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Representation Grounds*
What are the reasons (grounds) for your challenge? Select all that apply. You can provide more information on the next screen.
Any other ground
I was not the owner of the vehicle
Procedural improprietyThe contravention did not occur
The order was invalidThe PCN has been paidThe penalty charge exceeded the amount
The vehicle was taken without my consent
We are a hire firm
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Draft:
1. The PCN does not particularise which vehicles therefore does not establish any grounds for the alleged contravention to have taken place.
2. Similarly, neither does the video support your allegation.
3. The PCN is missing mandatory information as provided at Para. 4 (8 ) (v) of
https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukla/2003/3/section/4/enacted(v)that, if the penalty charge is not paid before the end of the 28 day period, an increased charge may be payable.
Clearly, this refers to Para. 4 (8 ) (iii):
(iii)that the penalty charge must be paid before the end of the period of 28 days beginning with the date of the notice;
Therefore, it follows that the statement: "If you fail to pay the Penalty Charge or make representations before the end of a period of 28 days beginning with the date of service of this notice an increased charge of £240 may be payable” adds to the lack of clarity by its omission. Even on its own, whether the required information was included or not, it is also arguable that it conflates the two periods using the word "or" which many would view as being conjunctive. Furthermore, even if the statement were to be interpreted disjunctively, there is still no clarity due to the missing information. So, it follows that it cannot possibly be interpreted disjunctively.
In light of the above, please cancel the PCN.
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