What a pity you didn't come here before any of this was challenged. The PoC of the claim are in breach of CPR 16.4 and this should have been struck out at allocation stage. You have submitted a defence to a claim that has no defined cause of action.
Was there no an order issued after the set aside that instructed was you had to do and by when? Have you been given the right to submit a new defence? They one submitted was not a proper defence and was more in response to the set aside order.
If you are allowed to resubmit your defence I strongly suggest you submit the following and attach the draft order:
IN THE COUNTY COURT
Claim No: [Claim Number]
BETWEEN:
[Claimant's Full Name]
Claimant
- and -
[Defendant's Full Name]
Defendant
DEFENCE
1. The Defendant denies any liability for this claim and the Claimant is put to strict proof otherwise.
2. There is a lack of precise detail in the Particulars of Claim (PoC) in respect of the factual and legal allegations made against the Defendant such that the PoC do not comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a).
3. The Defendant is unable to plead properly to the PoC because:
(a) The contract referred to is not detailed or attached to the PoC in accordance with CPR PD 16.7.5;
(b) The PoC do not state the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is/are relied on;
(c ) The PoC do not set out the reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts the defendant has
breached the contract (or contracts);
(d) The PoC do not state with sufficient particularity exactly where the breach occurred, the exact time when the breach occurred and how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked before the parking charge was allegedly incurred;
(e) The PoC do not state exactly how the claim for statutory interest is calculated;
(f) The PoC do not state what proportion of the claim is the parking charge and what proportion is damages;
(g) The PoC states that the Claimant is suing the defendant as the driver or the keeper. The claimant obviously knows whether the defendant is being sued as the driver or the keeper and should not be permitted to plead alternative causes of action.
4. The Defendant has attached to this defence a copy of an order made at another court which the allocating judge ought to make at this stage so that the Defendant can then know and understand the case which he/she/it faces and can then respond properly to the claim.
Statement of truth
I believe that the facts stated in this Defence are true. I understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without an honest belief in its truth.
Signed:
Date:
You should attach the following as a draft order for the judge to use:
Of the Court's own initiative and upon reading the particulars of claim and the defence
AND the court being of the view that there is a lack of precise detail in the particulars of claim in respect of the factual and legal allegations made against the defendant such that the particulars of claim do not comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a)
It is Ordered that:
1. Unless the Claimant do, within 14 days of service of this order, file at court a further
particulars of claim which complies with CPR 16.4(1)(a) and which sets out:
(i) the precise and concise factual allegations it makes against the Defendant and
(ii) the factual or legal [or both] basis of its claim and
(iii) exactly how its claim is calculated (if there is a claim for a fixed sum)
then the claim shall be struck out.[/indent]
2. For the avoidance of doubt the further particulars of claim must:
(a) refer to and have attached to them (clearly marked "A") a copy of the contract (or contracts) between the claimant and defendant relied on
(b) set out the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is (or are) relied on.
(c ) have attached to them (clearly marked "B") a copy of each of the PCNs which forms the basis of this claim.
(d) must state by what method each of the PCNs was first brought to the attention of the defendant. For example, attaching it to the defendant's vehicle.
(e) in respect of each alleged breach of contract, set out the reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts that the defendant was in breach of contract.
(f) in respect of each alleged breach of contract, set out (i) the full postal address of where the breach took place and (ii) the precise date and time of the alleged breach and (iii) exactly how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked before the parking charge was incurred.
(g) in respect of each alleged breach of contract, must state whether the defendant is sued as the driver of the vehicle or the keeper of the vehicle
(h) not plead that the defendant is sued in the alternative as the driver of the vehicle or as the keeper of the vehicle.
(i) state what amount of the claim is the claim for non-payment of the PCN and what amount of the claim is the claim for damages.
(j) must explain the factual or legal (or both) basis of the claim for damages.
(k) set out a precise calculation of the claim for statutory interest up to the date of issue to include the date interest started running.
3. Permission to either party to apply to set aside, vary or stay this order by an application on notice which must be filed at this Court no more than 5 days after service of thisorder, failing which no such application may be made.