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Live cases legal advice => Private parking tickets => Topic started by: VicMbe on August 04, 2026, 10:50:46 am

Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 09, 2026, 07:42:49 pm
Sorry it was AI generated as i couldnt find the template so just wanted to check!

Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: jfollows on August 09, 2026, 10:33:50 am
I wouldn’t ask for
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copies of all documents required under POFA Schedule 4
but otherwise looks fine to me. Why would you want these documents? In some perverted way they will possibly say that they have satisfied the requirements of PoFA by doing so, even though that’s not true, and it’s just a reason another incompetent POPLA assessor might side with them.
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 09, 2026, 10:00:58 am
How does this look?

I am appealing Parking Charge Notice PCN170390 as the hirer and long‑term lessee of vehicle BT24EAM.

Under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (POFA), liability can only be transferred to a vehicle hirer if the operator provides all documents required by paragraphs 13 and 14. These include a copy of the hire or lease agreement, a copy of the statement of liability signed by the hirer, a copy of the original Notice to Keeper, and a fully POFA‑compliant Notice to Hirer. None of these documents have been provided. Because these statutory requirements have not been met, liability cannot be transferred to me as the hirer and I am not liable for this charge.

POFA does not impose any obligation on a hirer or keeper to identify the driver, and I am not confirming who was driving at the time. The dashboard image appears to show a pay‑and‑display ticket, but I cannot confirm this with certainty. In any event, POFA non‑compliance alone prevents keeper or hirer liability.

As you have not met the statutory conditions required to pursue the hirer, this Parking Charge Notice must be cancelled. If you disagree, please provide copies of all documents required under POFA Schedule 4, evidence of full POFA compliance, and a POPLA code so the matter can be escalated.

Yours faithfully,
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: DWMB2 on August 05, 2026, 01:54:28 pm
That makes little difference in this case. The registered keeper of the car is still the finance company (or some other intermediary), who are hiring the car to you on condition of you making lease payments.
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 05, 2026, 01:50:42 pm
Sorry.  The car is a lease car on finance from a company for 3 years.  Instead of it being hired like as a holiday hire car. Sorry if that comes across stupid but dont know how else to explain it!
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: DWMB2 on August 05, 2026, 12:36:47 pm
What do you mean by a "privately owned lease"?
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 05, 2026, 11:47:16 am
Does this make a difference if the car is privately owned lease?
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: Sander333 on August 05, 2026, 11:42:42 am
Then you go for the hire and lack of documentation if that is the case. The machine there does take both cash and card so if the parking was paid for by card then this may assist as the sign does not mention that a pay and display ticket must be displayed.
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 05, 2026, 09:35:20 am
Thank you for these.   

I did not receive anything else apart from the PCN!   I think it is likely that a ticket was purchased but there is no way of proving it unfortunatly as the car has been cleaned!
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: Sander333 on August 04, 2026, 08:32:50 pm
Just as a matter of interest not withstanding the question of hirers paperwork was a ticket purchased as it appears that there is something displayed on the windscreen.This company has a large number of car parks in the Swansea area. I have yet to receive any information of how litigious they are at present.
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: jfollows on August 04, 2026, 12:30:17 pm
Thanks, but the important question above is
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Did you receive any other documents with the Notice to Hirer?

Such as
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(a)a statement signed by or on behalf of the vehicle-hire firm to the effect that at the material time the vehicle was hired to a named person under a hire agreement;

(b)a copy of the hire agreement; and

(c)a copy of a statement of liability signed by the hirer under that hire agreement.

If not, and I bet you didn’t, there’s an appeal as long as the driver is not identified that the hirer can not be liable because the PCN does not comply with the requirement of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2012/9/schedule/4 ) to transfer liability.

You will find a suitable appeal if you search the forum, by all means post it here before submitting for confirmation.
Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 04, 2026, 12:14:45 pm
Thanks so much

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Title: Re: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: InterCity125 on August 04, 2026, 11:03:17 am
Did you receive any other documents with the Notice to Hirer?

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Title: PCN Eternity Fire and Security LTD Parking without clearly displaying a valid ticket. Mumbles Pier
Post by: VicMbe on August 04, 2026, 10:50:46 am
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Good Morning,
   Can anyone offer advice on the attached PCN which has been received after the original request was sent to the lease company.  Would appreciate any thoughts!