t) – NtK Fails PoFA Compliance by Shortening the Keeper’s Statutory Period

Even if Saundersfoot Harbour were “relevant land” for PoFA purposes (it is not), the Notice to Keeper (NtK) issued by Britannia Parking would still fail because it does not comply with Paragraph 9(2)(f) of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012.

That paragraph requires that the NtK must:

“...warn the keeper that if, after the period of 28 days beginning with the day AFTER that on which the notice is given—”

However, the NtK from Britannia Parking states:

“...after 28 days from the date given (which is presumed to be the second working day after the Date Issued)...”

This is not a trivial drafting error. The statutory period must begin on the day after the notice is deemed “given”, not on the day of deemed delivery. The operator’s version shortens the 28-day period and thereby prejudices the rights of the keeper by threatening enforcement action sooner than the legislation allows.

In simple terms:

• If the NtK was dated 10th March, Britannia presumes service on 12th March (second working day), and starts the 28-day clock on the same day — i.e., 12th March.
• The statute, however, says the 28 days begins on the day after — i.e., 13th March.
• This means the keeper is given 27 days, not 28 — an unlawful curtailment of the statutory protection under PoFA.

The law is not optional. The wording of PoFA must be followed precisely, as confirmed in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67. There is no margin for approximation, interpretation, or “close enough” wording when it comes to liability transfer under statute.

This failure to reproduce the correct statutory warning invalidates the NtK. Therefore, even if the land were relevant (which it is not), no keeper liability could arise because Britannia has failed to meet the mandatory conditions of Schedule 4.

3. No Driver Identified – Keeper Liability Cannot Be Assumed

Britannia Parking has provided no evidence whatsoever who was the driver, and I am not obliged to name the driver. There is no legal requirement for me to identify the driver to a trivial, unregulated, private parking company.

It is important to understand that the introduction of Schedule 4 of PoFA in 2012 was Parliament’s response to the clear legal position that keepers could not otherwise be held liable for the actions of drivers. PoFA was enacted to create a narrow and conditional legal exception, and it is precisely because such liability did not exist beforehand that the statute was necessary in the first place.

Therefore, where PoFA does not apply — either because the land is not relevant, or because the notice is not compliant — there is no lawful fallback that allows a parking operator to infer keeper liability through implication, assumption, or guesswork.

Attempts to suggest that the keeper is “probably” the driver based on nothing more than DVLA data are legally flawed. This position is confirmed by persuasive appeal-level case law, including:

VCS v Edward (2023): His Honour Judge Henson made it explicitly clear that the balance of probabilities is not sufficient to infer keeper liability in the absence of PoFA. The court reaffirmed that PoFA is the exclusive mechanism by which a parking operator can lawfully transfer liability from an unknown driver to a keeper.
Excel Parking Services v Smith (2017): The Circuit Judge held that there is no presumption that the keeper was the driver and that the Claimant must prove the identity of the driver with actual evidence.

These authorities are directly relevant, and any attempt by Britannia to lean on outdated "implied driver" arguments or unfounded assumptions about keeper identity must be rejected out of hand.

POFA compliance is binary: either it applies or it doesn’t. If it doesn’t, the operator must prove the driver’s identity. Britannia has not even attempted to do so.

4. Breach of Code of Practice – False Representation of Keeper Liability

By issuing a Notice to Keeper that explicitly claims PoFA compliance — and by extension, keeper liability — Britannia has breached Section 8.1.1(d) of the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP). That section states:

The parking operator must not serve a notice which in its design and/or language: state the keeper is liable under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 where they cannot be held liable.

This is not a grey area. Britannia Parking has served a Notice on the registered keeper that states the keeper is liable under PoFA, when in fact:

• The land is not relevant land (PoFA does not apply), and
• The NtK is not PoFA-compliant anyway.

This is a breach of the industry Code of Practice and represents a misrepresentation of the operator’s lawful entitlement. I have already submitted a formal complaint to the DVLA, because a breach of the PPSCoP is, by definition, a breach of the operator’s KADOE contract.

This operator has either failed to understand the law, or deliberately misused it. Either way, POPLA must not permit this kind of conduct to go unchecked. The appeal must be allowed.

5. Strict Proof of Landowner Authority – No Possibility of PoFA Authorisation

The operator is also put to strict proof that it has a current, valid, and fully unredacted contract with the landowner (or lawful occupier) that confers upon it the authority to operate at this exact site and issue parking charge notices.

POPLA has repeatedly held that a simple assertion or generic letter is not enough. The operator must demonstrate:

• That it has landowner authority, not merely management rights;
• That the contract explicitly allows the operator to issue PCNs at the site in question;
• That the contract is valid for the date of the alleged contravention;
• And in this case, that the operator has been lawfully authorised to operate under PoFA.

That final point is the most important. It is a matter of statutory law that PoFA cannot be extended to land under statutory control, and no landowner — not even a statutory authority — can unilaterally “authorise” a private operator to issue PoFA-compliant notices on land that the statute excludes.

If Britannia attempts to produce a vague “landowner authority” letter in an attempt to retroactively justify their unlawful reliance on PoFA, it must be rejected. Contracts cannot override statute. No agreement can turn land that is not relevant into land that is.

The operator has no lawful basis for issuing PCNs based on PoFA at this site, and POPLA is asked to put them to strict proof and dismiss any non-compliant evidence.

Conclusion

• The land is not relevant land under PoFA;
• The NtK fails to meet PoFA’s mandatory wording requirements regardless;
• The driver has not been identified and cannot lawfully be assumed;
• The operator has breached the Code of Practice by falsely claiming keeper liability;
• The operator must be put to strict proof of landowner authority, which cannot override statutory exclusion.

This PCN is unenforceable in law against the keeper and must be cancelled.
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on April 23, 2025, 08:50:30 am
Did you make the DVLA complaint?
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on April 23, 2025, 06:33:40 am
No need to explain anything else. When you receive the rejection or the request for the drivers identity, show us the letter and I will provide a suitable response. You may as well have some fun with the intellectually malnourished feckwits at Britannia.

Hi b789, hope you had a happy holiday in the last weekend
I've got their reply letter via email on 17th April and rejected the appeal
Please check the letter in the link below, cheers
https://imgur.com/a/UfA1oiE (https://imgur.com/a/UfA1oiE)
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on March 28, 2025, 01:27:22 pm
Here’s how to make a DVLA complaint:

Tyvm b789, love to make the complaint and see how DVLA react
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on March 28, 2025, 12:18:24 pm
Here’s how to make a DVLA complaint:

• Go to: https://contact.dvla.gov.uk/complaints
• Select: “Making a complaint or compliment about the Vehicles service you have received”
• Enter your personal details, contact details, and vehicle details
• Use the text box to summarise your complaint or insert a covering note
• You will then be able to upload a file (up to 19.5 MB) — this can be your full complaint or supporting evidence
That’s it.

The DVLA is required to record, investigate and respond to every complaint about a private parking company. If everyone who encounters a breach took the time to submit a complaint, we might finally see the DVLA take meaningful action—whether that means curtailing or removing KADOE access altogether.

For the text part of the complaint the webform could use the following:

I am submitting a formal complaint against [INSERT PPC NAME], an [INSERT IPC or BPA] AOS member with DVLA KADOE access, for breaching the BPA/IPC Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) after obtaining my personal data.

While the Operator may have had reasonable cause at the time of their KADOE request, their subsequent misuse of my data—through conduct that contravenes the PPSCoP—renders that use unlawful. The PPSCoP forms an integral part of the DVLA’s governance framework for data access by private parking firms. Continued access is conditional on compliance.

The DVLA, as data controller, is obliged under UK GDPR and the Data Protection Act 2018 to investigate and take enforcement action when data is misused following release. This complaint is not about whether the data was obtained lawfully at the outset, but whether its subsequent use breached the terms under which it was provided.

I have prepared a supporting statement setting out the nature of the breach and the Operator’s actions, and I request a full investigation into this matter. I have attached the supporting document.

Please acknowledge receipt and confirm the reference number for this complaint.

Then you could upload the following as a PDF file for the formal complaint itself:

SUPPORTING STATEMENT

Complaint to DVLA – Breach of KADOE Contract and PPSCoP

Operator name: [INSERT PPC NAME]
Date of PCN issue: [INSERT DATE]
Vehicle registration: [INSERT VRM]

I am submitting this complaint to report a misuse of my personal data by [INSERT PPC NAME], who obtained my keeper details from the DVLA under the KADOE (Keeper At Date Of Event) contract.

Although the parking company may have had reasonable cause to request my data initially, the way they have used that data afterwards amounts to unlawful processing. This is because they have acted in breach of the BPA/IPC Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP), which is a mandatory requirement for access to DVLA keeper data. The PPSCoP forms part of the framework that regulates how parking companies must behave once they have received keeper data from the DVLA.

The KADOE contract makes clear that keeper data may only be used to pursue an unpaid parking charge in line with the Code of Practice. If a parking company fails to comply with the PPSCoP after receiving DVLA data, their use of that data becomes unlawful, as they are no longer using it for a permitted purpose.

In this case, [INSERT PPC NAME] has breached the PPSCoP in the following ways:

[INSERT A SHORT SUMMARY OF THE BREACH(ES), e.g. failure to follow grace periods, misleading notices, refusal to engage with a complaint, pursuing a charge despite having evidence of disability or mitigation, etc.]

These are not minor or technical breaches. They show a clear disregard for the standards required under the current single Code. As a result, the operator is no longer entitled to use the keeper data they obtained from the DVLA, because the purpose for which it was provided (a fair and lawful pursuit of a charge under the Code) no longer applies.

The DVLA remains the Data Controller for the data it releases under KADOE, and is therefore responsible for ensuring that personal data is not misused by third parties. This includes taking action against AOS operators who breach the conditions under which the data was provided. I am therefore asking the DVLA to investigate this breach and to take appropriate action under the terms of the KADOE contract.

This may include:

• Confirming that a breach has occurred
• Taking enforcement action against the operator
•Suspending or terminating their KADOE access if warranted

I have attached relevant supporting material with this statement. Please confirm receipt and provide a reference for this complaint. I am also happy to provide further information if required.

Name: [INSERT YOUR NAME]
Date: [INSERT DATE]
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on March 27, 2025, 10:15:11 pm
Report Britannia Parking to the DVLA as they have breached section 8.1.2(d) of the PPSCoP by declaring PoFA liability where the location is actually under statutory control. It clearly states:

"The parking operator must not serve a notice which in its design and/or language: state the keeper is liable under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 where they cannot be held liable."

Thanks b789, I've make appeal with your quote paragraph, let's see how would they response.

Moreover, would like to ask the steps to report them to the DVLA, cheers.
Title: Re: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: b789 on March 27, 2025, 10:18:31 am
Report Britannia Parking to the DVLA as they have breached section 8.1.2(d) of the PPSCoP by declaring PoFA liability where the location is actually under statutory control. It clearly states:

"The parking operator must not serve a notice which in its design and/or language: state the keeper is liable under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 where they cannot be held liable."

The Saundersfoot Harbour Empowerment Order 2011 (https://www.legislation.gov.uk/wsi/2011/1565/made)

(https://i.imgur.com/U6k46yU.jpeg)

So, the morons at Britannia have breached their KADOE contract and must be reported to the DVLA.

There is no Keeper liability. As long as the driver is not identified, there is nothing they can do. Besides the fact that the NtK fails PoFA anyway, simply appeal with the following, which will be rejected by Britannia but will require them to issue a POPLA code where this will be quashed at secondary appeal:

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I am the registered keeper. Britannia cannot hold a registered keeper liable for any alleged contravention on land that is under statutory control. As a matter of fact and law, Britannia will be well aware that they cannot use the PoFA provisions because Suandersfoot Harbour is not 'relevant land'.

Just in case you are in doubt about this, I refer you to  The Saundersfoot Harbour Empowerment Order 2011 (https://www.legislation.gov.uk/wsi/2011/1565/made). If you are not yet convinced, I suggest you pass this appeal to a responsible adult at Britannia, preferably one with enough intellectual capacity to understand why you cannot hold the Keeper liable.

If Suandersfoot Harbour wanted to hold owners or keepers liable under Harbour Bylaws, that would be within the landowner's gift and another matter entirely. However, not only is that not pleaded, it is also not legally possible because Britannia is not the Harbour owner and your 'parking charge' is not and never attempts to be a penalty. It is created for NBritannia's own profit (as opposed to a bylaws penalty that goes to the public purse) and Britannia has relied on contract law allegations of breach against the driver only.

The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation of the law of agency. Your NtK can only hold the driver liable. Britannia have no hope at POPLA, so you are urged to save us both a complete waste of time and cancel the PCN.

No need to explain anything else. When you receive the rejection or the request for the drivers identity, show us the letter and I will provide a suitable response. You may as well have some fun with the intellectually malnourished feckwits at Britannia.
Title: Britannia Parking - Failed to make a valid payment - Saundersfoot Harbour
Post by: fkdacam1234 on March 26, 2025, 07:35:26 pm
Hiya, I as the registered keeper received a PCN from Britannia Parking dated 10th March 2025 for failed to make a valid payment.

The ANPR captured the vehicle enter the car park at 12:24:43 and leave at 16:31:57,
and I think them capture the face of the driver even they not disclose.

The driver purchased a pay and display ticket on 12:38 for 3 hours ended at 15:38,
with enter the car reg to the machine and made the payment by contactless card.

Please see the link for the PCN, screen cap from Britannia's website and the pay and display ticket
https://imgur.com/a/Hivwvgb (https://imgur.com/a/Hivwvgb)

Please see the map for where the location is,
however the car park was just newly refurnished thus the signage can't be found in the map
https://maps.app.goo.gl/7cpBtSN2fD8CsQkS7 (https://maps.app.goo.gl/7cpBtSN2fD8CsQkS7)

Would like to ask would is template suitable for this case, please.

Thanks

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I am appealing this Parking Charge Notice as the registered keeper of the vehicle.

Your Notice to Keeper (NtK) fails to comply with all the requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA), meaning you cannot hold me liable for the charge. Partial or even substantial compliance is not sufficient.

It also fails to meet all the mandatory requirements of the BPA/IPC Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP). As you are fully aware, compliance with both PoFA and the PPSCoP is a condition of your KADOE contract with the DVLA, and your failure to adhere to these conditions not only renders this charge invalid but will be highlighted in a formal complaint to the DVLA for investigation.

Your NtK fails to meet the following statutory conditions in order to transfer liability to the keeper, including but not limited to:

• PoFA 9(2)(e)(i): Fails to include the mandatory ‘invitation’ wording for the keeper to pay or name the driver.
• PoFA 9(2)(f): Incorrect payment deadline, failing to allow the full 28 days before further enforcement action.
• PoFA 9(2)(h): Fails to clearly identify the creditor to whom the charge is owed.
• PoFA 9(4): Serious doubt over whether the NtK was posted on the date of issue, as it was received significantly later than expected under the presumption of service.

Since PoFA liability is only enforceable if ALL mandatory conditions are met, and your notice fails multiple key requirements, you cannot lawfully hold me liable for this charge.

Your NtK also fails to meet the standards set out in the PPSCoP, including but not limited to:

• Incorrect payment deadline, failing to allow the required 28-day period before enforcement action.
• Misuse of DVLA data by pursuing a charge where PoFA conditions have not been met.
• Failure to comply with the mandatory conditions of PoFA Schedule 4, which means keeper liability cannot be enforced.
• Failure to clearly and properly identify the legal entity acting as the creditor.
• Doubt over whether the NtK was actually posted on the stated issue date, raising concerns about misleading documentation.

As I fully expect this appeal will inevitably be rejected, regardless of its merit, as that is the standard practice of rogue/cowboy private parking operators, I do not intend to expand on these breaches in this initial appeal. However, if Britannia wish to waste their money funding a full POPLA appeal, where you are bound to fail, then be my guest. At that stage, I will expand on each and every failure in full, including why continuing to process the DVLA data when the NtK itself is non-compliant, Britannia is acting unlawfully.

Alternatively, you can do the sensible thing, save us both a complete waste of time and cancel this unenforceable PCN now.