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Live cases legal advice => Private parking tickets => Topic started by: jjs457 on January 16, 2025, 09:22:38 pm

Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on May 19, 2025, 05:41:00 pm
My bad. @jjs457, please correct accordingly.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: DWMB2 on May 19, 2025, 03:32:50 pm
I am submitting a formal complaint against Civil Parking Office Ltd, an IPC Accredited Operator with DVLA KADOE access, for breaching the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) after obtaining my personal data.

While the Operator may have had reasonable cause at the time of their KADOE request, their subsequent misuse of my data—through conduct that contravenes the PPSCoP—renders that use unlawful. The PPSCoP forms an integral part of the DVLA’s governance framework for data access by private parking firms. Continued access is conditional on compliance.

The DVLA, as data controller, is obliged under UK GDPR and the Data Protection Act 2018 to investigate and take enforcement action when data is misused following release. This complaint is not about whether the data was obtained lawfully at the outset, but whether its subsequent use breached the terms under which it was provided.

I have prepared a supporting statement setting out the nature of the breach and the Operator’s actions, and I request a full investigation into this matter. I have attached the supporting document.

Please acknowledge receipt and confirm the reference number for this complaint.
BPA Accredited
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on May 19, 2025, 03:10:48 pm
+1

You now have grounds for a complaint to the DVLA, based on the operator’s conduct in this case.

Here’s why:

1. Misuse or Misrepresentation of Data Accessed via the DVLA

Private parking companies are granted access to DVLA vehicle keeper data under very strict conditions — namely, they must:

• Use the data only for the purpose of pursuing legitimate parking charges.
• Comply with the law, including the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA).
• Act truthfully and transparently when pursuing charges.

In your case:

• The parking operator issued a non-PoFA Notice to Keeper, meaning they could only pursue the driver, not the Keeper.
• Despite this, they pursued you — the Keeper — and then later falsely claimed that you had identified yourself as the driver, using unverifiable backend data.
• They attempted to construct a false narrative to mislead POPLA by using internal system notes that POPLA rightly rejected as unverified and inconsistent.

This conduct raises serious concerns about whether the operator is:

• Abusing their DVLA access by misusing Keeper data when they know they cannot lawfully pursue the Keeper.
• Failing to meet the "reasonable cause" requirement for accessing Keeper data under Regulation 27 of the Road Vehicles (Registration and Licensing) Regulations 2002.

2. Relevant Precedent for DVLA Complaints

The DVLA has, in the past, sanctioned operators for:

• Pursuing Keeper liability without complying with PoFA.
• Making misleading claims about liability.
• Using DVLA data when there was no legal basis to pursue the Keeper.

If a parking company accesses data and then knowingly misrepresents the legal position or falsely claims that a Keeper identified themselves as the driver — when the written appeal explicitly denies that — this is a breach the terms of their DVLA KADOE (Keeper at Date of Event) contract.

So, you have solid grounds to complain. The operator used DVLA Keeper data despite knowing they could not rely on PoFA, then tried to misrepresent the status of the appellant in bad faith. That is misuse of DVLA data access, and it undermines the purpose of the KADOE contract. A complaint could contribute to regulatory action or even suspension of DVLA access if part of a pattern.

Here’s how to make a DVLA complaint:

• Go to: https://contact.dvla.gov.uk/complaints
• Select: “Making a complaint or compliment about the Vehicles service you have received”
• Enter your personal details, contact details, and vehicle details
• Use the text box to summarise your complaint or insert a covering note
• You will then be able to upload a file (up to 19.5 MB) — this can be your full complaint or supporting evidence
That’s it.

The DVLA is required to record, investigate and respond to every complaint about a private parking company. If everyone who encounters a breach took the time to submit a complaint, we might finally see the DVLA take meaningful action—whether that means curtailing or removing KADOE access altogether.

For the text part of the complaint the webform could use the following:

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I am submitting a formal complaint against Civil Parking Office Ltd, an IPC Accredited Operator with DVLA KADOE access, for breaching the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP) after obtaining my personal data.

While the Operator may have had reasonable cause at the time of their KADOE request, their subsequent misuse of my data—through conduct that contravenes the PPSCoP—renders that use unlawful. The PPSCoP forms an integral part of the DVLA’s governance framework for data access by private parking firms. Continued access is conditional on compliance.

The DVLA, as data controller, is obliged under UK GDPR and the Data Protection Act 2018 to investigate and take enforcement action when data is misused following release. This complaint is not about whether the data was obtained lawfully at the outset, but whether its subsequent use breached the terms under which it was provided.

I have prepared a supporting statement setting out the nature of the breach and the Operator’s actions, and I request a full investigation into this matter. I have attached the supporting document.

Please acknowledge receipt and confirm the reference number for this complaint.

Then you could upload the following as a PDF file for the formal complaint itself:

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SUPPORTING STATEMENT

Complaint to DVLA – Breach of KADOE Contract and PPSCoP

Operator name: Civil Parking Office Ltd
Date of PCN issue: [Insert date of PCN]
Vehicle registration: [Insert your VRM]

I am submitting this complaint to report a misuse of my personal data by Civil Parking Office Ltd, who obtained my keeper details from the DVLA under the KADOE (Keeper At Date Of Event) contract.

Although the parking company may have had reasonable cause to request my data initially, the way they used that data afterwards amounts to unlawful processing. This is because they acted in breach of the Private Parking Single Code of Practice (PPSCoP), which forms part of the framework that regulates how parking companies must behave once they have received keeper data from the DVLA.

The KADOE contract makes clear that keeper data may only be used to pursue an unpaid parking charge in line with the Code of Practice. If a parking company fails to comply with the PPSCoP after receiving DVLA data, their use of that data becomes unlawful, as they are no longer using it for a permitted purpose.

In this case, Civil Parking Office Ltd breached the PPSCoP in the following ways:

• They issued a Notice to Keeper that was not compliant with the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA), meaning they had no legal basis to pursue the Keeper if the driver was not identified.
• Despite this, they pursued me as the Keeper without evidence of who was driving.
• When challenged, they later claimed—falsely and without any reliable evidence—that I had identified myself as the driver during my appeal.
• They submitted backend system notes to POPLA as “proof” that I had selected the “driver” option, despite providing no metadata or verifiable audit trail to support this claim.
• Their own initial appeal rejection made no mention of me identifying as the driver, confirming that they had treated me as the Keeper at that time.
• Their behaviour was found to be misleading and lacking in evidence by the POPLA assessor, who upheld my appeal.

The POPLA assessor stated:

I can also see that the appellant’s text within the appeal clearly states that they were appealing as the registered keeper of the vehicle... I cannot be satisfied that the snippet of information was from when the appellant’s appeal was submitted as they have not provided any identifiable information from when the appeal was made to show that it was put forward by the appellant.

These actions demonstrate a serious breach of the PPSCoP and a misuse of DVLA data. The operator’s attempt to misrepresent my status and pursue the charge in bad faith shows a clear disregard for the standards required under the Code. As a result, Civil Parking Office Ltd is no longer entitled to use the keeper data they obtained from the DVLA, because the purpose for which it was provided—lawful pursuit of a parking charge under the Code—no longer applies.

The DVLA remains the Data Controller for the data it releases under KADOE, and is therefore responsible for ensuring that personal data is not misused by third parties. I am therefore asking the DVLA to investigate this breach and to take appropriate action under the terms of the KADOE contract.

This may include:

• Confirming that a breach has occurred
• Taking enforcement action against the operator
• Suspending or terminating their KADOE access if warranted

I have attached relevant supporting material with this statement. Please confirm receipt and provide a reference for this complaint. I am also happy to provide further information if required.

Name: [INSERT YOUR NAME]
Date: [INSERT DATE]
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: DWMB2 on May 19, 2025, 09:57:53 am
Excellent result.

We give POPLA a good bit of stick (usually deserved) on here, but credit where it's due, this is a good and fair-minded assessment from the assessor in this case.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on May 19, 2025, 09:51:44 am
After waiting 111 days to hear back from POPLA the appeal has been successful.

The rationale from the assessor:

"I am allowing this appeal, with my reasoning outlined below: By issuing a parking charge notice to the appellant the operator has implied that a breach of the terms and conditions has occurred. When an appeal comes to POPLA, the burden of proof begins with a parking operator to demonstrate that the appellant has breached the restrictions of the car park as they claim. The Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012 is a law that allows parking operators to transfer the liability to the registered keeper in the event that the driver or hirer is not identified. Parking operators must follow certain rules including warning the registered keeper that they will be liable for the charge if the parking operator is not provided with the name and address of the driver. In this case, the PCN does not mention this and there has been no admittance of driving by the appellant. Therefore, the parking operator has failed to transfer the liability onto the registered keeper. I note that the operator has provided a screenshot of the system, showing that the liable party was set to driver within the online appeal. The appellant has disputed this within their comments and stated that there is no metadata evidence to show that this was their appeal. I can also see that the appellant’s text within the appeal, clearly states that they were appealing as the registered keeper of the vehicle. In this case, I cannot be satisfied that the snippet of information was from when the appellant’s appeal was submitted as they have not provided any identifiable information from when the appeal was made to show that it was put forward by the appellant. The appellant has raised other grounds in their appeal, but as I am allowing the appeal, it is not necessary for me to address these."

Thanks for all your help @b789 and @DWMB2
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 28, 2025, 07:28:45 pm
Updated to include that very valid point by @DWMB2 above.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: DWMB2 on January 28, 2025, 07:23:48 pm
If there's space, I'd be minded to add words to the effect that a good faith reading of the text of the appeal would make clear that the appellant was challenging the charge in their capacity as the keeper, and contains an explicit statement that they are not revealing who was driving.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 28, 2025, 07:20:26 pm
As you can only use the useless webform to submit your response to the operators response pack, just copy and paste this as your response:

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The operator claims that I selected “driver” during my appeal. This is categorically false. The appeal was submitted solely as the Keeper under legal advisement, and this was witnessed. The text of my appeal clearly shows that I was challenging the charge in my capacity as the Keeper. A good faith reading of the appeal would make this obvious, as it explicitly states that I am not revealing who was driving. The operator’s attempt to claim otherwise is disingenuous and appears to be an attempt to manipulate the facts in their favour.

The operator’s so-called “evidence” is nothing more than an unverifiable backend system log entry. It contains no metadata or audit trail to prove its authenticity and has likely been forged or tampered with, given the operator’s history as an untrustworthy firm of ex-clampers.

If the operator genuinely believed I had identified myself as the driver, why did they not raise this in their initial rejection letter? Their rejection explicitly treated me as the Keeper, stating: “Please note, Schedule 4 of PoFA 2012 was not referenced within the Notice to Keeper. Our client Civil Parking Office Ltd are entitled to write to the Keeper in regards to driver information.” There was no mention whatsoever that I had allegedly identified myself as the driver. This omission is critical because if they truly believed I had “outed” myself as the driver, they would have raised it immediately. The fact that this claim only appears now, at the POPLA stage, suggests desperation and bad faith on the part of the operator.

The operator’s backend log entry stating “Liable Party set to: Driver” is not proof of anything. It is a self-serving piece of evidence that could easily have been manipulated after the appeal was submitted. There is no independent verification, no metadata, and no audit trail to confirm the accuracy of this log. Even if such a selection had been made in error, this does not constitute clear evidence of driver identity. As confirmed in persuasive case law, including VCS v Edward (2023), no assumption or inference can be made about the Keeper being the driver without unequivocal evidence. The operator has failed to provide such evidence.

Furthermore, the operator’s evidence of ANPR images fails to demonstrate a parking contravention or the driver’s identity. These images merely show entry and exit times, not proof of parking, nor proof that the terms and conditions were accepted by the driver. Without evidence of a specific parking breach or driver identification, their case is baseless.

I am fully aware that POPLA’s decision is not binding on me as the appellant, and I am prepared to defend this matter in court if necessary. In a court of law, the operator would be required to produce robust evidence under strict scrutiny. Any attempts to manipulate or forge evidence would be treated very seriously by the court.

In summary:

1. The operator’s claim that I selected “driver” is categorically false and unproven.

2. A good faith reading of my appeal text makes it clear that I was challenging the charge as the Keeper and explicitly stated that I was not revealing who was driving.

3. Their so-called “evidence” is unreliable, unverifiable, and likely manipulated.

4. If they genuinely believed I had identified myself as the driver, this would have been raised in their rejection letter, but it was not.

5. Their ANPR evidence fails to prove a parking contravention or identify the driver.

6. As the Keeper, I deny any liability for this charge.

I request that POPLA upholds my appeal and cancels this Parking Charge Notice.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 28, 2025, 07:02:02 pm
This is what they have provided, please see attached.

The redacted information is all matching to the details of the registered keeper. The screenshot shows the dropdown options and then the final page shows the backend of their information. It says "Customer submitted appeal online" which is true. It then says "Liable party set to driver" but to me that does not confirm that the registered keeper selected the option driver. That could be an automatic result of the form being filled in.

As I say I was witness to the form being filled in and am sure registered keeper was selected. However we have no record of that. No email was provided with confirmation of details and we have tried logging on to the system but it provides no record of the appeal just a way to pay the PCN.

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Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 28, 2025, 05:26:34 pm
What is the evidence they have submitted that supposedly proves their assertion that the appellant selected the "driver" option in the dropdown menu? Have they provided a screenshot or what?
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 28, 2025, 04:57:36 pm
Hi

The appeal was filed with POPLA as recommended above via the other option and using a PDF rather than filling in a form.

The operator has now responded with a long document of evidence and the following statement.

"On the date of the parking event, the appellant’s vehicle entered the private land at 16:34 and remained until 17:25. The terms and conditions, clearly displayed at the entrance and throughout the multi-level car park, require drivers to purchase a valid parking session via a payment terminal or the cashless platform Avalon Pay within 10 minutes of entry. The driver failed to make the required payment, breaching these terms, and a parking charge was subsequently issued by post (non-POFA). The appellant, appealing as the registered keeper, submitted a template appeal referencing POFA 2012. However, this parking charge does not rely on POFA. Instead, the operator must demonstrate that the appellant was the driver. The appeal was submitted via the operator’s portal (www.paymypcn.net), where the appellant explicitly selected the role of "driver." Evidence to support this is enclosed. In civil matters, the burden of proof is based on the balance of probabilities. The evidence strongly supports that the appellant was the driver, and no contradictory evidence has been provided. While the appellant refuses to name the driver, they could have identified themselves as the registered keeper only but instead took affirmative action to confirm their role as the driver. If POPLA does not accept this as sufficient evidence that it is more likely than not the appellant was the driver, it risks creating a loophole for appellants to avoid paying legitimate charges. POPLA’s remit is to assess the lawfulness of charges and determine whether a breach has occurred. In this case, the facts confirm that the driver parked for 51 minutes without paying the required tariff, breaching the terms and conditions and making them liable for the contractual charges."

They are claiming that the keeper chose the option of driver on the drop down form when appealing the original PCN. Their supporting document contains fields with the registered keeper information and the driver information.

I know for a fact, as I was a witness, that the registered keeper selected the registered keeper option from the drop down and not the driver option as this was very clearly advised in an earlier post. However it looks like they have copied the details across from the registered keeper and are claiming this was done by the registered keeper themselves, which I do not believe to be the case.

I am guessing that now POPLA will take that as read and decide based on that. Any advice on how to fight back on this basis? We do not have a copy of the appeal that was submitted or anything as far as I can see.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: DWMB2 on January 24, 2025, 02:38:01 pm
Yes, always select 'other', let the appeal document make your points for you rather than POPLA's form. Ideally create a PDF document to upload rather than the text box in the form.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 24, 2025, 02:35:04 pm
Yes, they are trying their luck. I would normally put together a POPLA appeal that covers a multitude of other points, as the appellant only has to succeed on a single one, whereas the operator has to succeed on all the points raised.

However, this is such a blatant abuse and evidence of unlawful behaviour that a single issue POPLA appeal would succeed anyway. Appeal only as the Keeper with the following:

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POPLA Appeal: [Insert POPLA Reference Number]
Appellant: [Your Name or "Registered Keeper"]
Operator: Civil Parking Office Ltd
PCN Reference Number: [Insert PCN Number]


Appeal Grounds

1. The Notice to Keeper Is Not PoFA Compliant—No Keeper Liability

The operator has openly admitted that their Notice to Keeper (NtK) was not issued under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). As a result, the operator has no legal basis to transfer liability for the alleged parking charge to the registered keeper.

As confirmed in my appeal to the operator, I am the registered keeper of the vehicle, and no admission has been made regarding the identity of the driver. The operator has provided no evidence to establish the driver's identity, which is their burden to prove if they wish to pursue this claim.

Let me be clear: the POPLA assessor cannot assume or infer that the registered keeper was the driver. This would be a breach of the assessor’s role and contrary to well-established legal principles, including VCS v Edward (2023), which clarifies that no assumption or inference can be made unless the operator provides clear, unequivocal evidence identifying the driver.

The operator has failed to provide such evidence, and their case must fail on this point alone.

2. Misleading Assertions in the Rejection Letter

Despite acknowledging their NtK is not PoFA compliant, the operator’s rejection letter falsely asserts:

"As you have breached the terms and conditions of parking, you are now required to pay the contractually agreed charges as stated on our signage."

This language is deliberately misleading, as it attempts to suggest that liability has automatically transferred to me, the registered keeper. Such tactics are both unlawful and unethical, as they exploit the ignorance of recipients who may not be familiar with their legal rights.

3. Failure to Identify the Driver

Since the NtK is not PoFA compliant, the operator’s claim relies entirely on identifying the driver. However, no evidence has been provided to establish who was driving the vehicle at the time. Without such evidence, the operator has no case.

It is not my responsibility to identify the driver, nor is there any legal obligation on me to do so. The operator’s failure to meet their evidentiary burden is fatal to their claim.

4. Lack of Evidence of a Parking Contravention

The operator’s reliance on Automated Number Plate Recognition (ANPR) images showing the vehicle entering and exiting the site does not demonstrate a parking contravention. There is no evidence provided of:

• The vehicle being parked, as opposed to merely passing through.

• Any specific terms of parking being agreed to or breached.

Without clear evidence of a parking event and breach of terms, this claim lacks credibility.

Pre-Empting Incorrect Assumptions by the POPLA Assessor

I must emphasise that no assumption or inference can be made regarding the registered keeper being the driver. Such assumptions are contrary to legal precedent, including the Parking on Private Land Appeals (POPLA) Annual Report 2018, which confirms that assessors must not make unfounded inferences.

If the assessor fails to recognise this point, the decision would be procedurally flawed and legally invalid.

Conclusion

This operator’s claim is legally baseless, as they have failed to:

• Issue a PoFA-compliant NtK to transfer liability to the registered keeper.

• Provide any evidence identifying the driver.

• Prove a parking contravention occurred.

The operator’s behaviour in this matter is both incompetent and predatory. I request that POPLA cancel this Parking Charge Notice and strongly criticise the operator for their misleading conduct and complete disregard for established legal standards.

Yours faithfully,

[Your Name or "Registered Keeper"]

Thanks for this. My friend has noted that it asks them to select an option when filing an appeal with POPLA. Would you put this under 'other' or one of the other grounds for appeal? We just want to make sure my friend has the best chance of success.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: DWMB2 on January 24, 2025, 01:26:23 pm
I agree with working on the assumption of incompetence when spelling out one's points explicitly, I just think that adopting a tone that suggests you believe the assessor to be incompetent is less likely to get him "on side", which is ultimately one's aim when submitting an appeal.

The example you have shown demonstrates an assessor wrongly interpreting PoFA, but he doesn't seem to make any assumptions as to the identity of the driver, which is what I was referring to.

The same point can be made in a way less likely to rub them up the wrong way, without losing its rigour.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 24, 2025, 01:04:54 pm
Pre-Empting Incorrect Assumptions by the POPLA Assessor
This might be a matter of personal approach, but I'd personally avoid wording that might unnecessarily p*ss off the assessor, who you want to be on your side. I would perhaps word this heading along the lines of "No assumptions or inferences may be drawn". Perhaps I've been lucky with assessors, but most of the assessments I've seen recently have avoided drawing unreasonable inferences.

My approach would be to lead the assessor directly to the correct conclusion, not berate him on the assumption he'll make the wrong decision without your help (as tempting as that is  ;D )

Ya think? Have a read of this very recent POPLA failure:

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PPC: Horizon Parking Ltd
Location: Tesco Salford Quays

Main thread: https://forums.moneysavingexpert.com/discussion/6560681/driver-doesnt-want-to-pay-horizon-fine-but-registered-keeper-does/p1

Decision: Unsuccessful

Assessor Name: Jason Cookson-Dean

Assessor summary of operator case
The parking operator has issued a parking charge notice for exceeding the maximum stay period.

Assessor summary of your case
The appellant has raised the following points from their grounds of appeal: • The notice to keeper is not compliant with the Protection of Freedoms Act (PoFA) 2012, as the liability has been transferred one day too early. • The notice to keeper does not have specific wording as set out in PoFA. • The notice to keeper was issued on 3 October and presumed given to keeper on 7 October and the 28 days would start on 8 October. After reviewing the parking operator’s evidence, the appellant expands on their grounds of appeal advising that the PCN is not PoFA compliant, and that the operator has never used PoFA in previous PCN’s. The appellant has provided a part screenshot of the wording on the PCN as evidence to support their appeal. The above evidence will be considered in making my decision.

Assessor supporting rational for decision
The appellant has identified as the keeper of the vehicle on the day of the parking event. As such, I am considering the appellant’s liability for the PCN, as the keeper. For an operator to transfer liability of unpaid parking charges from the driver of the vehicle to the registered keeper of the vehicle, the regulations laid out in PoFA must be adhered to. The British Parking Association (BPA) monitors how operators treat motorists and has its own Code of Practice setting out the criteria operators must meet and comply with. In its code of practice section 21.16 it states: “If the keeper does not reply within 28 days, or refuses to give enough details about the driver, under Schedule 4 of POFA you are able to pursue the keeper for the unpaid parking charge.” Paragraph 9 (2) (f) (ii) of PoFA 2102 it states: “(f)warn the keeper that if, after the period of 28 days beginning with the day after that on which the notice is given”…“the creditor does not know both the name of the driver and a current address for service for the driver, the creditor will (if all the applicable conditions under this Schedule are met) have the right to recover from the keeper so much of that amount as remains unpaid.” The appellant has provided a copy of the wording on the PCN as evidence. The day the notice was given is the date the PCN was issued. The second working day is the date when the PCN is presumed to be delivered to the keeper. The operator has issued the PCN on Thursday 3 October 2024, PoFA would mean that the 28 day period would begin on Friday 4 October 2024. The operator has stated that it would start on the second working day which would be Monday 7 October 2024. The wording on this PCN allows the keeper more time to respond than PoFA requires. Having viewed the notice to keeper issued to the appellant I am satisfied that the operator has complied with Schedule 4 paragraph 9 of PoFA 2012, and that liability of the parking charge was successfully transferred to the keeper at the time of the event. POPLA is a single stage appeal service, we are impartial and independent of the sector. We consider the evidence provided by both parties to assess whether the PCN has been issued correctly by the parking operator and to determine if the driver has complied with the terms and conditions for the use of the car park or site. Our remit only extends to allowing or refusing an appeal. The parking operator has provided photos of the signs at the car park which state that there is a maximum 20-minute stay. The signs also say that a PCN of £70 will be issued for not complying. It is the responsibility of the motorist when entering a car park that they make themselves aware of the signs and what the restrictions are. The operator has provided Automatic Number Plate Recognition (ANPR) images of the appellants vehicle arriving at 09:57 and leaving one hour and 12 minutes later. As this exceeds the maximum 20-minute stay, the driver has not followed the terms of the site and the parking operator has issued the PCN. After considering the evidence from both parties, the driver has exceeded the maximum 20-minute stay and therefore did not comply with the terms and conditions of the site. As such, I am satisfied the parking charge has been issued correctly and I must refuse the appeal. Any questions relating to payment of the parking charge should be directed to the operator.

I always work on the assumption that all POPLA assessors are feckwits and morons, just like Jason Cookson-Dean. Starting from that viewpoint and explaining the law to the assessor assists in helping them with their decision. Remember, POPLA is not an "independent" service. It is funded by the charges they make to the operators. They have a history of rejecting appeals on incorrect interpretations of the law, as exampled above, presumably to keep the operators happy enough to keep paying for the assessments.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: DWMB2 on January 24, 2025, 12:30:35 pm
Pre-Empting Incorrect Assumptions by the POPLA Assessor
This might be a matter of personal approach, but I'd personally avoid wording that might unnecessarily p*ss off the assessor, who you want to be on your side. I would perhaps word this heading along the lines of "No assumptions or inferences may be drawn". Perhaps I've been lucky with assessors, but most of the assessments I've seen recently have avoided drawing unreasonable inferences.

My approach would be to lead the assessor directly to the correct conclusion, not berate him on the assumption he'll make the wrong decision without your help (as tempting as that is  ;D )
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 24, 2025, 12:17:09 pm
Yes, they are trying their luck. I would normally put together a POPLA appeal that covers a multitude of other points, as the appellant only has to succeed on a single one, whereas the operator has to succeed on all the points raised.

However, this is such a blatant abuse and evidence of unlawful behaviour that a single issue POPLA appeal would succeed anyway. Appeal only as the Keeper with the following:

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POPLA Appeal: [Insert POPLA Reference Number]
Appellant: [Your Name or "Registered Keeper"]
Operator: Civil Parking Office Ltd
PCN Reference Number: [Insert PCN Number]


Appeal Grounds

1. The Notice to Keeper Is Not PoFA Compliant—No Keeper Liability

The operator has openly admitted that their Notice to Keeper (NtK) was not issued under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (PoFA). As a result, the operator has no legal basis to transfer liability for the alleged parking charge to the registered keeper.

As confirmed in my appeal to the operator, I am the registered keeper of the vehicle, and no admission has been made regarding the identity of the driver. The operator has provided no evidence to establish the driver's identity, which is their burden to prove if they wish to pursue this claim.

Let me be clear: the POPLA assessor cannot assume or infer that the registered keeper was the driver. This would be a breach of the assessor’s role and contrary to well-established legal principles, including VCS v Edward (2023), which clarifies that no assumption or inference can be made unless the operator provides clear, unequivocal evidence identifying the driver.

The operator has failed to provide such evidence, and their case must fail on this point alone.

2. Misleading Assertions in the Rejection Letter

Despite acknowledging their NtK is not PoFA compliant, the operator’s rejection letter falsely asserts:

"As you have breached the terms and conditions of parking, you are now required to pay the contractually agreed charges as stated on our signage."

This language is deliberately misleading, as it attempts to suggest that liability has automatically transferred to me, the registered keeper. Such tactics are both unlawful and unethical, as they exploit the ignorance of recipients who may not be familiar with their legal rights.

3. Failure to Identify the Driver

Since the NtK is not PoFA compliant, the operator’s claim relies entirely on identifying the driver. However, no evidence has been provided to establish who was driving the vehicle at the time. Without such evidence, the operator has no case.

It is not my responsibility to identify the driver, nor is there any legal obligation on me to do so. The operator’s failure to meet their evidentiary burden is fatal to their claim.

4. Lack of Evidence of a Parking Contravention

The operator’s reliance on Automated Number Plate Recognition (ANPR) images showing the vehicle entering and exiting the site does not demonstrate a parking contravention. There is no evidence provided of:

• The vehicle being parked, as opposed to merely passing through.

• Any specific terms of parking being agreed to or breached.

Without clear evidence of a parking event and breach of terms, this claim lacks credibility.

Pre-Empting Incorrect Assumptions by the POPLA Assessor

I must emphasise that no assumption or inference can be made regarding the registered keeper being the driver. Such assumptions are contrary to legal precedent, including the Parking on Private Land Appeals (POPLA) Annual Report 2018, which confirms that assessors must not make unfounded inferences.

If the assessor fails to recognise this point, the decision would be procedurally flawed and legally invalid.

Conclusion

This operator’s claim is legally baseless, as they have failed to:

• Issue a PoFA-compliant NtK to transfer liability to the registered keeper.

• Provide any evidence identifying the driver.

• Prove a parking contravention occurred.

The operator’s behaviour in this matter is both incompetent and predatory. I request that POPLA cancel this Parking Charge Notice and strongly criticise the operator for their misleading conduct and complete disregard for established legal standards.

Yours faithfully,

[Your Name or "Registered Keeper"]
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 24, 2025, 09:36:06 am
I will work on the assumption that what has been shown is the original NtK:

Easy one to defeat... as long as the unknown drivers identity is not revealed. There is no legal obligation on the known keeper (the recipient of the Notice to Keeper (NtK)) to reveal the identity of the unknown driver and no inference or assumptions can be made.

The NtK is not compliant with all the requirements of PoFA which means that if the unknown driver is not identified, they cannot transfer liability for the charge from the unknown driver to the known keeper.

Use the following as your appeal. No need to embellish or remove anything from it:

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I am the keeper of the vehicle and I dispute your 'parking charge'. I deny any liability or contractual agreement and I will be making a complaint about your predatory conduct to your client landowner.

As your Notice to Keeper (NtK) does not fully comply with ALL the requirements of PoFA 2012, you are unable to hold the keeper of the vehicle liable for the charge. Partial or even substantial compliance is not sufficient. There will be no admission as to who was driving and no inference or assumptions can be drawn. CPO has relied on contract law allegations of breach against the driver only.

The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation of the law of agency. Your NtK can only hold the driver liable. CPO have no hope at POPLA, so you are urged to save us both a complete waste of time and cancel the PCN.

Don’t modify the wording or try to overthink this. Just make sure when selecting any options/menus that the appellant is ONLY appealing as the Keeper or “other”.

Thanks again. I recommended that my friend use this text verbatim and they did. The appeal has been rejected with the following letter attached as an explanation. They still reference the driver but with no evidence of who the driver was.

Any advice on next steps? Are they just trying their luck?

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Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 17, 2025, 11:13:36 am
Apologies - yes this is the first notice that has been received.

I will pass on the text that you have provided to my friend and ensure it is submitted as the appeal verbatim.

Thank you for your help b789 - much appreciated.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 17, 2025, 08:02:42 am
I will work on the assumption that what has been shown is the original NtK:

Easy one to defeat... as long as the unknown drivers identity is not revealed. There is no legal obligation on the known keeper (the recipient of the Notice to Keeper (NtK)) to reveal the identity of the unknown driver and no inference or assumptions can be made.

The NtK is not compliant with all the requirements of PoFA which means that if the unknown driver is not identified, they cannot transfer liability for the charge from the unknown driver to the known keeper.

Use the following as your appeal. No need to embellish or remove anything from it:

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I am the keeper of the vehicle and I dispute your 'parking charge'. I deny any liability or contractual agreement and I will be making a complaint about your predatory conduct to your client landowner.

As your Notice to Keeper (NtK) does not fully comply with ALL the requirements of PoFA 2012, you are unable to hold the keeper of the vehicle liable for the charge. Partial or even substantial compliance is not sufficient. There will be no admission as to who was driving and no inference or assumptions can be drawn. CPO has relied on contract law allegations of breach against the driver only.

The registered keeper cannot be presumed or inferred to have been the driver, nor pursued under some twisted interpretation of the law of agency. Your NtK can only hold the driver liable. CPO have no hope at POPLA, so you are urged to save us both a complete waste of time and cancel the PCN.

Don’t modify the wording or try to overthink this. Just make sure when selecting any options/menus that the appellant is ONLY appealing as the Keeper or “other”.
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 17, 2025, 07:57:49 am
Please read the questions being asked and answer them.

Is what you have shown us, the original NtK or is it a reminder?
Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 17, 2025, 07:25:01 am
Apologies I thought I had uploaded that but was struggling. Please see below

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Title: Re: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: b789 on January 16, 2025, 11:47:45 pm
Before the Keeper does anything, show us the back of the Notice to Keeper (NtK) and confirm that what has been shown is the original NtK and not a follow up reminder.

Going on about the photos is not relevant and not going to achieve anything. They are typical ANPR images from which the VRM is extracted. A dead end as far as any appeal is concerned.

If that is he original NtK then it is not PoFA compliant which means that the Keeper cannot be liable, only the driver. There is no legal obligation on the Keeper to identify the driver so no blabbing “I did this or that”. The Keeper refers to the driver in the third person, “The driver did this or that”. Don’t tell ‘em your name Pike!

The only way the operator could know the drivers identity is if the Keeper blabs it, inadvertently or otherwise.
Title: PCN from Civil Parking Office at Sussex House (formerly Morrisons) Crawley
Post by: jjs457 on January 16, 2025, 09:22:38 pm
Posting on behalf of a friend looking for some advice.

As registered keeper of the vehicle they have received the attached parking charge notice today for an incident on 23 December 2024 at a car park in Crawley.

They are wanting to appeal the notice due to the evidence photos not being legible and no clarity on it being their vehicle. The only thing the image shows as 'evidence' is headlights and taillights. The licence plate is not visible at all.

Interested to hear any insights.

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