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Dear Reading Borough Council,
The alleged contravention did not occur.
The authority accept that there was a valid permit in the car, it's just that it and its holder had fallen off the windscreen. The only questions are therefore is someone at fault and if so who and should this give rise to a penalty charge?
The authority may not know that permits are supplied by the council together with holders whose conditions of use require the permit to be displayed, implicitly in the holder provided.
In this case, I displayed the permit in the holder provided and it was the adhesive of this holder which failed, probably due to hot weather.
On the day in question the council's holder failed and there was nothing that the driver could have done to prevent this happening. It would be unfair and unreasonable to hold the keeper liable for this failure. It is ultimately the council's responsibility to provide a permit holder that is fit for purpose. The PCN must be therefore be cancelled.
Furthermore the Notice to Owner wrongly states that if no payment or representations are made, the penalty will increase by 50% and a charge certificate will be served. The regulations require the Notice to Owner to state that the authority may take these steps, thus indicating a discretion. The regulations do not permit the authority to state that these steps will be taken, as if that were a foregone conclusion. This is a procedural impropriety in light of which the PCN must be cancelled in any event.
Yours faithfully,
I suspect on the will / may issue the Notice of Rejection will provide a failure to consider, that then gives you an additional point for the tribunal. As I dislike Reading, I'll be happy to represent you at the tribunal if need be.